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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Taboo Strikes VI
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Piracy
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Climbing to the crows nest
Disguise: Looking like a sailor
Intimidation: Threatening a man at knifepoint
Persuasion: Is money worth your life?
Seafaring: Pretending to get the ropes ready.
Strength: Lifting heavy crates
Tactics: Naval sneak attacks
Tactics: Strike when your enemy sleeps


Loot: Captain's Hat
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: -2 Taboo (Breaking City Law)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Professor Faith.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None. Abandoned thread.
Requested Rewards:
Faith
No skill knowledges.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Thread Name: Lost Information
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No warnings. This is my job thread combined with a prelude to a quest thread I'm doing later this season.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge-
Cartography: Comparing old maps to find new errors
Cartography: The map makers signture
Cartography: The mark of the store
Cartography: Maps with color sell for a lot more, but are harder to make
Cartography: Maps with more detail go for higher prices
Drawing: A plain signature

Other Knowledge:
NPC: Annalise
Annalise: A helpful coworker
Annalise: Could do anyone's job better than they could
NPC: Valon
Valon: Forgot to order new quills... again
Valon: Really needs fired at this point

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: I don't believe there is any, but if you see something worthy of a little fame I'd never be the one to turn it down.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
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Thread Name: Defense
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A lovely little job thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge-
Blades: Serrated talons
Blades: Wedging a sword into armor
Detection: Knowing when someone is playing the victim card
Endurance: Taking a hit to get into a good position
Shield Combat: Forearm shield bracers
Tactics: Taking advantage of attacks against you

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 (Good deed)
+2 (Victory in Single combat)
Anything else you can see would be lovely
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: The Dress
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: It's emotional, but other than that, nope

Requested Rewards:
Faith Knowledge
Tristan: Has a baby
Tristan: Baby is Ayla
Tristan: Loves me
Tristan: Will always love me

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: NA
Collaboration: Yes (with Tristan)
Magic EXP: No.
Tristan Knowledge:
Ayla: Is her second name Rose?
Faith: Alive again?
Faith: Has a friend called PB
Faith: Didn't leave Padraig
Faith: Will never leave Padraig
Faith: Still loves Padraig
Faith: Insists she isn't Ayla's mother
Faith: Probably still dead
Mistral: The cat king of Rynmere?
PB: Is a chalk bunny

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: No.
Devotion: No.
Collaboration: Yes, with Faith.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Loading up the Cart
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope, not really. I hunt a thing but it's by no means graphic. A quick grammar warning though, this thread was not edited so there might be some spelling errors.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge-
Animal Husbandry: Replacing a horse with other large animals
Field Craft: Salting meat for preservation
Whips: The Urumi
Whips: Good reach and good close up
Whips: Still bring back bad memories
Whips: A good weapon to know about

Loot: One bed roll(5gn)
A four person tent(50gn)
A large water proof tarp(15gn)
40 master craft adamantite arrows(108)
A mastercraft Urumi whip(280gn)

When figuring out the math for the arrows I did some looking around and guessed that an ingot of metal could make 20 arrows. I bought 40 so it was 100 for the metal and then the arrows themselves were 8 nels since it's 8 nels for 40 mastercraft.

After subtracting my 250 fame discount (10%) the total comes to 412gn and 2sn

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nothing really, if you notice something feel free to add it in but don't feel compelled to search.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Orientation
City/Area: Etzos - Outlying Cities
Notes/Warnings: Some of the whiniest fighting performed by a grown man
Requested Rewards:

Robin
Skill Knowledge:
Defiance: Guardian
Defiance: Earth’s Cradle
Defiance: Earth Kick
Defiance: Cheerleader
Defiance: Tremor
Unarmed: Pulling Hair
Unarmed: Pushing
Unarmed: Taking Advantage
Endurance: Your Mutation is Armor
Endurance: Taking a Hit to the Groin
Endurance: Surviving Eye Gouging
Endurance: Taking a Hit to the Nose

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Zipper: Wields a craft magic
Zipper: Black Guard
Zipper: Immediate Superior
Zipper: Utter and complete bitch
Zipper: Unused to Common
NPC - Master Torvyn
Abrogation: Nullifies magic
Master Torvyn: Powerful Abrogationist
Master Torvyn: Can nullify magic on a whim
Ithession: A harsh tongue
Ithession: Native language of Etzos
Ithession: Learning the insults
Ithession: Vulgarities first

Zipper
Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation: Ether Missle: Tasking an Ether Missle with Corrosion
Transmutation: Ether Missle: Conjuring twin Ether Missles
Transmutation: Ether Missle: Aiming for the head
Transmutation: Testing your Etheric mettle against a Defier
Unarmed Combat: Eye gouging
Unarmed Combat: Groin attack
Unarmed Combat: Downward elbow strike straight to the face
Unarmed Combat: Knee to the stomach
Endurance: Gritting through a fight with an elbow fracture
Endurance: Enduring a hair pulling
Linguistics: Swearing in a second language
Linguistics: Rediscovering Common

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Robin: Defier
Robin: Black Guard
Robin: Subordinate, understudy, blue collar slave-to-be
Robin: Bones of literal stone
Robin: Can't speak Ith'Ession
Becoming: Responsible for Padfoot's Carnival
Becoming: Incapable of handling self-identity
Defiance: Defiers suck donkey balls
Defiance: Undisciplined, delusional, sentimental
Defiance: The arcane powerhouses of Domain Magic
Abrogation: Nullifies Magic
NPC - Master Torvyn
Master Torvyn: Powerful Abrogationist
Master Torvyn: Can nullify magic on a whim
Master Torvyn: Naggy old fuck
Common: Throwing insults
Common: Flexing your vocabulary
Common: Fades with misuse
Common: Forming a grammatically perfect sentence
Common: Never forget the slurs

Loot: No for both
Injuries/Overstepping: Robin got eye gouged, kicked in the groin, smashed to the ground. Zipper's elbow has a bit of a fracture, her knee hit stone.
Fame: Negative - Brawling in public, mutual use of magic in public. Robin gets extra shit points for resorting to hair pulling despite being, like, 10 times bigger.
Collaboration: Yeah
Magic EXP: Yes
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Thread Name: On A Boat
City/Area: Outlying Cities [en route to Fosters via Etzos]
Notes/Warnings: (almost death)
Requested Rewards:
Robin:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Elemental Mourning
Defiance: Swimming
Defiance: Wave
Defiance: Moving a Current
Defiance: Fighting Another Defier for Elemental Attention
Defiance: Comforting An Element
Swimming: Hard with Stone Bones
Swimming: Go Up
Endurance: Not Drowning
Endurance: Being Slammed Against a Boat

Non-skill
The Southwood River

*Zipper only had one post, 450-500 words*
Zipper:
Medicine: Resuscitating a drowning victim
Discipline: Saving someone you hate
Discipline: Overcoming personal hygiene concerns to save a life

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Thread Name: Two for the Show
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Acrobatics: Handstand
  • Acrobatics: Walking on your hands
  • Acrobatics: Crab walk
  • Acrobatics: pushing yourself back to your feet
  • Acrobatics: trying to maintain balance during handstand
  • Negotiation: Haggling-- demand a higher payment than you want
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: idk?
Collaboration:no
Magic EXP: nope
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Lady's Perogative
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge
Sewing: Patterns for hats, mittens and gloves
Sewing: Careful layering for capstone ability warmth / cold
Sewing: Using patterns to cut out
Sewing: Patchwork blankets
Sewing: Embroidery
Singing: Singing whilst working to soothe your own nerves

Loot: The beginnings of baby wardrobe.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.
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