Review Request 2.1.1

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Every New Beginning
City/Area: Docks outside of Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nah. Just a fun thread.
Requested Rewards:

Pash Vy’Ryn

Skill Knowledge:
Climbing: Using your knees and feet
Climbing: Up the mast
Ship Building: Rigging a sloop
Ship Building: Preparing the sails
Seafaring: Round turn and two half hitches knot
Seafaring: Whatever it’s job, there’s an ideal knot, hitch, or bend for that rope
Rhetoric: Being honest about your dreams in defiance of your parents
Rhetoric: Making creative small talk

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC: Yrmellyn Cole
Yrmellyn Cole: Painter and artist
Yrmellyn Cole: Paints portraits of wealthy people for a living
Yrmellyn Cole: Painted you and your father as a real life scene

Loot: A beautiful Yrmellyn Cole original painting!
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer’s discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Yrmellyn Cole

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: To assess the age of people by looking at them
Drawing: To sketch a framework of pale thin lines with a light hand
Painting: To paint shipbuilders at work
Painting: To paint with the intention of good wishes to people
Painting: The abstract idea to find a way to imbue paintings with properties beyond what meets the eye
Psychology: To cheer oneself up by taking a walk in the fresh air
Singing: To sing forgotten songs by filling in the lost words by humming
Socialization: To socialize with people while you are painting them

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: The docks of Ne’haer
PC: Pash Vy’Ryn, a nice young biqaj teenager, music lover and shipbuilder
PC: Pash Vy’Ryn, looking forward to travel with his ship
NPC: Traek Vy’Ryn, Pash’s father
Ships: The size and appearance of a Biqaj Sloop

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer’s discretion! Public art creation.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Supply Routine
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge
Baking: Quality is most important for a good fish dish.
Baking: Taste is linked to quality
Baking; Unusual produce can make unusual dishes
Business Management: A variety of relationships
Business Management: Clear guidelines are vital for business relationship
Business Management: Puurchasing by weight and amount.
Business Management: Setting clear professional boundaries


Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nurp.
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: No.

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[Noth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:O Icarus of the fearless flight.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


Nauta
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Endurance: Rest in between work to increase productivity
• Mount: Lack of skill can leave a rider in bad shape
• Intelligence: Aerial reconnaisance can get you closer
• Stealth: No one looks up
• Mount: A scython's claws can hold an enemy for a killing blow
• Blades: Pincushion a stationary enemy
• Becoming: Unleash the beast!
• Becoming: Where man can borrow the qualities of beast
• Becoming: Renews the body if given the chance

Loot:

• Blood Metal Dust, maybe 2 or 3 equivalents of ingots?

While Nauta will be taking the Becomer's bodies, they will be used for experiments and stuff so no point in listing them until I actually make the end products.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Depends if you think the escapees will say anything.

Noth
Knowledge:
Stealth: Keeping Far Behind an Enemy Party
Stealth: Use Foliage to Hide Numbers
Ranged: Providing Covering Fire
Ranged: Works well with Stealth for Early Hits
Ranged: Excellent for Disabling Enemies
Unarmed: Holding On and Never Letting Go
Unarmed: Yanking a Bat's Head Off
Unarmed: Claws Do Not Beat Steel

Loot: Whatever nels were in the pockets of the deceased. Four standard iron daggers. Padfoot's Head
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing substantial, some bruising, soreness
Fame: Identical to Whatever Nauta Gets.

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Preparing Props.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Carpentry: Using diagrams to plan
Detection: Small details in written records
Mathematics: Checking and double checking calculations.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Padraig

Mathematics: Checking calculations make sense
Physics: Orbit of the second sun doesn't add up with expectations
Teaching: Explaining fact vs theory
Teaching: Praise is a motivator
Teaching: Using props to explain complex concepts
Teaching: Start with basics, expand
Teaching: Show where things don't make sense
Teaching: Explaining what questions unexpected data leaves you with
Teaching: Using data to back up a theory

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Recognition.
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Endurance: Onset of a panic attack
Endurance: Oxygen deprivation
Endurance: Pain to force yourself to breathe.
Detection: The signs of a panic attack
Detection: Similarities and differences between individuals.
Detection: Recognising kindness when you don't know the language.


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Painter's Contract
City/Area: Rharne in Arc 706
Notes/Warnings: No. Yrmellyn discusses and signs a contract.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge
Business Management: To make deals the right way in order to avoid big losses
Business Management: To write a contract with a clear agreement before you start to work
Business Management: To always make the customer pays the materials in advance
Business Management: To always read contracts properly and in detail before signing
Business Management: To not blindly trust people you do business with
Seduction: To pull somebody to you by gazing into their eyes for a long time

Loot: A painter apprentice contract
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No. It's a personal memory for the PC.
Magic EXP: No

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Learning To Fall & Miss.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Stealth: Glide Instead to Silence Flight
Stealth: Landing Quietly
Flying: Gliding
Flying: The Challenges of Being the First Winged Naer
Flying: A Running Start Aids a Novice Flyer
Flying: Strengthen Your Back for Better Wing Control
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Delroth: Prefers Pretty Things
Storm Shrike: Can Be Tamed and Ridden
Storm Shrike: Uses Wind Currents to Create Sea Storms
Storm Shrike: The Most Stunning Shades of Blue

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.

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[Oberan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Ship of Fools
City/Area: Etzos Docks
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: fitting in a cupboard
Stealth: closing doors quietly
Stealth: locating possible hiding spots
Stealth: Hiding in a cupboard
Stealth: remaining quiet when hiding
Stealth: close the doors when hiding in a cupboard

Loot: Brandy and rations?
Injuries/Overstepping: Seasickness and a hangover
Fame: Eh
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Kali'rial]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Herbalism 101
City/Area: Scalvtown
Notes/Warnings: n/a

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill knowledge:
Medicine: (Herbalism) -Snekvine Salve - prevents infection and promotes healing
Medicine: (Herbalism) - Yellow Dragonbark Tea - reduce fever, safe for infants in small amounts
Medicine: (Herbalism) -Iffidol flower seeds - must have a barrier on the wound for use
Medicine: (Herbalism) - circulatory system knowledge is a must
Medicine: (Herbalism) - overdosage can be lethal
Business Knowledge: Learning new skills can be expensive

Non-Skill:
Location: Peytr's Pots & Potions
NPC: Peytr - shop owner
NPC: Callie - can provide private sessions
Lore: Encyclopedia Herbalicum Idalosica
Lore: Caring For Your Plants: A Herbologists Tale
Lore: Map Of The Circulatory System: Idalos Race Guide

Loot:
Encyclopaedia Herbalicum Idalosica - 10GN
Caring For Your Plants: A Herbologists Tale - 10GN
Map Of The Circulatory System: Idalos Race Guide - 10GN
Herbalist Kit - 45GN
1/2 cup mortar and pestle set - 1GN
Blank Journal - 5GN
Ink well - 2GN
Ink Pen - 1GN
Cloth bandage strips (bundle of 15) - 1GN
Dried purple peach flowers - 5GN
Pot Snekvine Salve - 1GN (5 average sized wounds)
Yellow Dragonbark Tea - 3GN (10 serves)
Iffliol flower seeds - 30gn (3 healing doses)
Dried Rhyth flower petals - 50gn (5gn per dose x 10 serves)
Dried Laki-Laki leaves - 25gn (1 bush is 25gn, I assume it provides a generic 10 serves?)
Dried Moukou Beans - 15gn (5gn per dose x 3 serves)
Dried yarrow - 3GN (10 serves)
Elderberries dried - 3GN (10 serves)
Echinacea dried leaves - 3GN (10 serves)

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a

Fame: n/a

Collaboration: No

Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Where would we be now?.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Caregiving: Playing with a child to put them at their ease
Caregiving: Distracting a child
Caregiving: Using colours as a teaching tool
Detection: What my child would look like
Endurance: Dealing with extreme emotions.
Medicine: Diagnosing developmental delay
Persuasion: Pointing out the reality of slavery
Persuasion: Asking for support
Persuasion: Using personal examples
Surgery: Taking blood samples
Surgery: Methods of removing pain from surgical processes


Loot: No. Ledger up to date
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Give a gift x3 (clothes, blocks and farm animals)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Tristan

Detection: Noticing when something's wrong with your child
Logistics: Planning for what happens after the abolition of slavery
Medicine: Baby development
Medicine: Premature aging
Medicine: Babies chew on things because they are teething
Politics: A duke needs a wife
Politics: Being a duke isn't always easy
Politics: Rynmere politics are a mess!
Politics: Abolishing slavery
Psychology: Babies understand more than you think
Psychology: Some people like being slaves

Ayla: Probably a Mortalborn of Syroa (or Lisirra)
Ayla: Healthy
Faith: Was blessed three times by Famula
Faith: Has a twin called Morana
Faith: Has a half sister called Reyna
Faith: Was born in Venora
Faith: Vesna Nardovino
Faith: Was sold by her parents
Faith: Wants to abolish slavery
Faith: Officer for Welfare in Scalvoris
Faith: Owns a restaurant
Faith: Really skilled in medicine
Faith: Was born on the first of Saun

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: NA
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.