Review Request 2.1.1

[Kyin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Smithereens

City/Area: Etzos

Notes/Warnings: Mild Language

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Leather Working: Sword and Knife Pommels
Smithing: Creating a Fuller
Smithing: 4:1 Riveted Chain Mail
Smithing: Creating a Rapier Basket
Smithing: Wire Drawing
Discipline: Surpressing Kyin's Natural Monotone

Loot: None other than wages, which I have applied for

Injuries/Overstepping: I wasted some pewter that's it.

Fame: None

Collaboration: No

Magic EXP: No

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fostering friendships
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Porn Stache warning
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Gangui

Skill Knowledges:
Negotiation: Cutting to the chafe instead of posturing.
Negotiation: Offering a drink as a sign of good will.
Intimidation: Using superstitious anger.
Negotiation: Not divulging information.
Intimidation: Forcing someone to drink.
Leadership: Asserting your social credibility.
Leadership: Taking position in the middle of a group to assert oneself.
Leadership: Announcing loyalties in front of everyone.
Discipline: Honor over distrust

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: Location - Nalod’s Dockside Pub
Etzos: Location - Foster's landing
PC: Zipper
Zipper: Blackguard
Zipper: Can’t handle a drink
Zipper: Wears her heart on her sleeve...sometimes.
Zipper: Somewhere between Odessa and Tanvi on the crazy/hotness scale
Zipper: Inquisitive
Zipper: Extremely suspicious
NPC: Brandon the Bard
Song: The tale of Telob the Privateer.
Brandon: Confidant

Zipper

Skill Knowledge:
Intelligence: Spotting truth in an unbelievable rumor
Intelligence: Cross-checking the truth using alternate sources of information
Intelligence: Drinking rum to earn a contact’s trust
Intelligence: Telling a contact what they want to hear
Intelligence: Trading amnesty for information
Intelligence: Offering a false tale to bait out the real one
Intelligence: Making contacts in unfamiliar places
Endurance: Drinking the undrinkable
Discipline: Enduring Foster’s Landing unbearable culture

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: Location - Foster’s Landing
Etzos: Location - Nalod’s Dockside Pub
PC - Gangui
Gangui: Mercenary for hire
Gangui: Distrusts those who do not drink
Gangui: Hates the Black Guard
Gangui: Hates High Marshall Morgan Pahrn
Gangui: Hates mutants
Gangui: Leads mob lynchings
Gangui: Contact in Foster’s Landing
Gangui: Terrible manners
NPC - Brandon
Brandon: Bard
Brandon: Sings songs of history
Brandon: Gangui’s personal singing lapdog

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for Gangui for asserting himself socially in the pub, negative for Zipper for not understanding the culture, being awkward and stuffy, and not drinking
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Words are wind, unless they are written
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: More Porn Stache incoming
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui

Skill Knowledge:
Negotiation: Using an interpreter
Negotiation: The power of temporarily withdrawing from the brokering table
Negotiation: Start the Bid High, then go lower
Persuasion: Engaging outrage to create compromise
Negotiation: Rudely putting people on the spot to force a favorable response
Negotiation: Ante-up the stakes
Persuasion: Having a good resume
Negotiation: Sealing the deal.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Brandon: Doubles as Gangui’s interpreter and noterizor
The Noble Turkey: Gangui’s new seal
Turkey Company: Gangui’s new mercenary organization
Turkey Company: Founded for the sake of state contracts.
The Black Guard: No official jurisdiction in Foster's Landing
Zipper: Real name - Fiona Zippomaria O’Connor
Zipper: Clearly hates being called by her name
Zipper: Extremely eccentric
Zipper: Frankly hates pretty much everything

Zipper

Skill Knowledge:
Intimidation: Threatening a bard
Intelligence: Hunting information by bringing up the topic multiple times
Deception: Asserting non-existent moral standards
Deception: Lying about injuries
Deception: Using real anger to legitimize a fake cause
Detection: Noticing when you’re being patronized
Detection: Noticing a social threat
Detection: Noticing a subtle verbal diversion


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Gangui: Founder and only current member of the Turkey Company
Gangui: Full name - Gangui Munzorig
Gangui: A survivor of mage battles
Gangui: A useful if often crude ally
Brandon: Infuriating
Brandon: Gangui’s interpeter and legal stooge
Brandon: The brains behind the brawn

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No

[Nauta F'mos Geey]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The kit to not get lit
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Stealth: People only care about what they can see and hear
• Business Management: Use the input of other people for manufactured products
• Persuasion: "How was your trial?"
• Intelligence: Wider spread of sources means more detailed information
• Leatherworking: Razorfin oil works with even tough skin
• Alchemy: Mutants make resources of superior quality

Loot: Nauta's special hide armor! (Geddit?) costs as specified in thread
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: -

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Falling Awake
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: deals with death and grief - no violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none necessary
Loot: leather and wood necklace - sentimental value only
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Fame: n/a
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

[Quio]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Bailey Peninsula] Deliverance II.
City/Area: In the wilds outside of Etzos. Probably 12 or so days' walk ride (oops) away from the city. About a day or so from Foster's Landing.
Notes/Warnings: Quio has to take out stitches with a knife and his teeth. The descriptions aren't graphic I don't think, but there's mention of blood and Quio is blood squeamish. He also eats (cooked) meat from an animal carcass he finds in the woods. It's not gross or anything but thought I'd mention it.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (6 b/c it's a solo)--
Hunting: Follow a prey animal to find its predators
Field craft: Sharpening/refining a stone knife
Field craft: Using sapling bark to make cordage
Field craft: Soak sapling bark to make it easier to remove in strings
Field craft: Use fire to keep the animals away
Field craft: Gather whatever food you can, even from carcasses if necessary

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Coyotes: Body mechanics
Coyotes: Pack hierarchy
Yludih: First animal form: Coyote observation

Loot: A rudimentary crutch made of wood and strips of old shirt. A simple 'sling' (a loop of cordage) made from braided tree bark.

-1 shirt (RIP) and his pant legs lol.

Injuries/Overstepping: Quio does some shouting/screaming which really hurts his already-damaged throat. He loses his voice. Not sure when that should come back, maybe a few days or so? He won't likely get any treatment for this, besides perhaps gargling some water.

He also takes out some old stitches which involves using a knife and picking through the wounds to get the stitches out. I think he does pretty minimal damage there; the wounds are quite old so he's not reopening them, but they do bleed a little. They'll probably take a while, a week or two, to properly heal now that the stitches are out and will be sore until then.

Note that, as I believe is mentioned in thread, Quio cannot as a Yludih get sick from spoiled/bad/poisonous food. So no worries there. Especially about those frankly suspicious mushrooms.

Fame: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:The Outsider
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A bit of unarmed fighting.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Gangui

Skill Knowledges:
Discipline: Resisting the urge to attack Etzos military.
Strength: Wading through the canal.
Leadership: Inserting oneself into the middle of an unfriendly group.
Leadership: Speaking truth to power.
Etiquette: Helping a lady to her feet.
Politics: Etzosi Immigrant vetting process.
Etiquette: Buying a new friend breakfast.
Persuasion: Dire warnings

Non-Skill Knowledges:
PC: Ellen’wyn
Ellen’wyn: Red headed Avriel
Ellen’wyn: Immigrant from Desnind
Ellen’wyn: Reminds him of Nightshade
Ellen’wyn: Has fight in her
Ellen’wyn: Puking champ 717
Brandon: Has a more conservative view on immigration
Location: Foster’s Bay

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges
Unarmed Combat: Taking a Hit
Unarmed Combat: Scratching
Unarmed Combat: Wings Are Weapons Too
Discipline: Standing Your Ground
Seafaring: Transitioning Back to Land
Politics: Etzos’ Unreasonably Harsh Immigration Policies
Etiquette: Don’t Be Ungrateful
Investigation: Taste Testing

Non-skill Knowledges
PC: Gangui
Gangui: Shiny Barbarian
Gangui: Patriot of Etzos
Gangui: Protector of the Innocent
Gangui: Regular at the Dockside Pub
Gangui: Impressive Mustachio
Location: Foster’s Bay
Location: Foster’s Landing
Location: Foster’s Landing, Nalod’s Dockside Pub
Etzos: Immortals Forbidden
Foster’s Landing: Apparently, Don’t Drink the Water
NPC: Brandon the Bard
Brandon: Etzos Native
Brandon: Storyteller

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Ellen got knocked out?
Fame: Positive fame for Ellen for swearing off immortals. Positive fame for Gangui for speaking up for a harmless girl in front of the crowd.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Unwanted Political Proffers
City/Area: Etzos, Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Sword Fight
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blade (Bastard Sword): Having a conversation through the blade
Blade (Bastard Sword): The Wrathful Strike
Blade (Bastard Sword): Grabbing an opponent's weapon
Blade (Bastard Sword): Spin moves lead to re-positioning
Blade (Bastard Sword): Getting out of sword-locks with groin kicks
Strength: Wielding Bastard Sword with Finesse

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: minor/none
Fame: Positive for stopping a beating.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Stressed Backwards
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge
Baking: Combining nougat and caramel
Baking: White chocolate mousse
Baking: Chocolate quill
Baking: Chocolate parchment
Baking: Chocolate ink
Cooking: Caramel

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Capstone Ability: The Confectionier

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mirror Image
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None. Abandoned thread.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
None.


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.