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(Note: we allowed each other mutual control of our characters. There is no godmodding that isn't our intention in this thread. We're thinking of going down to Tibet to serve as monks for a few months. Like the covenant between Walter White and Jesse Pinkman, we're cooperating here - But Yana's gonna run off to my cop brother-in-law. I just feel it in my my crystal meth making fingerbones.)

3rd Ymiden 716

Two women on the docks of the southwood river that flows down into Foster’s Bay.

One is a brunette with the awkward lankiness of a girl still growing, the other a taller redhead who looked, stood, and shook as if she hadn’t slept in a dozen trials. One of them is dressed in the uniform of the Etzori army, the other opts for the kind of clothes that you wouldn’t look twice at; which was the point. One has a look on her face that could be described as intense annoyance, the other’s features are more complicated: a kind of forced calmness that did too little to mask the desperation, fatigue, annoyance, and fear in every inch of her body language.

One of them is a mage that can shatter everything outside of life, the other hides her form under the guise of flesh.

One has a bounty on her head, the other most emphatically does not.

They are twins, in a sense. No, they barely look alike. They share neither father nor mother. Their height and build is different. They didn’t grow up together nor have they known each other for more than an arc, but there is a familiarity nonetheless, a kinship if you would: they both share certain traits that make them, well, separated from all the other kids at the playground.

Firstly, they both thrived on information.

The redhead was born into deceit. A Yludih had dozens of shapes across their lives, and even the current form, this etzori archer she had dubbed Rayna, was but just one more face in the gallery of her life. She was spying before she knew what a spy was. She craved knowledge long before she knew how valuable it could be. The story of every person could be summed up by the things they were and the things they did, and Yana strove to complete the image of that narrative with everyone she met.

The Brunette… well, she didn’t have some of Yana’s physiological advantages or the built-in mental drive for pure subterfuge, but her thirst was the same nonetheless. The key thing that really got her down, on the other hand, was the unwillingness to perform her own dirty work, to get down into the trenches of intelligence and do what needed to be done. She had her own way of doing things, of course, but one might wonder why such an unsocial, sullen brat wanted to be at the centre of a web.

She would argue that she -or anybody with half a mind- didn’t have a choice, that this was the only way to truly know people: through hard, consistent fact. Not what they said or what they felt, but what they truly were.

Thankfully, her magic found quite a number of ways to compensate for her shortcomings.

Secondly, they both understand what it is to have nothing inside.

They both dissected their first tiny, cutsey animal before they were ten. Not to placate some sadistic pulse that begged for blood, or to affirm power over something smaller than you - though it would be disingenuous to suggest that they were completely void of it. No, it was a simple matter of understanding what they couldn’t see.

And when they saw it, they moved on.

Another thing they understood on the day they dipped in and carved into the dog or cat or pig or bird or frog or whatever animal came first - it was lost in a haze of trivia not worth sorting out- a bonus lesson: people have arbitrary notions on what deserved the knife less.

It was confusing. It was very confusing, and neither of them ever figured out why the life of dog was worth more than a pig or a toad.

And it is this shared empty familiarity that drives Zipper to hunt down Rayna for chum change. Because, for all the rapport they shared together, what was happening now was, a little bit of regret aside, ultimately nothing personal.

Just business then, just business now.

But it was never that simple, was it?

“Ray, help a girl out here, yeah?” Zipper said, one hand raised with the crackling energy of an ether missile aimed straight at the redhead. The little quip was the only mercy the woman she knew as Rayna would get. “200 dead, 400 a fuckin’ live. Which, oh which, would you pick?”
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She hadn’t heard her walk up to her. She hadn’t seen her either. Yana cussed internally, cursing her own lack of awareness. She cursed the burning pain searing the right side of her face, keeping her up at night, allowing her no rest, no respite. It broke her focus, took away her awareness of the outside world and twisted it so she could sense that and only that. It had eaten at her composure, shaken the usual stoicism she held onto. It had shattered now, lying in shambles at her feet. Yana slowly turned her head in the direction of the voice, stopped dead in her tracks.

“Option three, if I have any say in the matter,” she responded, trying to keep her face under control. Speaking was a bitch. Live or die? Well, all dodging of Fiona’s question aside, that was an easy choice to make. At least, it was easily said. “Are you giving me the choice for old time’s sake,” Yana asked, stalling for time hoping to move her hand ever so slowly, towards the hilt of her sword. “Or because you’d rather not kill me, Fiona?”

Yana herself no such qualms. If the girl before her was serious --which she often was-- there would be little choice but to fight. Fight, kill, and live. Or fight and die. Coming quietly was not an option. Fiona might not see it that way, but she did not know what she was. Yana knew what was done to potential spies. Her nature as a Yludih would be uncovered during those “interrogations”, and every Yludih knew what that meant. Experiments and eternal pain. A fate worse than death, and later, at last, death itself. There really was no choice here. Her hand crept lower, almost able to curl around the hilt of her blade. “Or are you afraid to fight me, to kill me? That’s it, isn’t it? You fear you can’t do it. We served together after all. Had each other’s backs. Comradery always comes back to bite you in the ass, you know. ” She managed a smirk, albeit a weak, trembling one. Fake as hell too. It did not matter, her hand was where she needed it.

“I’ve come to convince you to turn yourself in. To trust in the justice of our fair city. I don’t believe you did it, Ray, come-” The ether missile exploded out of her hand, zipping through the air and scorching a line across the length of her forearm. A near-miss. A warning shot. “Next one’s heart burn, Red. Sword - floor.”

“Tsk” Yana uttered, more annoyed than hurt by the ether missile, the wound over her eye drowning out all lesser aches. What to do, what to do… With an expression of extreme annoyance did the Yludih draw her blade, slowly as to not provoke the mage any further. “And here I thought I had nothing to lose,” she muttered. Then, with a casual motion of her hand, she tossed her sword on the ground, towards Fiona, and a little to the left. For a split trill her eyes tracked it, and that was Yana’s chance. Using it as a distraction she charged, tackling Fiona to the ground.
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The force of the tackle sent both women sprawling to the ground in a tangle of arms and legs and grunts and howls. Rayna has the muscle, the reach, and experience - she took to the unfamiliar earthbound grappling far easier than Zipper - and she deftly maneuvered her way to the top after a brief, vicious struggle, planting her butt down on Zipper’s stomach. She snarled, face twisted from both effort and pain, driving one fist into Zipper’s face over and over while her other arm struggled to keep one of the younger woman’s arms pinned to the ground. Zipper wanted to howl out in pain, but her voice was drowned out, muffled by the endless barrage inflicted upon her. She tried to rise, tried to push herself up, but the older woman forced her back down again, her fist slamming again and again and again until her skull rattled and and her mind was a dazed swirl and her vision watered and she could taste and feel the blood.

And what a fist it was; Rayna hit harder than almost any guy she ever fought. Hell, Rayna’s blows came down more like something that could have been metal.

Fascinating.... And food for thought, if she wasn’t being pummeled into the ground right now.

She had only one advantage here.

She charged an ether missile with her free hand - but she couldn’t aim. Hell, she couldn’t even see out of the daze of hurt that kept coming and coming and coming like a raging bull. So she reached up and pressed the ether missile right where she knew it would hurt - to the wound on Rayna’s head. She could smell it - smell her own flesh burning, her bones quaking from the tremors of agitated arcane energy. She could imagine the flesh on her hand slowly charring, wood in the furnace of Transmutation’s backlash. A missile was never meant for the melee, but she couldn’t care. She fingered blindly for what she assumed was Rayna’s head and, when found something hard and solid and heard a gasp of pain, pressed down like it owed her money.

She delivered the beatdown back in one fell swoop

With interest.
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The fiery blaze of hurt erupting inside her wound sent Yana reeling back, screeching in absolute anguish. The unholy sound seemed to cut through flesh and bone, shattering glass and popping eardrums. She threw herself backwards, one hand pressed against the searing pain as if it would make it go away. The bandages she’d wrapped around her head were in tatters, light spilling from between her fingers as she rolled over the floor screaming bloody murder, seemingly not even taking a break to breathe.

It was Zipper’s turn to bring down the hurt, the younger woman scrambled on hands and knees, pinning down the Yludih, determined to keep the tables turned in her favor. She slammed a fist down onto Yana’s face, intending to return the favor - only for her hand to hit something hard and completely fleshless in a burst of absolute pain. It was akin to stubbing one’s toe, except this was no wooden table.

Yana saw enough of her face to know what she was thinking: what the fuck?

Through the pain still splitting her skull in half, Yana grinned, presented with a golden opportunity. She’d felt the punch, though her tough Yludih body could tank it no problem. Capitalizing on Fiona’s mistake, she slammed her head forward, colliding with the soft flesh of the woman’s nose. It was enough to break one hand free from her grip, reaching out to tightly grab around the woman’s throat. The neck was a major weak spot, she knew; easily broken, easily severed, and easily crushed. The latter would serve well for now. The Yludih tightened her grip as much as she could, fingers digging into the soft flesh of Fiona’s body, cutting off her air supply.
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Which Zipper did not take kindly too.

There was something very, very, very wrong with this whole picture. Ignoring the part where she was choking to death - no, that’s inaccurate. Her choking to death was competing with its rival, getting your windpipe caved in, to see who would get first prize. And boy, what a thrilling race it was, a joy ride to the literal finish line for an audience of one very pissed off 400 nel bounty. No, 200 now. There was no fuckin’ way she was taking her alive.

But digressions and the wild thrashing of legs as she gagged herself purple aside, there was something very, very wrong with the creature that walked, talked, and fought like Rayna.

With her right hand charred to near, rigid uselessness, Zipper reached out with her left hand, searching blindly around for anything: for a rock, for a stone, for a damn piece of dirt large enough to throw into Rayna’s face for all she could muster. As her consciousness faded, as she felt what she could only assume was Vir’s chill embrace, she touched on something hard. It was either the sword that Rayna dropped… or a really sick hallucination of a joke at the end of a short, sad excuse of a life.

She swung it.

No, she charged it with ether: incomplete, hastily applied, but charged nonetheless. The sword accepted the ether’s Bolstering and ate of it to harden the steel.

Now she swung it.

Blindly into what she hoped was Rayna’s head. It bit into something hard, but from the way Yana was screaming, it regrettably didn’t seem to be her head.
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The blade sung as it cleaved through the air, sinking its teeth right into Yana’s shoulder, and once more the Yludih roared and screeched, pain flaring up immediately, forcing her to loosen her grip on Fiona’s throat. She clawed at the woman’s face in an effort to push her off of her, away so she could not swing a second time. She needn’t worry, Fiona collapsed a coughing and wheezing mess, allowing Yana to disgracefully and hastily crawl backwards, putting some distance between the two of them. A quick glance to check on the new wound on her shoulder and Yana flinches as she tried to move her arm, feeling the blade stab her anew. False blood dribbled out of the cut, staining her shirt before splattering on the floor.

“W-what-” Fiona hacked out several harsh coughs that did not bode well for the current state of her windpipe. She pushed herself up on her elbows, then collapsed again, landing in an undignified heap on her back. “What the fuck are you?”

“None of your business,” she hissed in response, partly out of pain, partly out of frustration.

“So that’s why they’re after you.” Fiona said. She managed to slowly get up this time, her gait shaky, and Yana could see her handiwork now: Fiona’s left eye was swollen shut, the claw marks on her neck cut deep, and her voice was hoarse and weak. “You’re some kind of mutant cunt of a Becomer.”

Fiona had jumped to her own conclusion based on her experience with the arcane. Who was she to dissuade her?

“That’s why I fled before they could bring me in,” she corrected, slowly rising to her feet as well, wanting to be prepared for the next attack. She didn’t bother to go into further detail; mutant Becomer would do just fine. “And that’s why I’ll not be brought in alive if I can help it.” Her mouth was a grimace of pain, one hand clutching at her injured shoulder, right eye momentarily forgotten. And, well, she did not have enough hands to cover that up too. “You’ll have to be content with a paltry 200 nels, Fiona dear.” She bent her knees slightly, dropping herself in a combat stance. “It’s either that or nothing, and I’m afraid I’d rather not go back at all. They won’t keep me alive anyhow.” Even if they did, it wouldn’t be much of a life, she’d be nothing but a guinea pig.
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“You think it’s about the nel, red?” Well, yes, it was about the nel - but Zipper would have never bothered to hunt her down for a solid but unexceptional sum of 200.

It was about loyalty.

Or rather, about the appearance of loyalty.

The moment the accusations came raining down from above, every single finger became a dagger, ready to be pointed at Zipper O’Connor. Rayna had few friends, and Zipper was as close to a bestie as she ever got - but she had to have had help didn’t she? Taking her in was just an assertion of innocen-

Credibility.

Nobody was innocent.

“Perhaps if my bounty was higher, I might have. I was thinking ‘revenge’. Getting back at me for ‘betraying your trust’ or something along those lines. Patriotism, maybe?”

“That is -and I’m not exaggerating here- the most fuckin’ insulting thing anyone has ever accused me of. How dare you call me a patriot.”

Rayna gave a slight grin. “You’re welcome. Funneling magic into my eye might have been the worst pain I’ve felt in my life. I’d feel bad not getting back at you even a little bit.”

“Don’t be such an utter baby,” Zipper shrugged. “It’s the thing about crabs in a basket, red: you fall, I’ll go down with. I’ll spend the rest of my arcs labeled spyfriend - until one day someone in the hungry jungle decides ‘hey, maybe today’s the day Zipper meets a happy accident. Sorry, but I ain’t sorry. Had to be this way.”

“You could have turned a blind eye, Fiona-”

Zipper’s snicker gave her a brief pause. “Sorry, continue.” the mage said.
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Realizing the pun, Yana’s grin twisted into a grimace. “It’s not like we were close anyway.”

“It hurts to cry from a swollen eye, Red. Ow.”

“You could just have answered all questions during your interrogation truthfully like a good girl, shrug off all involvement. Maybe even weave a tale of being used. Play the victim. Not like I’d have known. Or cared. Rashly deciding to come hunt me down-- you know that if I escape this’ll look like you helped me get away, right? That’ll hurt your reputation far more than I ever could have on my own.”

“If.”

A shrug. “If.” There wasn’t much else to say. Fiona was right, there was no guarantee. Perhaps Yana would indeed be killed and returned to Etzos. Perhaps not. The odds were stacked against the human girl though; they were close to the water of the Southwood River. Yludih needn’t breathe. She could just jump in and disappear, no doubt coaxing a deluge of swears and curses from Fiona’s mouth. Of course, running was plan B, her last resort. “Nevertheless, the possibility exists. Did you even stop to consider it?” Of course not, this was Fiona, she didn’t think these kind of things through. “There was also the possibility of pretending to help me, then club me over the head when I least expected it. Or, you know, first get your bearings and do some research before deciding to drag me back to Etzos.”

“Would you have bought it?” Fiona said. There was a strange quietness to her voice.

“Probably not,” Yana mused.

“Coulda, shoulda, fuckin’ didn’t.” Fiona shrugged. There was a lot of shrugging going on about. “Best to keep things simple like a dullard, yeah? I’m not a spy, Ray. Information’s good, but I’m not the one who knocks. I’m not the grunt at the docks.” She raised her arm again, energy gathering in her hand into another ether missile. “Last words to remember you by?”

The Yludih sighed, slowly pulling a small notebook from her clothes, making it absolutely clear it wasn’t some dagger or small sharp implement. She started to leaf through it until she’d found the desired page. “It’ll be a quote,” she revealed, “‘Fuck off, cunt’ -- Fiona Zippomaria O’Connor.”

“I say something like that everyday.”

“Indeed. It'll make it easy to remember me, won't it?” The words weren’t even cold when Yana made a mad dash for the water, ducking immediately upon moving to evade the incoming missile. She could feel the air heat up where the charged ether barely missed her, and then she was already diving into the cold river, creating a huge splash. It burned in her wounds, though in the moment the Yludih hardly cared. The bottom of the river was safe. Perhaps Fiona would wait for her to come back up but that too hardly mattered. Yana could remain underwater for as long as she needed.

Within that very moment, she realized she didn’t have that long.

Within that very moment, the riverbed beneath and around her feet rose up in an ensnaring net of wet mud, dirt, and jangling pebbles. It took her in its grasp and continued on upwards until they broke the surface and she felt air again.

The first thing she saw was Fiona, crouched down by the pier, hand pressed to the stone. She was heaving and panting and bits of she was...flickering. It was like looking at a person who was trying to move in two directions at the same time, to occupy two different spaces and failing at both.

She had seen this before. She was… the word eluded her, but it was what mages did when they started passing the threshold of their power.

Fiona stood up from the pier, patted herself down, and walked over to the immobilized Yana. She stood close to the Yludih, deliberately pressed in close as if going for a kiss, then bent over and picked up the book she had dropped.

“Hey, Red.” Fiona said twice, the second voice slightly echoed. “Been missing you for the last 10 trills.”

No wonder she wasn’t worried that Yana would just slip into the water; she had a few new tricks up her sleeve. Tricks she had very conveniently forgotten to showcase.
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Rayna only stared back in reply, her one eye burning with red-hot anger. Knowing her, it likely was aimed at herself rather than Zipper. Though the parading around probably did strike a nerve.

“Bah,” the one-eyed woman grumbled, desperately trying to break free from the ensnaring dirt and mud. It was an exercise in futility. Between the magic and the suction of the mud, Rayna would not be able to move a muscle, let alone flee a second time.

“Ray,” Ray, Ray, Ray, the second voice echoed, switching mid-syllable between deep and squeaky, between normal and a baritone so deep it was almost demonic. She would never get used to hearing herself like this. “It’s done, really. This was the last dance. You didn’t go out with a whimper. I won’t pretend-” she pointed to her swollen eye “-this was part of the whole affair, but you had a final shot - and you fought to the very end. Let’s pretend I respect that, stop struggling, and let me do the deed.”

“Let’s not. There’s no use in it when the both of us are in the know.”

“In the know?” She held up the book, giving it a little, mocking wave. “You’re not a Becomer, ain’t cha? You’re… something, but you’re not a gal of beasts.”

She opened up the book and… Wow, okay.

So much for not being a spy.

Page after page after page of information about the social schedules, habits, preferences and dislikes, and anything that was anything about the officers in their wing. She flipped through them until she reached the page that started the entry called Fiona Zippomaria O’Connor.

Mage, prone to aggression, something oddly scribbed out,

...Oh, didn’t know she snored. She wished someone had told her.

Has a brother called Finn living in the-

“Hey, Ray.” Zipper said, charging what would be her last ether missile she could safely summon for the day and putting it an inch below Rayna chin. “Just going to kill you now, okay? I want to say no hard feelings, but the last few trills have been enlightening. Good fuckin’ day.”
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Oooh boy. That was not good at all. Those notes held about four years of research done on just about everything Yana found worthwhile, most of which pertained to the military. Nothing too secretive, though she supposed that the daily routines might give a wrong impression. One that had led to an ether missile aimed at her face. Again.

“Wait!” she cried, asterism pulsing way too fast and loud for it not to be audible. “I noticed you started in the middle. Could you go to page 10 or so?” If memory served, she’d had this notebook since her teenage years, though she’d cast it aside in favor of a newer one rather quickly. Later she’d begun adding to it, compiling a rather impressive catalogue of useful, semi-useful, worthless, and plain odd information. “Let’s pretend it’s my last request?”

“One you don’t deserve. I think you’ve been lying to me from the very first day - and maybe I’ve know that all along on some level, but digging into the domestic? How about no, you prickish not-becomer thing - Are you Syroa’s? Tell me you’re one of hers. Give me a tiny bit of honesty in the end, yeah?”

Honesty, eh? Could she manage, was it possible? That was exactly the kind of thing the Ancients had drilled into her head not to do. Don’t trust anyone. Never tell them the truth. Even when it’s obvious.

“I do not serve any Immortal, nor any foreign power. I only follow myself and my own interests.” That, at least, was not a lie. Perhaps not a complete truth, but it was all she had to offer, though whether it’d be enough to satisfy Fiona…

“So honesty is you being a completely self-serving bitch?” Fiona said. “I can buy that.” She opened up the book. “Page 10, page 10, page 10.” There was a rather detailed picture of a dissected bird, though the drawing itself wasn’t a very good one, it was recognizable at least. In the upper corner of the page a date was scribbled. It wasn't a recent one at all, and Fiona paid it no mind.

“The skeleton, hollow bones.” There was a little arrow pointing at the bones in the picture, with a drawing of one of the bones next to it. “Because of this, the bird is very light, allowing it to fly.” Fiona quirked an eyebrow. “It also protects the squishy bits.”

“Thank you for the education,” Fiona said. “Bye now- You know what? No. I don’t know what we had, friendship or whatever, but it was something. I’m not even that mad about Finn. I feel I should be, but I’m not. I’m-” She frowned in frustration which, in Fiona terms, was practically an emotional breakdown. “-I came here to kill you. I don’t want to, I really don’t want to. I’m sorry about the eye, but we’re here now. It’s you or me. Nobody else would have gotten a word from me before I slagged them, but it’s here now. No more charming bird skeletons will sway me.”

“You don’t get it. It’s not about the skeleton,it’s about the date. What I’m trying to say here--” which, if she really thought about it, she should have just started with this explanation “--is that I like collecting information. On everything. Anything that interests me. I always have, ever since I was a girl. It’s my… what you call it?”

“Fetish.”

Yana scowled. “Pastime.”

“A spy by night then, serving herself.”


“Spy,” she scoffed at the word. “But yes, I suppose. That is exactly what I am.”

Fiona pressed the ether missile closer. She seemed to steel herself for a moment, and Yana took that chance to press her case some more.

“I’ve never hidden it from anyone though. How many times have you seen me jotting something down? Too much for you to count, so much that you stopped noticing. But you know what the problem is? I might have written something in here that was never supposed to see the light of day. Incriminating evidence, or the like. Perhaps a personal secret of one of the higher-ups. Knowledge is a dangerous tool in the right hands. Powerful. This is not about Etzos as a city. This is someone trying to prevent their dirty laundry from being tossed into the open. I’m just a sacrifice they are willing to make. They manipulate the information given to the public, they put a bounty on my head, and they will burn my collection and bind me to the torture rack. If I deny the accusations and try to tell the truth, I am a liar. If I confess to my ‘crimes’, I am a spy. No matter what option I choose, the end result is the same. I will be broken, I will confess, I will be branded a spy, and I will be silenced.” She would have attempted a shrug, but it was hard to pull off while immobilized.

“I know you like gathering information and knowledge as well,” she nodded at the book in Fiona’s hand. “It’s all in there. I observe, collect and analyse, nothing more. And yet, here I am. Now, Fiona, what do you suppose would happen if they saw you hunt down secrets for your own collection?”
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