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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Of salt and swagger, Part One
City/Area: Cycres, near Ne’haer
Notes/Warnings: It’s a memory thread. Bandits attack. There’s some violence. Pash stabs a dude and cries. He’s a teenager. Part two will follow up with injuries received.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Blades (Tamo Daggers): Pommel strike
Endurance: The pain of a broken bone
Unarmed Combat: Pressure point: elbow
Unarmed Combat: Using your whole body as a weapon
Unarmed Combat: Weapons of opportunity
Unarmed Combat: Emotion-driven response

Non-skill Knowledge:
Location: Cycres
NPC: Traek: Is kind of a bad-ass father
NPC: Ioyas: Pash’s youngest brother

Loot: Greater respect for his father.
Injuries/Overstepping: Broken arm. Bruised back.
Fame: Reviewer’s discretion! (Bandits conquered!)
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Thread Name: Slow carriages and wrathful ladies
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Um a bit of crowd control
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Zipper

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Maintaining a stern composure under pressure
Detection: Assessing skill
Detection: Reading the body language of a ruling Naer
Intimidation: Using the Ether Missile as a crowd control tool
Intimidation: Or else
Linguistics: The cadence of Grovokian
Negotiation: Reaching an accord
Negotiation: Talking your way towards a compromise
Politics: Maintaining decorum in the presence of foreign dignitaries

Non-Skill Knowledge
Odessa: Vice Queen of Augiery
Odessa: Whip Master
Odessa: Scary as Fuck
Odessa: Knows Robin and Zipper as Mages
Naerikk: Haters of Men
Augiery: Home of the Naerikk
Language: Grovokian
Grovokian: Guttural Sounding

Robin

Skill Knowledge
Discipline: Restraining Instinct
Discipline: Settling on an Agreement
Discipline: Not Offering a Comeback
Negotiation: Sort-of Admitting Error
Intimidation: Asking the Earth to Crack
Intimidation: The Wind as Crowd-Control
Intimidation: Anonymity is a Blessing
Linguistics: The cadence of Grovokian

Non-Skill Knowledge
Odessa: Vice Queen of Augiery
Odessa: Whip Master
Odessa: Scary as Fuck
Odessa: Knows Robin and Zipper as Mages
Naerikk: Haters of Men
Augiery: Home of the Naerikk
Language: Grovokian
Grovokian: Guttural Sounding
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Negative? Use of magic in public for both, the usual squabbling, deliberate use of magic to nearly harm someone on either end.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Thread Name: Strike! The Sword Maiden's Folly
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Already halfway graded by Jade, my half is just late for the party
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
  • Acrobatics: Footwork in Combat
  • Tactics: Taking Initiative
  • Blade (One Handed): Timing Your Strikes
  • Blade (One Handed): Arcing Strikes
  • Blade (One Handed): Horizontal Strikes
  • Blade (One Handed): Chaining Attacks
Non-Skill Knowledges
  • Stekir: Herd Behavioral Patterns
  • Stekir: Behavioral Attack Patterns
  • Stekir: Have a Pack Mentality
  • Stekir: Dangerous in Numbers
  • Personal: Grown Since Uthaldria
  • Uphrisca: Enjoys Spectacles
  • Uphrisca: Believes In You

Loot: 2 Stekir pelt
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 For Creature Slaying
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP:No
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Thread Name: Paternal Wisdom
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
No skills - this is very much a pc development thread and is there to mark a moment of realisation for Vega and a shared experience for her and her father. The context of this is that Arlo has found out that his mother died a few days ago.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Three idiots in a bar
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Robin:
Skill Knowledges
Endurance: Feeding a Spell
Discipline: Not Breaking a Table
Discipline: Holding back from starting a fight
Tactics: How to Kill a Mutant
Tactics: Considering Reinforcements
Tactics: Weighing Your Chances
Intimidation: A Defier’s Smile
Intimidation: An Upsetting Lie

Non Skill Knowledges
Zipper: Full name: Zippomaria
Gangui: The Turkey Knight
Gangui: Possesses a magic sword that can absorb and reflect magic
Attunement: Detects Magic
Lotharro: Warrior Giants of Uthaldria

Gangui:
Skill Knowledges:
Discipline: Calming one nerves in the face of fear
Leadership: Keeping the group on track
Discipline: Refraining from the use of violence
Etiquette: Don’t spit.
Discipline: Not wavering on a contract's terms.
Tactics: How to kill a mutant.
Politics: Magic is a taboo subject.
Discipline: Sticking it out when intuition tells you to quit while you are ahead.

Non Skill Knowledges:
PC: Robin
Robin: Black Guard
Robin: Defier
Robin: Zipper’s apprentice
Robin: Knows of Gangui’s secret sword
Zipper: Crippled Attuner
Zipper: Knows of Gangui’s secret sword
Zipper: Must touch item to detect magic.
Defiance: Controls elements
Attunment: Detects magic.
Lotharro: Warrior giants of Uthaldria

Zipper
Skill Knowledges:
Deception: Presenting an incomplete picture of the truth
Deception: Working your lies around a social saboteur
Deception: Not a combat mage
Detection: Sensing hidden displeasure
Discipline: Suffering the consistent nuisance that is Robin Stark
Intimidation: Uttering a single word for terrifying emphasis
Intelligence: Using Transmutation to seek out and confirm information
Leadership: Asserting authority over a subordinate
Politics: The taboo of magic

Non Skill Knowledges:
Lotharro: Warrior giants of Uthaldria
Gangui: Possesses a magic sword that can absorb and reflect magic
Gangui: Ignorant of the nuances of magic
Gangui: Ever-ready to start a scene
Gangui: Not fond of Robin
Robin: Refuses to shut the fuck up
Robin: Uncooperative
Robin: A liability in professional settings

Loot: Nupe
Injuries/Overstepping: Nupe
Fame: Nupe
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Robin
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Thread Name: From the Mud, A New Beast Arises
City/Area: Scalvoris - Outlying Scalvoris Town area
Notes/Warnings: Nothing special really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Determining How Long I've Been Unconscious Based on How Hungry I am

Stealth: Walk in water, not on shore to conceal footprints

Stealth: Using a cloak to hide your injuries

Stealth: Stick to the shadows

Hunting: Recognizing Wolf Tracks

Hunting: Unknown Attacker's (Nir'wei's) Boot Tracks

Loot: Reacquire Javelin lost in previous thread
Injuries/Overstepping: None, injuries earned in previous thread
Fame: None
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)


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Thread Name: [url=h/viewtopic.php?f=80&t=9015&p=61854#p61854]Vulnerabilities and Strengths[/url]
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Recognising when admitting your vulnerability helps others
Discipline: Sometimes, it's not good to deal with it on your own
Psychology: There is strength in unity
Running: Running with a different center of gravity
Strength: Forcing yourself to move after a panic attack
Strength: Running when pregnant


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Padraig
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Comfort first, reason second.
Caregiving: Empathise with your own stories.
Discipline: Not going on a pointless search.
Discipline: Sorting out different emotions
Logistics: Planning for those at home while you're away
Logistics: Weighing up options for travel
Psychology: Putting fears in the open can lessen them
Storytelling: Stories of childhood

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Up Shit Creek
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Gangui

Skill Knowledges
Etiquette: How to behave at breakfast
Persuasion: Bringing up the same point repeatedly
Persuasion: Invoking an image of splendor
Persuasion: Relating with your audience.
Persuasion: Changing an important detail to sound more convincing.
Disguise: Vaguely Pretending to be Married
Investigating: Asking around for directions
Stealth: Hiding in plain sight.
Leadership: Taking the lead, even if you have no clue what you’re doing.
Seduction: A respectable kiss on the hand

Non-Skill Knowledges
Location: Foster’s Landing: The Harbor
Location: Foster’s Landing: The Tower
Ellen’wyn: Her stomach is actually a Rupture portal
Ellen’wyn: Makes Gangui calmer
Ellen’wyn: Has some kind of issue talking about her Avriel side
Ellen’wyn: Boils Gangui’s blood… in the right place
Honor-bound to a fair lady

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges
Endurance: Eating more than your fill
Endurance: Taking action on a full stomach
Navigation: Familiarizing oneself with a new city
Disguise: Vaguely pretending to be married
Cooking: Dry rubbed chicken
Intelligence: Working your way up the authorities
Etiquette: Don’t talk with your mouth full
Rhetoric: Defending your personal beliefs
Persuasion: Goading someone into action
Intimidation: Harder when you’re small

Non-Skill Knowledges
Location: (Foster’s Landing) The Harbor
Location: (Foster’s Landing) The Tower
Gangui: Easily embarrassed
Gangui: A terrible liar
Gangui: Believes Immortals are evil
Gangui: A possible mutual attraction
Gangui: Crude yet chivalrous
Gangui: Father murdered by Fald’run
Gangui: Family sword stolen by Fald’run

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Negative fame for outright lying to an officer? Reviewer's choice.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: Shades of Silver
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Fightin' (Vega and her cousins get physical. Mild swearing)

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Strength: Putting your strength into a movement
Strength: Tearing free of a grip
Strength: Use your strength to hold another in place
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Leap attack
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Use a strength advantage
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Use knees to pin arms



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Vega will have a black eye, bruised cheek, split lip etc. Will take about 10 trials to heal fully. You should see the other guy!
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: 10 Things I Hate About You
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: 9 Posts | 14 Knowledge
Intimidation: How To Glare
Intimidation: Crossed Arms Make You Look Less Friendly
Intimidation: How To Wield Sarcasm As A Weapon
Intimidation: Use Curse Words To Make Your Point
Intimidation: Use Anger To Intimidate
Intimidation: Use Bravado To Intimidate
Persuasion: Use A Promise To Persuade
Persuasion: Sometimes Means Resorting To Begging
Discipline: Bite Your Tongue
Discipline: Conjure Relevant Memories To Control Your Emotions
Detection: Being Intensely Aware Of A Person’s Presence
Gambling: How To Make A Bet
Unarmed Combat: How To Shove Your Opponent
Rhetoric: How To Explain Your Point Of View

Other Knowledge:
Location: Earth Quarter
Bronze Boar: Second Floor Is A Fighting Arena
Rharne Holiday: Beer Festival
Race: Naerikk
Naerikk: Vicious
Moira: Head Server At The Bronze Boar
Bennett: Living In Rharne
Bennett: Calls You ‘Lowtown’
Vincent: Good Actor
Vincent: Concerned About Appearances
Vincent: A Skilled Fighter
Vincent: Refuses To Fight You
Vincent: Wants To Protect You
Vincent: Has A Fear Of Failing To Protect You
Vincent: The Story of Treidhart
Vincent: The Reasons He Left You During Vhalar 716

Loot: +15gn for completing the odd job, -5gn for betting against Vincent
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer’s choice.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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