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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Eggs & Training
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Meditation: Doesn't need to be sitting still.
Meditation: Movement as meditation
Meditation: Breathing in to coincide with movement.
Meditation: Breathing out slowly
Meditation: Using repetition to aid meditation
Unarmed combat: Using repeated movements to build muscle memory

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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Gangui
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name:Do you want to start a ri-oooot?
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Warnings: Lynching and violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Oberan:
SKILL
Stealth: Moving sneakily through a crowd
Stealth: Easier when you aren’t the center of attention
Pickpocket: Stealing a dagger out of someone’s hand
Pickpocket: easier when people are distracted by something
Acrobatics: Low crouch for balance
Acrobatics: clambering onto a roof
Acrobatics: carefully moving over treacherous roof tiles
Deception: fake tears
Deception: pretending to be sorry
Deception: being the instigator in a crowd
Endurance: Thrill Control can keep you going

NON-SKILL
Gangui: Mustachioed Lynchmaster
Gangui: Met Tanvi, Vice Queen of Augiery
Gangui: Talks big
Gangui: the most patriotic, Immortal-hating, handlebar mustache-wearing man in Etzos
Gangui: influenced by Naerikk charms?
Gangui: clearly adept at rioting
Gangui: doesn’t mind lynching people for no reason
Gangui: can’t stand grandma’s flowerpot being broken (go figure)

Gangui:
Skill Knowledge:
Leadership: Taking Accountability
Rhetoric: Moral Accusations
Rhetoric: Writing the Future Now
Rhetoric: Singling out the minority
Leadership: Taking point
Leadership: Commanding presence
Rhetoric: Keep the women and children safe
Running: Keeping up with a Mob Chase
Politics: How to start a mob/riot
Politics: Etzori Conservatism

Non-skill Knowledge:
Oberan: Mob leader
Oberan: Not nice to Grandmothers
Oberan: Connected over a lynched man


Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: ?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Of Salt and Swagger, Part Two
City/Area: Cycres, near Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Pash and his father, Traek, have their wounds treated from the thread before hand. No warning needed.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Watching your own wounds treated
Medicine: Determining a broken bone
Medicine: Setting a broken bone
Surgery: Choosing the right tools
Surgery: Three point control of an open wound
Surgery: Removing bone fragments from a wound before setting

Non-Skill Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing that doesn’t heal over time.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: In the strangest places
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Reining in your temper
Meditation: Concentrate on movement
Meditation: Clear your mind
Meditation: Correct breathing requires focus
Meditation: Tapping into the calm in your core
Meditation: Pull in calmness, push out tension


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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Ellen'wyn
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Thread Name: Breaking Up Foundations of Ash
City/Area: Etzos frontier
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Gangui

Skill Knowledges
Endurance: A hard hike through the wilderness
Discipline: Using a mental cadence to push onward and upward.
Detection: Spotting a fire from a great distance.
Leadership: Charge!!!!!
Blade (Bastard Sword): Power Strike.
Blade (Bastard Sword): Safely breaking sword locks.
Blade (Bastard Sword): Riposte
Acrobatics: Epic dive.
Acrobatics: Rolling spin move.

Non-Skill Knowledges
The Severed Children Cult
Magic: Rupture
Rupture: Creates portals
Rupture: Associated with a “ripping” sound
Rupture: Can be used to drop rocks on people
Ellen’wyn: Will fly to protect a baby.
Ellen’wyn: Honor before safety.
Ellen’wyn: Her mere presence in dangerous situations staves off folly.
Ellen’wyn: Knows a thing or two about fieldcraft.

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges
Field Craft: Lighting a fire may take a few tries
Field Craft: Armor is cumbersome in the wilds
Ranged: Shooting in the dark
Stealth: Using trees as cover
Tactics: Projectiles can distract enemies
Flying: Crash landing
Flying: Harder after years on the ground
Intimidation: Wings can make you seem larger
Unarmed Combat: Flailing can save your life

Non-Skill Knowledges
The Severed Children Cult
Magic: Rupture
Rupture: Creates portals
Rupture: Associated with a “ripping” sound
Rupture: Can be used to drop rocks on people
Gangui: Formidable in combat
Gangui: Might be right about his armor

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Up to the reviewer.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Why so blue, Arlo Creede?
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:6 posts = 11 total
Discipline: Not killing someone in the throes of fury
Endurance: Lack of sleep can make you grouchy
Fieldcraft: Telling the time by looking at the sun
Fieldcraft: Keep the camp tidy
Fieldcraft: Cleaning utensils
Fletching: The tools you use are really important.
Persuasion: Being right in an argument
Storytelling: What my cousin said
Storytelling: Trying to get across the gist of a conversation
Arlo
Skill Knowledge:6 posts = 11 total
Discipline: Not losing your temper in the face of entirely unreasonable behaviour
Persuasion: Keeping someone on track
Persuasion: Being right in an argument
Persuasion: Ensuring that you get the last word
Storytelling: Maintain your focus, and your audiences
Storytelling: Wild tales are interesting
Storytelling: The night the fog swallowed me up
Storytelling: How to make an unbelievable story, believable.
Storytelling: Put your story in context for the listener
Storytelling: Add in dramatic detail
Storytelling: Keep it appropriate for your audience


Loot: No for either
Injuries/Overstepping: Not for either
Fame: No for either
Collaboration: Yes for both
Magic EXP: No for either.
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Zip
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: You can't have evolution with lack of out-group preferences
City/Area: Etzos - Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Stache ghosts
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui

Skill Knowledge:
Strength: Row, row, the boat
Navigation: Foster’s Canals
Rhetoric: Only emancipated men can make technological wonders
Intelligence: The Art of Gathering Information
Investigation: Separating the Immortal worshipers from the sane.
Rhetoric: The human spirit will always triumph over frail arcane sorceries
Persuasion: Breaking the Ice to leave a good first impression
Intelligence: Trading money for key pieces of information.

Other Knowledge:
Foster’s Landing: Location - The Treasure Trove’
The Treasure Trove: Disgustingly Foreign
The Treasure Trove: Decorated Terribly
NPC - Gossager
Gossager: Bartender at the Treasure Trove
Gossager: Introduced to Zipper as a potential client
Zipper: Doesn’t care about architectural infrastructure
Zipper: Intelligence keeper
Zipper: Not too privy on jokes
Zipper: Doesn’t beat around the bush

Zipper
Skill Knowledge:
Politics: The advantages and limitations of acting outside your jurisdiction
Politics: Nationalism can be both a self-defeating inefficiency and a useful tool
Intelligence: Bartering for information
Intelligence: Selecting a contact that hears everything in the room
Linguistics: Slang differs even within the same language
Negotiation: The assurance of success
Negotiation: Presenting your case
Deception: Laughing at a joke you don’t understand

Other Knowledge:
Foster’s Landing: Location - The Treasure Trove
Gangui: A useful icebreaker for the Foster’s Landing’s locals
Gangui: A better warrior than a tour guide
Gangui: As much asset as liability
Gangui: Should have been a historian
Gangui: Etzori patriot
Gangui: Mistrusts foreigners
Gangui: Talks too much
NPC - Gossager
Gossager: Bartender at the Treasure Trove
Gossager: Contact at the Treasure Trove in Foster’s Landing

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Collaboration: Yeah
Magic EXP: No
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Vincent D'Ordyn
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: 10 Things I Hate About You
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: 8 Posts | 13 Knowledge
Unarmed Combat: Predicting an opponents actions
Unarmed Combat: Forcing an enemy to keep their guard up
Unarmed Combat: Quick punches
Unarmed Combat: Guard Breaker
Unarmed Combat: Use your legs to get more power
Discipline: Controlling your emotions in a fight
Discipline: Not letting taunts sway your position
Etiquette: Not finishing a fight that’s already won
Etiquette: Not fighting when you're in the wrong
Persuasion: The Truth


Other Knowledge:
Location: Bronze Boar
Location: Bronze Boar Fighting Ring
Rharne: City of brawlers
Rharne Holiday: Beer Festival
Sabine: Feels betrayed
Sabine: Still mad
Sabine: Makes bad deals where you’re concerned
Sabine: Wanted to fight you
Sabine: You made her cry, again.
Sabine: Doesn’t hate you
Bennett: Helped you get a job
Bennett: Thinks Sabine is too much fire for you
Bennett: You owe him a story

Loot: +15gn for completing the odd job, -1gn to the patron Sabine stole a drink from.
Injuries/Overstepping: Split Lip
Fame: Reviewer’s choice.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Kali'rial
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Profession: Hunter for Cally's (Expert)
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Is it Hunting, or Fishing? Or Hishing!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Weapon: Shortbow - How to adjust your shot for different ammunition
Ranged Weapon: Shortbow - How to adjust for light refraction
Ranged Weapon: Shortbow - Adjusting for line drag
Ranged Weapon: Shortbow - Adapting an arrowhead
Hunting: Identifying prey underwater
Hunting: Experimenting with new weapons


Loot: Forty Colbalt Mastercraft barbed arrows - 16GN (deducted from Ledger), one chum bucket - 3GN, one ten yard rope made of twined fishing line - 1GN,
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Tio Silver
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Who Seeks the Seekers
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Chemistry: Fizzing = Bad
Chemistry: Beware of causing fires
Chemistry: Always use proper safety equipment
Necromancy: Thralls make good firehooks
Persuasion: Pestering people until you get what you want
Persuasion: Why not hire a sneaky guy?


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
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