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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Behind the Curtain
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Strong language. Difficult situations. While there could be more conversation to this thread, and there will be elsewhere, the ending is perfect so whatevs.

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Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge:
Business Management: Accepting a business proposal
Business Management: Keeping it professional
Discipline: Refusing to retaliate
Etiquette: Using familiar language to build rapport
Endurance: Taking the anger to your face
Endurance: Conversing through pain
Intimidation: Damn your house!
Rhetoric: Calling the other man out
Rhetoric: Breaking promises to tell the truth

Other Knowledge:
Oliver Venora: Darcyanna's Loving, Protective Older Brother
Oliver Venora: Offered you a printmaking job
Oliver Venora: Likes his wine like his humor, dark and dry
Oliver Venora: Weighed your worth
Oliver Venora: Dealt with anger using his fists and your face
Oliver Venora: Pretty much family now
Location: Bellesoir, Venora

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised, scabbed face - 5 to 8 trials to fade.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Oliver Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Not lashing out in anger... again
Etiquette: Offering wine during a formal meeting
Etiquette: Allowing someone to finish before speaking
Persuasion: Making a reasonable offer of employment
Politics: Formally inviting someone to an audience
Politics: Making others more comfortable in your presence by being casual
Politics: Structure of House Gawyne
Psychology: Projecting one's own emotions onto someone else
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Strike first, strike hard
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Tackling an opponent to keep control

Other Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Lord of Gawyne
Caius Gawyne: Darcy's lover
Caius Gawyne: Printer and scholar
Caius Gawyne: Foul-mouthed
Caius Gawyne: Wants an ally against Darcy's issues
Darcyanna Venora: Has a drug problem
Darcyanna Venora: Tortured mentally and emotionally

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore knuckles. :(
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

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Oliver Venora
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Thread Name: Don't Cry Over Spilt Wine
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Extremely cute brother/sister time.

Requested Rewards:
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Questioning ones motives
Socialisation: Mingling in social gatherings
Socialisation: Making an entrance
Cosmetology: Venora high fashion
Resistance: Standing up to your bully
Resistance: Bouncing back after humiliation
Politics: Putting on your game face
Dancing: How to enter the dance floor
Dancing: How to hold your partner

Other Knowledge:
Oliver: Older brother
Oliver: You think he’s the bees knees
Oliver: Cheered you up
Oliver: Can command a room
Oliver: Role model
Oliver: You call him Oli, he calls you DA
Location: Bellesoir
Location: Venora

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Oliver Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Dancing: Proper dance for a noble
Discipline: Maintaining calm when angry
Detection: Recognizing people by their sniffles
Etiquette: Being nice to someone to improve their mood
Persuasion: Using adult trends to appear more mature
Persuasion: Cheering up your sister by offering to take her shopping
Politics: Correctly announcing a Lady
Politics: Dressing for the occasion

Other Knowledge:
Darcyanna Venora: Picked on by Pythera
Darcyanna Venora: Your special pet name for her is DA
Darcyanna Venora: Calls you Oli
Darcyanna Venora: Younger sister
Darcyanna Venora: Enjoys dancing with you

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope!
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Charlie Warrick
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Babysitting
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: So goddamn wholesome
Requested Rewards:

Charlie
Skill Knowledges

Detection: Recognising scents
Detection: Listening carefully
Discipline: Recognising childish habits
Interrogation: Asking point blank questions
Persuasion: 'Old enough' doesn't count
Persuasion: Commands don't always work
Politics: Dressing appropriately for functions
Politics: House Venora
Politics: Wine is essential to meetings

Non-Skill

Alice Warrick: Mother
Victor Warrick: Father
Violet Warrick: Sister
Jonathon Warrick: Brother

Oliver Venora: Is proper
Oliver Venora: Has a sister
Oliver Venora: Likes the name Charlotte

Oliver
Skill Knowledges

Etiquette: Maintaining composure in public
Etiquette: Politeness first, always
Persuasion: Pouting is not an effective tactic
Politics: Attending parties for appearances' sake
Politics: Knowing House Warrick
Politics: Dressing appropriately for functions
Politics: Addressing nobility by their titles
Politics: Knowing your family's position in succession

Non Skill

Charlie Warrick: Charlie, not Charlotte
Charlie Warrick: Wants to be a Skyrider AND a baroness
Charlie Warrick: Wants to fly
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Velaine Krome
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Here Goes Nothing
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge
  • Empathy: Touch to Strengthen
  • Empathy: Flaxen Yellow as Fear
  • Empathy: Tapestry to Investigate Causes
  • Empathy: Be Aware of Your Eye Contact Duration
  • Psychology: Extreme Fear Leads to Paranoia
  • Psychology: Symptoms of Paranoia
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • House Krome: Going Through a Financial Crisis
  • House Krome: Will Suffer Due to Incompetent Rulers
  • Sophia Krome: Eager to Marry You Off
  • Jersey Krome: Wrapped in Fear
  • Jersey Krome: Spiraling into Madness
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes, please!
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Navyri
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Profession: Thief
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Thread Name: Culture Shock
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Not really the most thrilling read. More of just me playing around and trying to figure out Navyri's history a bit.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Skill:
Detection: You Can Learn A Lot By Simply Watching
Detection: How to Tell When You’re Being Whispered About
Discipline: Taking Stressful News in Stride
Discipline: Following Orders You Don’t Want To
Linguistics: Some Words Can’t be Translated
Endurance: The Aftermath of Sunburn

Non-skill:
Location: Olọravu Slosneppe (The Medicine House)
Olọravu Slosneppe: Tey'droa
Olọravu Slosneppe: Ivan Sigmun
Desnind: Incorporates Nature Everywhere
Desnind: The Women Age, The Men are Free
Desnind: Filled with Treehouses
Desnind: The Native Language is Xanthea
Moseke: Earth, Stone, Nature, Life
Moseke: Mother of Sev'ryn
Language: Xanthea

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Navyri has sunburn, but it has been addressed in a previous thread.
Fame: Being discovered as a Naer in Desnind (-10)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Matters of the Heart
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Blades: Every attack should be a defence
Blades: Open, ready stance
Blades: Sharp, swift strike with the flat of the blade
Blades: Twist the blade to maintain flexibility
Endurance: Practicing for over a break leaves you exhausted
Strength: Sword drills to build up arm strength.


Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nurp
Collaboration: Nope

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Empty Bowl
City/Area: Cally's, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Almost finished abandoned thread.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (3+1=9):
Caregiving: Greeting someone by name
Caregiving: Distracting with simple tasks
Lute: Holding conversation while holding a tune
Lute: Keeping a tune while being physically distracted
Lute: Transitioning to a new piece of music
Empathy: Exploring the tangles of a crowd
Empathy: Calming an irritated tangle
Socialization: Studying your audience
Socialization: Paying attention to the grumpiest member of the crowd

Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes.

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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I do not feel fear
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (8+2=10)
Deception: A toast when you don't care
Detection: Suspicious behavior
Detection: The not so tame intentions of strangers
Empathy: That feeling of someone else in your tangle
Empathy: The Biqaj tangle
Empathy: Warm colors of amusement and pride
Rhetoric: Speaking up for a stranger
Rhetoric: Broody conversation
Resistance: Lukewarm ale is a slow way to drown
Resistance: The burn of whiskey

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes (with Keegan)
Magic EXP: Yes

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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Some live, some die
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sorry, got abandoned
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Basic skin care
Gardening: Mint grows in the cold
Gardening: Wild mint can be found in the forest
Gardening: Mint is best left to it's own devices.
Medicine: Mint is good for the stomach
Medicine: Mint is good for the skin


Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nurp
Collaboration: Nope
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Lei'lira
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Profession: Farmer
Renown: 267
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Warrick] Tending to Business
City/Area: Warrick/Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: There's a brief not very detailed description of a medical procedure that is done on cows to determine if they are pregnant that may be unpleasant to read about.
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Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry: Cows; a cow's gestation period is 279-287 trials, with 283 being average; cows bearing bull calves tend to have slightly longer pregnancies than those bearing heifer calves
Animal Husbandry: Cows; should be roughly 450 trials old before they are bred, and a bull should be at least an arc old before being bred
Animal Husbandry: Cows; cows need a 90 trial rest from being milked before they birth their calves to allow the damage caused to their udders from milking to heal before they must nurse their calves
Animal Husbandry: Cows; how to choose the right bull for your herd
Animal Husbandry: Sheep; Sheep should be sheared during late Ashan or early Ymiden each arc in order to prevent them from overheating in Saun.
Medicine: Cows; rectal palpation of the uterus is a good way to tell if a cow is pregnant, and can be done as soon as 35 trials into the pregnancy


Other Knowledge

Lei'lira: believes that experience is the best teacher

Cows: must be pregnant in order to be milked
Cows: Heifers are bovines that have not had a calf yet, and are considered to be such until they birth their second calf
Cows: cows are mature bovines that have birthed two or more calves

Loot: none


Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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