Review Request 2.1.2

[Nauta F'mos Geey]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sey No Mour
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Bounty thread has been abandoned by everyone else
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Meditation: "It will all be alright"
• Investigation: Asking the right questions to an event
• Interrogation: Details to narrow down methods
• Tactics: Use bait to lure out a target
• Leadership: Volunteers are less likely to betray
• Medicine: The organized autopsy charts of Ne'haer
• Poison: Kidnapper spider venom makes it easier to work on bodies
• Medicine: Identifying the ails of poison victims by recorded symptoms

Loot: If you want the captain to take Nauta's joke seriously, or is just nice enough to humour him, sure; give him some gold for services rendered.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: Nauta answered the call for bounty hunters and though he isn't going to help to capture Seymour, he did help especially in identifying the poison.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: -

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Getting Ready
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Vega is preparing for a date. I wanted to try and write a thread which was in parallel with a collaborative thread, looking at one small aspect of the first two posts of the collab thread and shining a light on it (linked in this thread). As such, it's got some (very little) cross over of words which are used in both threads. This thread is the required number of words without those counted.

Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Do up a corset with the fastenings in the front most of the way, then twist it round to make it easier to fasten.
Cosmetology: How to attach stockings
Cosmetology: Applying a treatment to hair
Cosmetology: A simple messy bun
Cosmetology: How to apply kohl
Meditation: Simply focus on the breathing aspect to calm down.

Loot: All dealt with in previous thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes

[Niv]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: By Ashan's will
City/Area: Etzos (fosters landing)
Notes/Warnings: No but me and Gangui did the thread in google Docs so while it looks like there was God Moding or what ever its called there wasn't. We just like the way it flows this way.
Requested Rewards:
Niv
Skill Knowledges:
Ranged (bow): Don't be afraid of the string
Ranged (bow):Don't press your fingers on the arrow too hard.
Ranged (bow): You should shoot lower than you think
Ranged (bow): trust in your own aim.
Intelligence: Learning things through observation.
Stealth: Watching from the tree tops without being seen.
Intimidation: Making a little girl cry.
Deception: concealing your beliefs.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Pc: Gangui
Gangui: Hates Slavery and the Immortals
Gangui: Epic Stash
NPC: Caoindelbhan
NPC: Frimen
Frimen: Confused for a lady but is totally a Man
Frimen: Named for being freed from slavery
Frimen: Timid
Frimen: Niv’s new friend


Gangui
Skill Knowledges
Leadership: Commanding Voice
Investigation: Being Skeptical
Investigation: Never Assume Anything
Investigation: Simple Questions Simple Answers
Rheotric: Anti-Rynmere Words
Intimidation: Disciplining Children
Leadership: Making bold declarations
Persuasion: Recruiting members to a cause

Non-Skill Knowledges
PC: Niv
Niv: Hates Slavery
Niv: Passionate Tunawa
Niv: Agrees with Gangui
NPC: Frimen
Frimen: Named for being freed from slavery
Frimen: Timid
Frimen: Niv’s new friend

Loot: Not really.
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Fame: Probably positive for freeing a slave...but maybe also negative for chewing out the little girl and making her cry, but she deserved it >__>
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Hero's Life
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: PC Death. Violence. Nasty. Feels.
Requested Rewards:

Noth

Knowledge:
Detection: Finding a place where you are likely to be able to stay
Detection: Gauging skill level with a glance
Detection: A feeling of heat
Detection: Recognising people from your dreams
Intimidation: Holding attention of a busy barkeep
Intimidation: Calm and assured to intimidate even the most skilled
Intimidation: Killing Heroes
Mace: Useful in close quarters
Mace: Ready to draw position

Aeon: Dead
Aeon: You killed him.
Hostess (Faith): Lives in Scalvoris
Hostess (Faith): Was friends with Aeon
Hostess (Faith): Husband is called Padraig (Curator)

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Significant Negative (maybe 100?)
Collaboration: Yes

Faith

Knowledge:
Discipline: Moving despite pain and fear and grief
Discipline: Resisting intimidation.
Discipline: Not reacting when someone tries to provoke a reaction.
Endurance: Ignoring pregnancy symptoms in times of emergency
Investigation: Tiny details add up to major clues.
Strength: Standing up despite pain everywhere
Strength: Running while pregnant is hard.


Aeon: Dead
Aeon: Murdered by Noth
Noth: Prince of Eternal Mercies
Noth: Lives in Etzos
Noth: Knows Padraig's name
Noth: Was in Scalvoris

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, please!
Collaboration: Yes

Aeon

Knowledge:
Self: Dead

Loot: Dust, ash.
Injuries/Overstepping: Fairly major headache. Brief.
Fame: Probably not.....
Collaboration: Yes

[Ellen'wyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Joke's On You
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Foul language and a lot of slandering of Noth on Gangui's part. Also, this was written real-time in a GoogleDec (i.e. consensual godmodding), so it will seem as though we are taking liberties with the other's character.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Flying: Utilizing updrafts
Flying: Staying lower to the ground for safety
Flying: Shortens travel times
Flying: Increases sight range and visibility
Strength: Flying with a bag full of gear
Navigation: Finding your way based off memory
Endurance: Keep moving even though you’re sore
Acrobatics: Pull in your wings when you roll
Unarmed (Brawling): Get your opponent on the ground

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Gangui: Leader of the Sons of Justice
Organization: The Sons of Justice, aka Turkey Company
The Sons of Justice: Seeking order in Foster’s Landing
PC: Noth, aka the Prince of Eternal Mercies
Noth: Wanted Alive
Noth: Leader of Al’Angryly
Organization: Al’Angryly
Al’Angryly: A criminal organization
Ith'ession: Noth sounds similar to "joke"

Gangui

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Rhetoric: Emphasizing Key Words
Rhetoric: Creating your own definitions
Rhetoric: Repetition of Ideas
Rhetoric: Tone
Rhetoric: Crescendo
Rhetoric: Defamatory Remarks
Rhetoric: Using flow to correlate opposites
Leadership: Stopping a mob from forming.
Seduction: Standing up for a woman

Non-Skill Knowledges
Noth: Wanted Alive
Noth: Evil Scumbag
Noth: The Joker
Noth: Leader of Al’Angryly
Organization: Al’Angryly
Al’Angryly: An evil organization
Ellen’wyn: Returned to Foster’s Landing in Zi’Da

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Some nasty bruises and soreness for Ellen
Fame: Positive fame for Gangui speaking at a rally
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Charlie Warrick]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Sweet Scents of Home
City/Area: Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Feels.

Requested Rewards (Charlie):
Knowledge:

Caretaking: Holding someone's hand
Caretaking: Offering an ear
Detection: Scent is linked to memory
Discipline: Losing your cool
Discipline: Hiding your emotions
Etiquette: Bowing to other nobles
Etiquette: When to call someone by their first name
Leadership: Deciding someone needs to eat
Rhetoric: Comforting speeches

Darcyanna Venora: Oliver's sister
Darcyanna Venora: Drug addict
Henry: Skyriders
Venora: Bellesoir

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive; helping someone in need

Requested Rewards (Darcyanna):
Knowledge:

Detection: Familiar smells of home
Detection: Recalling details of people from the past
Stealth: Hiding your face from the locals
Sociology: Making smalltalk
Sociology: My shout
Politics: Strategically keeping some things to yourself

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's choice

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Valeria Burhan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Astedia] Ladies' Day
City/Area: Astedia, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Celeste Andaris

Knowledge:

• Skill Knowledge
  • Cosmetology: Scent is very important
  • Intelligence: In noble families, scandal lasts a long time
  • Intelligence: Know everything you can before a meeting
  • Intelligence: Tiny details can be the difference between winning and losing
  • Intelligence: Seek alternative viewpoints
  • Intelligence: Glean information by pretending to know something, then others will assume you do.
  • Intelligence: Gather names and details in a circuitous manner.
  • Politics: Remind people of their manners
• Non-skill
  • Valeria Burhan: Glows.
  • Valeria Burhan: Says she can sing
  • Valeria Burhan: Friends with Ivy Gawyne
  • Valeria Burhan: Friends with Darcyanna Venora
  • Darcyanna Venora: Plays the piano.

Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Valeria Burhan

Knowledge:

• Skill Knowledge (9 for 4 posts)
  • Cosmetology: Sometimes less is more
  • Cosmetology: The importance of scent
  • Politics: Remember your place
  • Acting: Thinking happy thoughts to fake happiness
  • Politics: Provide diplomatic answers
  • Politics: Casually name-dropping acquaintances in conversation
  • Politics: Humbling yourself can be detrimental
  • Rhetoric: Praising another
  • Elithem - Eye of the Beholder: Not effective in close political conversation
• Non-skill
  • Location: Astedia Estate
  • Celeste Andaris: Baroness
  • Celeste Andaris: Pregnant
  • Celeste Andaris: Seems to dislike Valeria
  • Celeste and Xander Andaris: Charitable

Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Caius Gawyne]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Roses and the Snow
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Addiction intervention gone terribly wrong. Strong language and feelings. Unsuccessful conversations abound. Lots of feels.

Requested Rewards:

Darcyanna Venora

Skill Knowledge:
Resistance: Coping with mild withdrawal symptoms.
Etiquette: Forgetting one’s self when returning home after a long while away
Etiquette: Saying thank you
Endurance: Weathering the wrath of those you love
Endurance: Having the strength to admit you have a problem
Politics: A poor excuse is as good as a lie
Politics: Choosing the lesser of two evils

Loot: One high quality carved ivory rose
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Oliver Venora

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Focusing on someone else's hurts
Discipline: Balancing excitement and fear
Discipline: Shifting the conversation even when you don't want to
Etiquette: Real families hug
Etiquette: Glowing compliments
Etiquette: Offering refreshments before difficult conversation
Psychology: I know about the drugs
Psychology: Letting your emotions take over

Loot: Cost of carved rose deducted from ledger.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Caius Gawyne

Skill Knowledge:
Deception: Keeping difficult secrets from loved ones
Deception: Hiding an intervention with a social visit
Discipline: Weathering someone else's withdrawal symptoms
Discipline: Saying no
Discipline: Optimistic game face
Discipline: Sticking to what you believe is right
Endurance: Standing your emotional ground
Rhetoric: Even my silence was for you.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

!	Message from: Harpy
	Pending from Niv.

[Nauta F'mos Geey]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Explosive Enthuiasm
City/Area: Sirothelle
Notes/Warnings: Memory thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Chemistry: The ease of causing a dust explosion
• Chemistry: The properties of Sulfur
• Alchemy: Explosives are flammable but not all flammables are explosives
• Alchemy: Possible even with materials as unlikely as shit
• Chemistry: Potency of elements in different mediums
• Alchemy: Sirothelle bomb mix; shit, burnt trees, ash of the Heart

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Scrunched Up & Funny Looking
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Design: Fashion: Designing a blanket to look, and feel, cool.
Needlecraft: Running Stitch
Needlecraft: Mark out the seams.
Needlecraft: "Careful Layering" technique
Needlecraft: Backstitch is stronger than running stitch.
Needlecraft: "Trick of the Light" technique


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None
Collaboration: No