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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Hard Knocks
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some violence
Requested Rewards:
Finn
Knowledge:
Strength: Pushing against Zipper with all your might.
Strength: Trying to push Zipper off of you
Endurance: Bruised after a fight with Marris
Endurance: Starting a fight despite being tired
Unarmed Combat: Throwing an angry punch at Zipper
Unarmed Combat: Knee to the groin
Unarmed Combat: Breaking away from Zipper’s face-hold
Unarmed Combat: Pulling Zipper’s hair
Unarmed Combat: Elbow jabs

Zip
Strength: Crushing a windpipe
Unarmed Combat: Aiming for permanent harm
Unarmed Combat: Eye poke
Unarmed Combat: Fighting dirty
Unarmed Combat: Nutcracker choke
Unarmed Combat: Oblique kick
Unarmed Combat: Striking the ears
Unarmed Combat: Throat Punch
Unarmed Combat: Weak spots of the human body

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Only in the past
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: Knuckle Duster
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: A Gambling Cheat
Unarmed Combat: Faking a Jab
Unarmed Combat: Escaping a Top Mount
Unarmed Combat: Using Ground and Body to Break an Arm
Unarmed Combat: Ground and Pound
Unarmed Combat: When in Doubt, Bank on a Nut Shot

Loot: Yes, from the gambling. None from the fight. (Amount at your discretion.)
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises.
Fame: Likely negative for gambling and fighting.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Ill-fitting /viewtopic.php?f=263&t=10269
City/Area: Middlecleft, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Reference to sex. Some sexual suggestions
Requested Rewards: Just my 10 xp please.
Knowledge: There are some but I dont' want any. I just want the points. Seriously. There's nothing in here that interests me. I wrote it to see if I still had Kovic in me and to train a bit.
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Negative, because everyone in Middlecleft hates Paplo and they talk smack about him.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Conquer Thyself
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Warrick Style) - Basic stance
Unarmed Combat - Control the flow of combat
Unarmed Combat - Controlled rage
Unarmed Combat - Using claws
Unarmed Combat - Pounce
Acrobatics - Leaping from all fours

Non-skill Knowledge:
Rynlism: Conquer Thyself
Farrix: Guided by the Fates
Farrix: Always has a purpose
Farrix: Believes that Rat will serve the Sacred Seven
Farrix: Defensive fighter

Loot: N/A
Injuries: Minor gashes on face, bruises.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: A home for justice
City/Area: Etzos - Outlying cities
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Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui
Running: Climbing a Hill
Business Management: Delegating Tasks
Business Management: Creating Leaders
Business Management: Dictating Terms
Business Management: Getting things done on a budget.
Business Management: Planning for the future.
Business Management: Taking risks.
Business Management: House Spouse’s are great investments
Niv: Tasked with building New Magani
Niv: Starting to notice Zip can be insufferable
Zipper: Patronizing towards Niv

Niv
Acrobatics: Knowing how to fall
Climbing: Aiming for the top
Climbing: Branches are for tall folk
Climbing: Endurance climbing
Climbing: Scaling a monstrous tree trunk
Climbing: Using tree creases as a climbing hold
Endurance: pushing upward despite tired limbs
Endurance: Mustering the strength for one final push
A future tunawa sanctuary in Etzos
Foundation of the sons of Justice

Zip
Attunement: Frequency: Niv
Attunement: Holding an active frequency
Attunement: Note: Curiosity
Attunement: Note: Tunawa
Attunement: Opening a frequency
Attunement: Rediscovering Attunement
Attunement: The Act of Attunement
Attunement: The dangers of attuning to a frequency beyond your weight class
Attunement: Tracking a frequency
Strength: Prying a large man’s arm off your shoulder
Loot: -800 GN for Gangui for purchase of land
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Zip

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Thread Name: The Treachery of Caius Gawyne - Part 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Treachery and swearing, all while not awake.
Requested Rewards:
Zipper
N/A Dream thread.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Dream
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Caius Gawyne
N/A Dream thread.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Dream
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: Did you miss me?
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: One-eyed freak alert
Requested Rewards:
Yana
Yana
Deception: changing your appearance a bit to avoid being recognized
Deception: keep talking, then suddenly strike
Deception: body language to imply sadness
Unarmed combat: Hook to the face
Unarmed combat: headbutt
Tactics: Catch the opponent off guard
Strength: grappling with an opponent
Intelligence: recruiting the help of an old comrade
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Negative for brawling in public
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Zipper
Zipper
Discipline: Withholding physical retaliation
Endurance: Enduring the backlash of a sloppy headbutt
Endurance: Taking a headbutt
Endurance: Taking a right hook to the eye
Unarmed Combat: Headbutt
Unarmed Combat: Throwing a retaliatory punch
Unarmed Combat: Stand-up grappling
Strength: Straining against an opponent
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nupe
Fame: Negative for brawling in public
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: First Steps (Memory/Solo)
City/Area: Faldrass
Notes/Warnings:Sephira begins learning Rupturing.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Ambient ether is used to make portals
Rupturing: "Chasing Portals" are short distance
Rupturing: The gathered ether must be infused with the mage's intent
Rupturing: Using hand gestures helps guide portal creation
Rupturing: Visualization is vital for portal making
Discipline: Dealing with a grumpy teacher
Loot: N\A
Injuries/Overstepping: N\A
Fame: Probably N\A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP:Yes

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Thread Name: The Expedition to Orimar
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Patrick is the GST for this thread in which Ellen signs on for the big treasure hunt.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 9 total possible (4 posts)
Politics: Signing a binding contract
Politics: Release of liability
Rhetoric: Keeping it short and sweet
Storytelling: Painting a picture of yourself
Writing: Signing your name
Writing: Quills can drip if you're not careful
Linguistics: Being bilingual is beneficial
Discipline: Ignoring the stares of others
Logistics: Setting a future appointment

Non-skill Knowledges:
Raimeus Madeus: Treasure hunt benefactor
Kleo: Treasure hunt benefactor

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: For joining a large expedition
Collaboration: Yes?
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: A fiend in need
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Only the canonization of zeronin or Nipper.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nero
Rupturing: Phasing
Rupturing: Phasing: Investigate through Walls
Rupturing: Blinking: Make sure you have seen your destination
Rupturing: Phasing: Focus Ether in Your Hands
Rupturing: Phasing: Does not provide visibility to dark spaces
Research: Magic: Attunement
Research: Attunement can be used to track mages
Stealth: Avoiding guardsmen in the rain and shadow
PC: Zipper
Zipper: Childhood flame
Zipper: Attuner
Zipper: Does she even live in her house?

Zip
Attunement: Concentration is key
Attunement: Frequency: Neronin
Attunement: The atypical witchbrand
Attunement: The tracker’s best friend
Business Management: Gauging liability
Business Management: Placating an angry half-avriel client with a Neronin-shaped gift
Detection: Sensing an intruder in the dark
Negotiation: Letting a heavy silence speak for itself
PC - Neronin
Neronin - Childhood flame
Neronin - Necromancer
Neronin - Hunted by Gavrel

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes to both
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