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When doing the right thing is hard

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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished (Celeste)

'Torqin, son of Jholengrier and Amyriah, milady."

The thought of his father brought a terrible realization down upon him. Would something happen to his father now? His father committed no crime, but did that matter to the Baron? He doubted it. He'd not only put himself in danger, but his father too. He knew his mother would be fine, he hoped, she lived in Drakengard. Torqin rarely got to see her, and she only met with his father a couple times a year. There's was a feral relationship, held together by their only child. But it wasn't a parentage like many others held. They led independent lives. They loved each other greatly, but they valued their freedom far more than love. And it worked for them. They were happy.

Had Torqin destroyed that too in his protection of Lady Celeste?

No. He shook his head at that. He knew what his father would say. It would be something along the lines of how a man should only concern himself with his own choices, not the choices of others. He'd raised Torqin to be a good man, and trusted in the choices his son made. And he'd be proud of this. And Immortals forbid, if they executed him by association, he'd die with a smile, knowing he'd raised his boy right.

At Celeste's apology, Torqin shook his head, "Thank you milady, but it was a choice I made. My own. No one is to blame. And yes, I do hope you'll keep me safe as well. We need each other to make it through this." He was sincere in this. He'd much rather come out alive after all this is said and done. And when Celeste slipped her small hand in his, he gave it a gentle squeeze, "And it shouldn't be so bad. After all, this forest is as much your home as your bedroom, right?"

Torqin led her through the woods, taking them along the river, in the hopes to make throwing off the trail easier. He crossed several times, leading Celeste by the hand, carrying her wear needed, with her permission first of course. After a few times across, he led them perpendicularly away from the river. The forest was wild, and Torqin didn't know the best ways to traverse it, and it led to them being covered in dirt, cuts from briars, and were moving slower than was ideal.

The sun was past the point of midday. And Torqin was hungry, so he was sure Celeste would be as well. And they had no supplies. It had been tiring. To her question, "Yes, milady. I cannot lie to you. I don't know this forest."

He stopped moving, and looked about. He listened to the wind, trying to hear any signs of pursuit. There were none. No dogs barking, no horns blaring. Perhaps they were safe for now.

"Milady, we need to make shelter for tonight. Find some water. Some food. And wait until tomorrow. If we can find the river tomorrow, we can follow it back to the road. And maybe, just maybe from there, we can get you to your grandfather safely."

In the distance, there was a small collection of large, exposed stones. "Maybe we can make shelter there Lady Celeste. Are you cold? Hungry? I can look for some food for us."
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"Well, I believe my family own it, so it is like my bedroom and my home, yes. But I don't ever get lost in my bedroom." And there were servants and slaves to keep her warm and fed there, too. But she breathed in and then did her best to smile at hm. "If we are going to be a team, just for tonight maybe you should call me Celeste?" The young lady asked, looking at him with a pent up nervousness, yet a look of trust in her eyes. She would keep him safe, just as he had done for her and she was quite stubbornly determined to do so.

They travelled, though, and it was such a long way. It was further than she thought was possible and by the time they both admitted to being lost, Celeste was tired and sore and hungry, but she looked at him and nodded when he said that they would need to make camp. "That sounds like an excellent plan, Torqin, thank you." She wished she could do something to help him, but she was thinking, more and more, that this whole thing was going to get him killed. Her grandfather wouldn't let him live, she knew that.

It would be a matter of principle. He'd beaten her father, after all.

The rocky outcropping he suggested seemed like a good place and Celeste, too, strained her ears. But hearing no pursuit, she simply nodded. Then, he asked a question and she shook her head. "No, I'm quite fine thank you," she lied politely. "But we should most certainly get ourselves warm and comfortable." She was hungry and tired and cold, but he couldn't help that. "Do you have any skills in hunting or tracking or.. cooking?" Celeste wondered and then she smiled slightly. "If you'd like to try and find us something to cook, I can collect up some twigs and kindling and so on. I believe one uses those? " Evidently, lighting fires was not in her skill set.

However, it had to be said, she tried. She would collect up kindling wood, clumps of grass and leaves for things to catch and burn fast, and put them where he told her to. Whatever he did, she insisted on helping and she would not sit whilst he toiled. When, though, dark started to fall, she moved closer to him. "I don't like the dark." Celeste whispered and she sighed.

"Torqin, I think my grandfather will feel like he has to punish you for what you did. He won't harm your family, but ... you will have to leave you know." She frowned and jumped slightly at the sound of an animal in the distance, glancing around nervously. "I feel like I should say that you might want to leave now, but I would rather not be alone." She chewed on her lip for a moment and then looked at him with a query in her gaze. "When I am grown up, one trial I will be a Baroness. I'll never be a Duchess, unless I marry a Duke, but wherever I am, you will have a home. " She smiled at him then and said something she had heard from Leeson. "By the blood of the dragon. I swear it."

Her nerves would stop her sleeping in the dark, and as the night progressed, she edged closer and closer to him. Throughout the night, she was aware that he was there, he kept her safe and all was well.

Yet, in the morning when Celeste woke to the sounds of the Andaris guards yelling that they'd found her, Torqin was gone. When she was asked, she said nothing.
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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished (Celeste)

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Celeste Andaris


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15
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Acting: Friendly and upbeat
Acting: Carefree
Acting: Like I'm supposed to be here
Animal Husbandry: Talk to your horse
Deception: Add in a little casual touch to make people think it's ok
Discipline: Trying not to show the help that you're afraid
Discipline: Promising that you will not allow someone you care for to be hurt
Endurance: Being dragged by your shoulder is painful
Endurance: Blows to the face cause immense pain
Etiquette: Be polite to the help.

Torqin: My friend
Torqin: My saviour
Torqin: Always welcome where I am
Torqin: Risked everything to protect me


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Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Renown Devotion
None None
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Torqin


Awarded Points

15
These points can/cannot be spent in magic


Awarded Knowledge

Detection: The scent of alcohol on someone's breath
Discipline: Maintaining a daily routine
Discipline: Waking early to start the day
Endurance: Using slow motions during a work out to increase its difficulty
Endurance: Repeatedly swinging a heavy rope
Etiquette: Treat noble children as if they are adults
Strength: Carrying a hay bale
Strength: Standard Chin Ups
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Shoving in the chest
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Grabbing your opponent's weapon
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Striking first while you have the element of surprise

Location: Astedia Estate
Location: Astedia Stables
Contact: Toddy - Stable boy at Astedia
Celeste Andaris: Daughter of the Andaris Line
Celeste Andaris: Owns a white Warrick Whinny named Sparkle
Baron Benji Andaris: An abusive drunkard
Self: I rescued Celeste Andaris from her abusive father at great cost
Celeste Andaris: Her grandfather will protect her
Celeste Andaris: The only person to truly be leader
Celeste Andaris: She saved my life with her silence
Celeste Andaris: I owe her everything


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Renown Devotion
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Comments

This started out really cute and I was smiling as I read it! Then the clouds rolled in and I no longer liked it! Very good tidbit of backstory for Torqin, with excellent portrayal of a young boy who seemed to already have seen too much - confident and prepared for whatever comes his way, it felt. And it was nice to see Celeste and the trials she faced as a child, she appeared so innocent yet worldly. I hope the pair meet in the present? Now that Celeste is Duchess!


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