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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name:Keep it Simple Stupid
City/Area:Faldrass
Notes/Warnings:A simple memory thread
Requested Rewards:
Blades(Saber): Gripping the hilt correctly
Blades(Saber): Diagonal Slice
Acrobatics: Leaping into an attack can be dangerous
Rupturing: Planning is paramount
Rupturing: Using markings to better remember a destination
Rupturing: Chaining Blinks to move quickly between targets

None-Skill Knowledge
NPC Elias: Won't talk about his past
NPC Elias: Repetitive teacher
NPC Elias: Cares for his pupil

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Twisted ankle
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Every girl loves to shop
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Resistance: Scalvblack Tea

Loot: All purchases deducted in ledger.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Different Strokes
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge: (6 posts, 11 knowledge)
Blades: Longsword: Using a flaming blade requires amending techniques
Blades: Longsword: Slicing the underbelly of a charging beast
Blades: Longsword: Use the momentum of your opponent
Discipline: Not crying with relief
Hunting: Aye aye tracks (very large ones)
Storytelling: Noobabs
Strength: Pulling Arlo off a cliff
Strength: Bracing yourself when lifting a weight

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not since we're alone
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge: (6 posts, 11 knowledge)
Acrobatics: Jumping off cliffs
Acrobatics: Swinging whilst dangling off a cliff
Discipline: Taking things as fast, or as slow, as your SO needs.
Endurance: Going without sleep to help someone face their nightmares
Endurance: Holding on for a while
Hunting: Aye aye tracks (very large ones)
Ranged Weapon: Bow: Quills act as deflective armour
Strength: Holding your weight with your hands
Strength: Dangling off a cliff
Strength: Using your body weight to pull yourself up


Loot: 1 x giant aye aye hide, teeth and claws
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Since we're alone, probably not.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: II. Slippin' Into Darkness
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Strong Language and Foul Violence... yes, you read that right

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Targeting Joints
Unarmed Combat: Striking with Knees and Elbows
Blades (Gladius): For Hacking AND Thrusting
Blade (Gladius): Killing Strike Through the Heart
Medicine: Healing Oneself from Minor Wounds
Poisons: Ghost Mushroom, Weapon Smear


Loot: N/A - payment received in Part I
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor gash on right bicep, slightly more serious cut on left thigh (both sewed up and/or cauterized and bandaged)
Renown: Probably negative, since it's almost entirely among the criminal class and Etzos, and it's more rumor-based and attached to Vorund, rather than Kasoria's name
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Kasoria on Sat Mar 10, 2018 2:31 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 129

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Oliver Venora
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Thanking the Fates
City/Area: Bellesoir
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Caius

Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12)
Detection: Finding your clothes in the dark
Detection: That feeling you get when you're not alone
Endurance: After-partying means even less sleep
Endurance: Nothing coffee and a walk can't cure
Linguistics: Flavor language
Linguistics: The context of pidgin
Stealth: Stolen kisses, sleeping lovers
Stealth: Quietly dressing
Resistance: Tabacco
Politics: Praising accomplishments
Politics: Requesting an official audience with the parents
Politics: Rynlism's influence on the structure of Rynmere

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Oliver Venora: Makes good coffee
Oliver Venora: Knows you've been sleeping with his sister
Oliver Venora: Throws a good party
Oliver Venora: Approves of your relationship with Darcyanna
Oliver Venora: Devout Rynlist
Oliver Venora: #brofeels
Location: Bellesoir Town, Venora
Location: Bellesoir: Cyrene's Shrine, Venora
Nobility: House Venora: Arrogance is a family trait
Nobility: House Venora: Opulence
Nobility: House Venora: Duty and Honor
Nobility: Take marriage seriously in Rynmere
Religion: Rynlism: Warren Gawyne, The Half God
Religion: Rynlism: The Seven don't have to be mutually exclusive
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, Patron Saint of Honor
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, first knighted woman in Rynmere
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, Thou Shall Not Betray

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Public piety to the Seven
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: no


Oliver

Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12)
Cooking: Brewing strong coffee
Endurance: Embracing the cold
Endurance: Long walks to build stamina
Etiquette: Giving one's employees time off after successful work
Etiquette: Inviting your sister's boyfriend to events
Linguistics: Using a pidgin to enhance emotional impact
Politics: Making public appearances at the temples
Politics: Always playing the Lord in public
Resistance: Tobacco
Rhetoric: Back and forth jokes to earn trust
Rhetoric: Explaining religious history
Writing: Succinct poetry

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Sleeping with your sister
Caius Gawyne: Envoy
Caius Gawyne: Quiet and stoic
Caius Gawyne: #brofeels
Location: Bellesoir: Cyrene's Shrine, Venora
Religion: Rynlism: Warren Gawyne, The Half God
Religion: Rynlism: The Seven don't have to be mutually exclusive
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, Patron Saint of Honor
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, first knighted woman in Rynmere
Religion: Rynlism: Cyrene Venora, Thou Shall Not Betray


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Public piety after a successful event
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: no

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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Want
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: Nu
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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Whatever It Takes
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Patience to Endure a Stake-Out
Poison: Scarf Rot
Intimidation: Threatening Family to Break a Subject
Intimidation: Frothing and Raging to Terrify
Stealth: Hiding in Smelly Places
Stealth: Softening Ones Footsteps


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Sally: Midwife, Grandmother, Collateral Damage
NPC Vorund: Relocated Kasoria's Son and His Mother


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N'A
Collaboration: Solo Memory
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Kasoria on Sat Mar 17, 2018 2:35 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 84

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Amaris
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Foot Fungus is no Fun!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Investigation: Working together provides options
Investigation: Consider geographical clues
Investigation: Ask questions about who is not involved
Investigation: Consider alternative possibilities.
Research: Considering all angles
Research: Use a variety of disciplines
Research: Collaboration leads to success.
Research: Start with what you know
Other
Padraig: Engaged to Faith
Padraig: Owns a cat and a dog
Faith: Engaged to Padraig
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 91
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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: I. All Hope Abandon Ye Who Enter Here
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Strong Language and Strong/Awesome Violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tactics: Securing Your Home
Unarmed Combat: Throat Stomp
Unarmed Combat: Walls as Weapons
Discipline: Shake off Sleep and Into The Fray
Endurance: Bracing for Injury
Acrobatics: Avoiding a Large, Unwieldy Weapon


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A - Memory story from seven arcs past, so they'd just be scars by now
Renown: Most definitely, for showing why his is one house you do NOT break into
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Kasoria on Fri Mar 16, 2018 4:54 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 99

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Amaris
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:In the Wake
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Discipline: Knowing your limitations
Etiquette: Introducing one's self
Logistics: Good to have a centralized location for volunteers to sign up
Logistics: Dividing up volunteers for tasks
Psychology: People come together in times of need
Socialization: A person's grips tells a lot about them
Other
Event: Ashan 717 Tornadoes in Scalvoris Town
PC: Pash
PC: Pash: Was at sea during Cylus
PC: Pash: Better at noise and trouble
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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