Review Request 2.1.3

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Nightshade Eld
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Passing it On
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just a little job thread, nothing bad
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades: Fancy tricks are done for a reason
Blades: Transfering Knowledge about Swordfighting
Blades: Basic attacks
Blades: Basic knowledge about sword types
Discipline: Having Patience for others
Teaching: Teaching about sword fighting


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Minor or Small for helping the lady.
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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word count: 76
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Much Ado About the Wrong Thing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Gambling: Playing to your own advantage
Gambling: Practice shuffling to maximise fairness of the deal.
Gambling: Game: Stars: Win by having the most stars in your constellation
Gambling: Human game: snap. A game of dexterity.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Pressure is different depending on the string
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing scales

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no
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word count: 82
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Lavana Tharn
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Bazaar Revelation
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City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Foul language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades Two Handed Claymore; Using Disciplined Sword Strokes.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Utalizing Both Hands On The Handle
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Horizontal Slice
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Chopping The Hand Behind The Cross Guard.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Deflecting an adversaries weapon using leverage.
Strength; A Steel Sword Is Lighter Then Bronze

Loot:
Standard Full Plate excluding helmet and gauntlets -100gn
Extravagant Plate Helm -80 / 20x4
Extravagant Spiked Plate Gauntlets -80 / 20x4
Chainmail -60
Claymore -55
Combat Knife-5
×10 Throwing Knives -4gn
Bandolier -5gn
Leather Padding -5gn
-409

Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 123
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Alistair
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Bucket Fist
City/Area: Cappola, Oakleigh, the Eastern Settlements
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The First Fundamental - Dispatch Efficiently
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Second Fundamental - Make Every Hit Count
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Third Fundamental - Use Every Part of Your Body
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fourth Fundamental - Krenn Maii is Meant to Kill
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fifth Fundamental - Be Hyper Aware
Tactics: Master everything, be countered by nothing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 98
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Alistair
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Makeover
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Meh, don't worry about it.
Loot: N/A - this was Fridgar shopping, not me
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 41
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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: III. Fool's Gold
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence, as per the usual

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Acting: Playing the Fearful Underworld Bottom-Feeder
Deception: Luring Targets Out with a False Message
Deception: Bluffing Your Way Inside With a Convincing Story
Stealth: Following At a Distance
Tactics: Planning For Likely Questions
Tactics: The Ol' "What's That Behind You?" Trick


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: No Walls Beyond the Perimeter, Just the Wilderness

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 94

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Alistair
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Bucket Fist, II
City/Area: Cappola, Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Sixth Fundamental - Fight on Your Terms
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Seventh Fundamental - Everything Is A Weapon
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Eighth Fundamental - Never Stop the Aggression
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: Kor Koron, the First Technique
Unarmed Combat: The Magehunter's Fist, Conceptualization
Tactics: Building a fighting style to counter your foe
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 91
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Ryder
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Profession: Mercenary
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Never again part 1
City/Area: Etzos, general town area
Notes/Warnings: Part one, not really. Violence in part two though
Requested Rewards:
Detection: Noticing someone from afar
Detection: Sensing if someone is suspicious
Discipline: Putting personal interest aside
Discipline: Hiding when something is wrong
Seduction: Kissing
Seduction: Keeping someones interest

Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory thread, so nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
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word count: 70
"The most dangerous people in the world are not the tiny minority instigating evil acts, but those who do the acts for them" ~ Suzy Kassem
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Ryder
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Never Again pt. 2
City/Area: Still Etzos, in the town
Notes/Warnings: Torture, not too graphic. A little bit sad. Marked it as mature to be safe
Requested Rewards:
Discipline: Keeping composure in dire moments
Endurance: Rope burn
Endurance: Holding back screams
Endurance: Withstanding torture
Endurance: The pain of hypersensitive nerves
Intimidation: Threatening in the face of danger

Loot: A ded gf, sad times
Injuries/Overstepping: A scar on his chest, but memory thread so
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 87
"The most dangerous people in the world are not the tiny minority instigating evil acts, but those who do the acts for them" ~ Suzy Kassem
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Ryder
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Awaken the Fury
City/Area: Etzos, on the outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Torture and sadness (I need to stop torturing this poor guy, but Endurance knowledge)
Requested Rewards:
Discipline: Keeping as calm as possible
Discipline: Accepting love, no matter how hard
Discipline: Resisting memories of the past
Endurance: Branding
Endurance: Keeping consciousness after torture
Intimidation: Keeping eye contact in intense pain

Loot: A cool new brand (that isn't very cool)
Injuries/Overstepping: Yep, brand on his cheek and injured wrists
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
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word count: 91
"The most dangerous people in the world are not the tiny minority instigating evil acts, but those who do the acts for them" ~ Suzy Kassem
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