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Qit'ria
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Qit'ria

Thread Name: Pies and Pints
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild PG13 adult themes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Resistance: The warm fuzzy feelings from your first beer
  2. Etiquette: A bottle of rum is meant to be shared
  3. Resistance: Rum is a lot stronger than mead
  4. Discipline: Choosing to not attack someone in a bar
  5. Dancing: Matching the movements of your hips to the drums
  6. Dancing: Shuffle your hips forward and back
  7. Dancing: Undulating your bare stomach
  8. Dancing: Rotating your hips
  9. Dancing: Shimmying your shoulders
  10. Seduction: Challenging the other to match your own seduction
  11. Seduction: Use lots of eye contact
  12. Seduction: Give what they want, take what you want
Loot:
2 Meads -2 GN
2 Pie -1 SN, 6 CN
Tip -2gn, 6sn, 2 cn
Running Total: -4 GN, 7 SN
Injuries/Overstepping: Pregnancy
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)

Padraig

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. None Requested
Loot: -2 GN for whiskey
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)



Max

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Etiquette: Sharing a Bottle with Strangers
  2. Detection: A Force to be Reckoned with
  3. Discipline: Facing an Intimidating Entity
  4. Discipline: Remaining Despite Fear
  5. Deception: Lie of Omission
  6. Investigation: Asking About Origin
  7. Resistance: Using Liquor to Keep Warm
  8. Seduction: Simple, Suggestive Commands
  1. Location: Mad O'Rourke's
  2. Arlo: Vega's Man
  3. Vega: The Tough Red-Head
  4. Qit: Reckless in Choice of Suitor
Loot: Rum Bottle: -10GN
Soup: -5CN
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)

Vega

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Detection: Spotting Arlo in a bar
  2. Discipline: Showing fear through being a brat
  3. Resistance: Whiskey
Loot: 3sn deducted for the beer
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)

Mercedes

Requested Rewards:
None due to not reaching word count

Noth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Resistance: Drinking Some Booze
  2. Dance: Combat Moves Are Easily Adapted.
  3. Dancing: Keeping a Rhythm.
  4. Dancing: A Way of Getting Close.
  5. Endurance: Not Tiring Out Whilst Dancing
  6. Endurance: Performing A Strenuous Activity for 'Several Breaks'
  7. Seduction: Eye-Contact.
  8. Etiquette: Accepting Gifts.
  9. Etiquette: Polite Conversation
  10. Intimidation: Questioning Fiercely
  11. Business Management: Why Spend Money When There's a Free Alternative
  12. Business Management: Musicians Draw Business
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: Upon Darkened Sands
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned by Mero. I finished it out. Mild violence against a sea turtle
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Crouch into a verticle leap
Blades (Shortsword): Dragging the edge across a throat
Cooking: Sunny Side Up Sea Turtle Egg
Detection: The sound of a turtle moving over sand
Hunting: Sea Turtle Kill
Hunting: Sea Turtle tracks in sand
Seafaring: Barrel Hitch Knot with Square Knot lead
Strength: Hauling a sea turtle

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: The Wilding Room
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence. Also this thread was abandoned. Just finished it up
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A due to being a non-lucid dream
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Motivational Therapy
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Running: Breathing Evenly
Running: Regulating Breath with Speed
Running: Sprinting
Running: First Fundamental, Form
Running: Second Fundamental, Core
Endurance: Proper breathing can greatly enhance endurance

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 52
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Alistair
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Thread Name: The Frontier
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Sexual references, sorry
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 4 posts each, 9 knowledges each
Stealth: Camouflage
Stealth: Moving slowly along distant cliffsides
Stealth: Limestone colored disguises work well in desert hills
Stealth: Losing your hiding spot to physics
Stealth: Descending to avoid being seen
Intelligence: Spying on enemy troop movements
Acting: Playing the part of Kieran Riley
Acting: Feigning a rural accent
Acting: Using a different dialect

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probs not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 89
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: The Frontier
City/Area: Rynmere/Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: There are still sexual references!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Walking Long Distances
Endurance: Adjusting to the Heat

Location: Oakleigh
Location: Wells
Location: Cappola

"Kieran": Hails From Na'Haer
"Kieran": Landowner of Cappola
"Kieran": Ex-Doctor
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Kasoria
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Thread Name: III. After
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: The usual for me, Crude Words and Bloody Deeds
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Discipline: Not Drinking When On The Job
Tactics: Best Way to Defeat a Swordsman? Don't Let Him Draw His Sword
Tactics: Provoking an Enemy By Needling their Pride
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Flying Knee
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Push Kick
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Roundhouse Kick


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos Culture: Cylus is a Tense Time for the Underworld

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yep, given his "performance" in the Lucky Goose
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: In Dreams He Came
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Treason!
Requested Rewards:

Alistair

Knowledge:
Negotiation: Maintaining a partnership despite losses
Negotiation: Telling your ally the truth for the sake of trust
Negotiation: Agreeing to try a nonviolent approach
Persuasion: Convincing someone to rule
Persuasion: Accepting and playing into someone's quirks
Stealth: Sneaking into an open building via blinking
Stealth: Wearing the right attire to camouflage with darkness
Stealth: Reducing sound
Stealth: Not scaring your target
Stealth: Escaping stealthily via flight

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Tristan

Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be excited to see somebody
Discipline: Being calm in the face of death
Politics: Some people are just too afraid to speak their mind
Politics: Somebody who abused their children shouldn't rule a duchy
Politics: Political asylum in Oakleigh for mages?
Politics: Changing the law doesn't automatically change what people think
Politics: Cassander needs to change or step down
Politics: If the king has no successor, there might be a civil war
Politics: I should be king

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 193
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Sinnammyn
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Thread Name: Fragile Fronds
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Second of a series of 3 threads (so far) Pretty Petioles, Fragile Fronds, and Bruised Blossoms
Requested Rewards: Exp for both of us of course!
Doran

Skill knowledges: 7 posts=12 knowledges
Strength: Maintaining a Gentle Touch
Endurance: Generate Heat In Cold Conditions
Endurance: Taking a Punch to the Face
Acrobatics: Avoiding Collisions on the Street
Acrobatics: Using Momentum to Soften Blows
Unarmed Combat: Reading Hostility in Posture
Unarmed Combat: Creating Distance with Assailants
Unarmed Combat: Anticipating Attacks - Lunges
Unarmed Combat: Escaping a Chokehold - Knee to the Groin
Unarmed Combat: Keep Your Eye on Your Opponent
Unarmed Combat: Controlling an Opponent Via Hair
Stealth: Subtle Hand Movements

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Andaris: Navigating the Streets

Tunäwä: Bird Mounts

Sinnammyn: Dreams to Run a Postal Service
Sinnammyn: Illiterate as of Ashan 718
Sinnammyn: Plans to Buy and Release Rynmere’s Slaves
Sinnammyn: Lionhearted Lector

Personal History: Accused of Being a Mage

Sinnammyn

Skill Knowledges: 7 posts = 12 knowledges
Business Management: Having a General Plan for starting your business
Business Management: Deciding on basic transportation for Couriers
Business Management: Figuring out the best place to start a postal service
Business Management: Using the business funds to "Hire" New people
Business Management: Plans to expand
Business Management: Where Not to start a business
Business Management: Pulling tricks from other merchants/businessmen (from slavery days)
Deception: Using Acting as a stepping stone to Deception
Deception: Believe what you're doing is right, typically, people believe right back
Detection: Catching the eye of the pursuer
Teaching: Repeating yourself, again.
Rhetoric: Giving proof that a man

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Doran: A feking idiot
Doran: Has a hard time putting two and two together
Doran: Sometimes asks the right questions
Doran: Really needs to learn to shut his mouth
Doran: Gets lost too
Self: Acting without thinking
Self: Thinking without acting



Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping:
Doran
Dark bruise on his right eye, chest, and stomach for a week
And shallow scrapes on the palms of his hands that should scab by the end of the day

Sinnammyn
Should be nothing of note till next thread (Bruised Blossoms)

Renown: Grader's Discrestion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 371
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Going to the Coast
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Very grungy.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 posts each, 11 knowledges each

Unarmed: Blinking into a lethal punch
Unarmed: A hook fist against the neck can be immediately fatal
Unarmed: Pulling someone's hair and pushing them into the ground
Unarmed: Straddling a foe provides free opportunity for a beatdown
Intimidation: Summoning the Revenants to invoke fear
Intimidation: Commanding another by demonstrating strength
Intimidation: Forcing another to comply
Strength: Laying your weight into someone
Strength: Keeping someone down with your lower body
Strength: With strength, a low skill punch can be deadly
Detection: Recognizing when you're being watched

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probs not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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