The Healing Sands

A blistering desert that stretches for hundreds of miles around Nashaki, with very little relief from the baking heat.
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Uiyaejn
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Arc 716, Ashan

Gaping wounds dripped teardrops of sanguine death across dry sand and with every passing hour a new patient would be closer to the end of their journey in this world. War rose upon the horizon of Nashaki, the borderlands troops were training harder than ever and the restless brutality that festered in their hearts had become clear.

Seated to the side of another doctor’s wisdom Uiyaejn gently poured a small trickle of water into the freshly cut wound of a soldier. Battle worn and scarred for his loyalty to his people, the Raskitheical lay against the linen laden bed, starring up at her with its deep amber eyes.

Locked within his gaze she could feel the aged hold of his old soul seep into her own, intense with curiosity “Look after me well,” he muttered, settling back to rest against the soft sheets.

“Twenty-one, prepare the bandages and watch me while I stitch the wound. Ivera will be making you do this soon, learn,” a tired voice called from behind her. It belonged to overseer Mi’lyn, a serious woman with long greying blonde hair and features that were once considered by many to be beautiful, were now hidden beneath the crease lines born from the weight of her burdens and an ugly scar that ran across her face.

Flesh gave way to the whiskey coated needle that weaved between Mi’lyn’s fingertips, twisting and turning until the trail of thread clung to either side of the gaping hole torn in the Raskitheical’s body and bound it together.

“This method of stitching is what we call the interrupted stitch, it is the simplest form of a suture,” Mi’lyn chipped in, in an attempt to teach the assistant while she maintained her focus upon the patient “Do you see the placing between the stitches? When stitching a continuous wound, the length of the suture should be at least four times the length of the wound. You must be sure to leave a small space between each one and keep the thread another small distance away from the wounds edge. We’re hoping that when weaved together the skin will fold upward and start to heal.”

Uiyaejn followed every graceful motion, her eyes tracing each fine line where the needle pierced through the limp meat of the soldier’s humanoid body and each suture was woven with pinpoint accuracy, almost perfectly in line with one another.

“How do you know the distance?” Uiyaejn asked.

“Practice,” the elder healer replied and turned to beckon Uiyaejn over “Come here, if the gentleman doesn’t mind you can give it a go as long as you do everything I say.”

Sceptical of her decision the Raskitheical opened his eyes to look at Mi’lyn with a long cool stare “Aasss long aasss ssshe isss under your care, Doctor. We need more good doctorsss,” the soldier replied with softness that Uiyaejn had never seen in one of his kind before.
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Joy lifted the veil of Uiyaejn’s heart, cascading it with ambition as her hands grasped the needle that Mi’lyn held out to her and mimicked the actions her mentor had taken “Careful, look at how far apart the holes are and make your own,” the elder instructed looking over her shoulder.

“Here?” Uiyaejn asked, hovering the needle slightly too close to the wound.

“Down a little,” Mi’lyn replied and gently guided Uiyaejn’s hand “Be firm, flesh is thick and you need to point the needle in the right direction.” At the point of a tiny metal spear, she wove the strings that united torn flesh one after another; guided by the steady hand of wisdom that loomed over her.

“That’s it twenty-one,” Mi’lyn encouraged, withdrawing to let Uiyaejn try it on her own “two more.”

Although not as neat as the elder’s work the final outcome of the Sev’ryn’s stitching was okay for a beginner. The lining of the stitches was patchy, but the flesh had done exactly what the other healer had hoped it to do by sticking outward a little bit.

“You have a long way to go twenty-one,” the elder finally said, looking to the Raskitheical “Thank you sir, for being patient with my trainee.”

“I trussst you doctor,” the patient replied with a confident smile that made it apparent to Uiyaejn this sort of treatment to this creature’s body wasn’t unusual to it.

Mi’lyn nodded “Now Uiyaejn will dress the wound for you; I do not want to chance it getting infected.”

Lost to but a number her name had to be earned, those who were called by their name were considered to have the respect of the elder healers, but for the Sev’ryn that day never came until now. Despite her diligence and cheerful optimism the young healer’s had remained unearned and the reason stayed unknown to her.

Like thunder it crashed down from Mi’lyn’s lips and Uiyaejn became overrun with happiness, not a soul in this place had attempted saying her name since she started as an Assistant Doctor and regardless of Mi’lyn’s poor annunciation, she was glad to hear it again.
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With a smile like sunlight she accepted the invite into her dreams that became a reality, to heal and to save. Death would eventually claim them but for now they were the chosen of life. This man was to carry on his role in the twisted stageplay of existence, ready to insight pain upon the victims of his sword; where pain was necessary, so was healing.

At her side a small table of necessary items had been prepared by Mi’lyn earlier that morning. Reaching for one of the carefully cut and cleaned bandages Uiyaejn shifted her gaze toward her mentor who nodded at her and for the first time with a smile “Make sure it is tight. I know how gentle you can be and we don’t want it falling off, “ Mi’lyn said to her, there was love here, there was attention.

Like a whirlpool in the pit of her stomach emotion stirred within her as her hands cocooned the freshly mended wound into the safety of a cast. It was only then she realised the true importance and care that her mentor took in looking after her patients. Everything had been ready, all of the tools had been cleansed of disease and each one although heavily used were clean and well looked after. “Is this okay?” Uiyaejn asked. She had tugged the bandage tighter than she would have naturally thought to have done so.

Loftily running her fingers along the edge of the bandage Mi’lyn lightly tugged the cloth “Looks okay, have now you just need to secure it with a pin, there’s one beside you.”

Following her mentor’s instruction Uiyaejn became a little zealous and fumbled on where to accurately place the pin at first, and was quickly corrected.

“That’ll do for now,” the elder muttered and patted the Raskitheical on the shoulder “In the meantime Rakshar, you’ll need to rest that for a couple of weeks, in the meantime Uiyaejn here will keep you company for a little while.”

“Thank you doctor,” Rakshar replied, tilting his head to look at them both with what small smile he could muster behind his tired eyes.

Unnaturally quiet for a patient Uiyaejn wondered how many times this individual had been stung by the wrath of war.

“Twenty-one, make sure our friend here is relaxed there are some crushed Moukou bean, Laki leaves and Rhyth petals next to you. All you have to do is put them in some water,” the elder instructed, gathering her things to leave and ready for another patient.

Aware of only one of the ingredients, two of the herbs were unmentioned in her grandmother’s book “What do they do?” asked Uiyaejn, wondering what sort of strange and wonderful hers were more native to these lands.

“Moukou is to help relieve whatever pain he might be feeling, Laki is to reduce the swelling and Rhyth petals are to get rid of any other nasty virus that might be going on inside of him, they also taste nice.” The explanation was brief but it explained the medicinal uses of the flowers easily enough, she would have to search in her own time if she wanted to find more about them.

“I’ll be back soon, make sure she looks after you alright?” Mi’lyn said to Rakshar in a more jovial tone.

“Yesss. I will,” it returned with a sagely nod as the elder healer turned to leave “I will be in your care young one.”

“Not for long,” Uiyaejn uttered softly and reached out to touch his hand “fate has a different plan for you in the cycle.”
Uncertainty bred silence and the intimacy of the gesture confused the Raskitheical for a moment as his large amber hues bore down upon her searching for answers where none were to be found. In her innocence Uiyaejn was oblivious as her attention shifted to making Rakshar’s medicine and began to mix the ingredients into a small clay mug of water.

“Rest now.”
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Surgery +3
Medicine +1
Sewing +1
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Raskithecal: Scarred
Herbs: Area Specific
Practice Makes Perfect
Earning the Name

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Medicine: Moukou Bean for Pain Relief
Medicine: Laki Leaves for Swelling
Medicine: Rhyth Petals for Virus
Surgery: Interrupted Stitch

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Interesting read. It was nice and light, but I liked how you wrote the Raskithecal soldier. I also enjoyed the way you wrote the teacher. I might have to steal a few ideas to use for my threads!

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