Motivational Therapy

A settlement east of Rynmere across a stretch of water called 'the eastern trench' broken into three regions: Welles, Oakleigh, and Berwick.
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9th of Ashan, Arc 718

"You are a mountain," he yelled out, no breath falling into his words. Unlike a man who spoke amidst running, a Lich had no gasping, painting whisper lingering between their vowels. They spoke the same whilst running and standing still. "You are a cliff rising high into the sky, bursting through the clouds. You're infallible, ineffable; you are the rival of the sunset, the one all fall keen to," he continued, elbows rising back and forth, cyclically. His legs were dead, but muscular. He was maintained to look and feel as he did the exact moment he died. Damien never changed.

Alistair jogged behind him. While he was alive, and Damien was dead, their endurance was similar. Alistair could run for breaks upon breaks. The goal of this exercise was to make breaks become trials. If he had to run for a whole fortnight, he wanted to be able to. Perhaps it meant nothing, but if anything, it was important to extend upon his balance and speed.

"That's what I used to tell myself," Damien said. "I am infinite, I am skilled. I'm worth something," he said.

"You're also surprisingly arrogant," Alistair remarked, smirking as his breath ran into his words, feet risen from the floor amidst his long steps. He tried to control his breath.

"I am," Damien nodded. "Always have been. The life of a Lich suits me," he nodded, turning and stopping, facing the mage.

Alistair stopped, nearly skidding on his feet as he bent down to hold his knees, exhaling and inhaling at a more upbeat pace than normal. Running seemed to play really well into endurance - it was teaching him to breathe evenly, something he'd forgotten the importance of. Breath. Breath. Breath. Breath. Paced. Breathing was an art of symmetry. Now that he was standing still, he could focus on that, and ramp up his breaths to ensure that his pacing was equal the moment he began to run.

"You should follow my words, Alistair," Damien advised. "Compliment yourself. Feel the power in your movements. Humility is a powerful tool but so is pride. The two of them are not incompatible, as the simple-minded monks may tell you. Humility is for when you don't want to be known, or seen, or confronted. Pride is for when you want to fight, to impress, to rule. You are the mountain, Alistair. The cliff. The sky and the seas. Only you. Think it. Know it," he nodded his head back, before turning around and running once more. Alistair followed after, running into a sprint at first so that he could catch Damien.

The mountain. The cliff. It all seemed so comical to think, but he repeated the words in his mind, focusing on nothing but the landscape before him. Even Damien faded out for a moment, as Alistair's mind attempted to frame into view; seeing himself, running, seeing his impressive shape and physique whipping through the wind. His boots crushing rocks and dirt as he ran. There was power in his body, and his mind. Maybe with courage he could tap into it.
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He remembered the fundamentals of running, and focused on them. Form was certainly the earliest fundamental. He needed to run tall - never bend over, always straighten your body with your back as you run. Alistair looked straight ahead, eyes evening the horizon outward, as he gleamed. It was sunny but not overly warm; the sweat on his back only lightly glistened, and flung off his bare sides with the emergence of any and every gust of wind. His heel and ball of foot were leveled with the ground, and he kept his form secure.

It wasn't perfect - sometimes he leaned too far forward, and sometimes he felt his back nearly bending him into a curl, trying too hard to stand upright. But Alistair wasn't incompetent with his body, nor his feet. He'd learned form and footwork a hundred times over when Shadowdancing, so the fundamental didn't really sing difficulty.

"You sacrificed some speed for all that muscle," Damien stated, almost teasingly.

"Yeah, but not much," he replied.

"Some. It'll matter eventually. The fastest man I ever met could run four thousand paces a break. You could probably run three thousand, perhaps a bit more, at your top shape. Maybe thirty five hundred - but not four thousand," he said. Alistair merely stared forward, keeping his eyes focused on the horizon. Before, eventually, he bit back.

"How long could he run for?" he asked.

"Just that one break, honestly," Damien laughed lightly. He didn't need to run all that long - he just needed to run faster than everyone else, in order to please the gamblers at the racing pens.

"I can run a lot longer than that, even if I sprint. I have more stamina than any other man you've met, right?" he asked, repressing his panting as he strung forward. He tried not to overstride, which wasn't a fundamental of running, but it was very poor practice. Overstriding was often followed by under-performance.

"Probably," Damien said, his lips uneven as he thought. "I mean, if you don't include the undead. I do happen to deal with a lot of those. Many Stonehearts, too. Coven used to be filled with them, back when only the dead could suffer Ellasin," Damien stated, recollecting a flurry of faint images. Even he still had some nostalgia for the faction's early days. It was very different than now, and a lot more focused on Necromancy and seeking deeper immortality. Ellasin's focuses changed somewhere along the line, and he'd never understood why.

"At least I have something going for me," the mage responded, increasing the tempo of his movements to catch up after the Lich. Damien remained ahead due to the vigor of his Lichdom, but Alistair decided he wanted to run against the wind, not behind Damien's sun-roasted back. He was still charred as always, the Lich too often ignoring the glow of the sun against his flesh for breaks and trials at a time. Since Liches didn't tan very well, and instead just looked sort of burnt without heavy emphasis on repairing their skin's natural state, he was starting to look a bit odd.

"Even if I can't run for shite."
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I am the sea, he thought.

Flowing. Shifting, back and forth, eternally dancing beneath the moon. People rely on me, and I determine whether they float or sink. I decide all things - the tide, the fate of their harvest, the flurry of the storm. When I rise, they bow, and fear, and sacrifice. Thousands lay before me, hands upon the sands, knees pressed down, their head not raised a single inch above their backs. Everyone --

"I'm not really very good at motivational thinking, Damien," Alistair remarked, quirking a bewildered smirk. Somehow the "motivation" ended up looking not dissimilar from pure maniacal authoritarianism. A man was what he thought deep within, though, so he supposed that was merely his nature. It wasn't difficult to come to terms with - he'd said as much to many others, in the past.

"Nor running," the Lich said, passing Alistair as the two ran along the Golden Road that led from Oakleigh to Cappola, and so many towns in-between. Cerwyn was near, then Sharondale. Their goal was to run through them all before nightfall came, or his glutes went out. Or - well - his calves.

"Another fundamental of running, the core..." he spoke, breath becoming somewhat more ragged. They'd been going for over a break, now, and they'd been talking. He continued sprinting half the time -- and running inefficiently the other half. Backwards, zig-zagging, playing with the Lich who suffered him day in and day out. He wasn't tired yet, but he could feel the beginnings of a burn building up in his throat. It was only a dormant icy sensation for now, but it would build as the breaks went on.

"The core - my abdomen, hips, thighs and glutes. I need to remain stable, strong while in motion," he said, swallowing his breath before continuing to speak, "Fuck -- I'm thirsty. I don't need water, but I want some. Hold on," he beckoned for Damien to stop, as his feet hit the ground and he paused, bending forward slightly to take a few heavy breaths as he reached to a pocket on the side of his satchel which held a waterskin strap. He drank from it, evenly, attempting to not choke. Then, after a few gulps, he rubbed his lips with his forearm and made an 'aah' sound, satisfied.

"You're such a cocky little tyke," Damien remarked, grinning as he looked back at the panting mage. "I don't need it, just want it. You don't need to tell me that you don't need it, Alistair - it won't make you any less of a man," the Lich rolled his eyes. Alistair looked embarrassed for a moment, but then he pulled out his domain bag and opened it, willing it to retrieve the water he'd stored in that realm. Immediately after, water began funneling out, spiraling somewhat viciously at Damien's face. The Lich allowed himself to be soaked, shutting his eyes and clenching his lips.

"Water doesn't make you any less manly, Damien. You clearly know that, you drenched fuck," he mocked him, tightening the string around his domain bag and closing it shut. "I know it doesn't make me less manly. I just... well. It kind of got to me - that maybe I'm going to be a bit slower. I want to be the best at everything I do, and you know that. So I thought; hey, at least I have my endurance. My stamina. If I demean that part of me, then I'm nothing on that runner you used to know. And I want to be better."

Damien sighed. "You can be," he said. "You can be faster than him, if it's that important to you. And besides - you can blink. You're already a master at speed. Running will only make you better. So let's continue," he waved, bringing Alistair back to the mindset as the two trailed off toward cities and towns.
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Consequences

Injuries/Overstepping: Aches and pains in legs, ankles and feet for the whole trial following as well as a sense of stiffening in the affected limbs. The stiffening will reach its worst the trial after (11th) before fading by the 12th. The pain can be reduced with the aid of a massage, causing the duration to be halved to a single trial with things returning to normal by the 11th provided that activity isn't too strenuous in the meantime.

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  • Skill:
    • Running: Breathing Evenly
      Running: Regulating Breath with Speed
      Running: Sprinting
      Running: First Fundamental, Form
      Running: Second Fundamental, Core
      Endurance: Proper breathing can greatly enhance endurance
  • Non-Skill:
    • N/A

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A training thread that doesn't drag or turn into too much of a grind, I liked reading this. However, Alistair hasn't got a single point in Running and even though his strength and endurance are maxed out and he's a fighter, he's still using his body in a new way - hence, the consequences that I've listed. Please bear this in mind in future! Additionally, I would remind you of Damien's own skills. While peak endurance might be an inherent trait in a Lich, running would not be and it's not a skill that he possesses.

The story itself is quite self-contained, the plot easy to follow without having read your other stuff. Although there are references to things outside like Ellasin and the Coven, they don't have a particular relevance to the story and hence, you don't need to know about such things when you read this. The interaction between the pair is a good mix of playful and friendly, as well as determined and supportive. A very good thread overall. Nicely done!
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