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Thread Name: The buddying of the necromancer
City/Area: Emea. Where else?
Notes/Warnings: Some
Requested Rewards:
Dream
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
word count: 38
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: Two Nobles, One Spark
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Victor
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Initiating somebody in exchange for power
Strength: Strengtening one's wrists for sword handling
Strength: In order to grow stronger you need to train regularly
Transmutation: Initiation: How to initiate somebody
Transmutation: Initiation: You can only initiate a limited number of people
Transmutation: Initiation: Extremely painful
Transmutation: Initiation: What happens when it fails
Transmutation: Initiation: It is important to keep your calm during initiation
Transmutation: Initiation: Creates a bond

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Alistair
Knowledge:
Transmutation: The Initiation
Transmutation: A Domain Magic
Transmutation: Ether Missile
Transmutation: The initiation can invoke the worst pain imaginable
Transmutation: "Transmutes" something with ether
Transmutation: Can effect both organics and materials
Transmutation: One of my sparks
Endurance: Soul-wrenching pain cannot be resisted through regular endurance
Meditation: Focusing amidst horrendous pain

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Xander Andaris
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Thread Name: Stick them with the pointy end.
City/Area: Astedia, Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None just cuteness
Requested Rewards:
Xander:
Knowledge:
Bladed combat (Longsword): Remaining calm and keeping concentration is vital
Bladed combat (Longsword): Remember that steel is heavier than sticks
Bladed combat (Longsword): Voiding attacks to one side
Bladed combat (Longsword): Voiding attacks backwards
Bladed combat (Longsword): Ducking and jumping over swings
Bladed combat (Longsword): Attacks should feel comfortable and natural to you
Teaching: Cater your lesson for your student
Teaching: Be stern but still playful
Teaching: Encouragement is important
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Last edited by Xander Andaris on Sun Jun 10, 2018 9:41 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 121
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Sephira
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Thread Name: Masks in the Night
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:Mild Violence
Requested Rewards:
Sephira
Knowledge: 5 Posts - 10 Knowledges

Blades(Saber): Slicing the legs of a heavy opponent to cripple their movement
Rupturing: Using a Compression Portal in the ocean to douse a fire
Rupturing: Chaining together Skysteps and Portals in combat
Discipline: Staying focused when remembering bad memories
Investigation: Noting the masks and the similarities to the cult members
Investigation: Connecting the dots when someone mentions information that they shouldn't know
Investigation: Individuals are made more suspicious by wearing masks
Investigation: Trying to protect sources of information
Intimidation: Promising to hurt them if they lay a hand a hand on your friend.
Tactics: Changing your combat style on the fly when an opponent is familiar with your moves.

Non-Skill Knowledge
Maxine: Helped Sephira despite her hatred of the Elements
Maxine: Killed a valuable source of information
Maxine: Was still healing from her injury in Cylus
Maxine: Will not risk her life for an Element again

Genuvah: Mercenary who aided in the defense of Element's Hall

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Overstepping, Dizziness and motion-sickness for two trials or so.
Renown: Maybe medium for defending Element's Hall from a mob.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nah
Maxine
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Maintaining Balance with One Good Foot
Acrobatics: Rolling Out of the Way
Blades (Gladius): Parrying a Thrust Away
Discipline: Fighting Down a Foot
Intimidation: Berating Allies Turned to Enemies
Medicine: Putting Pressure on a Wound
Stealth: Hiding in Clouds
Stealth: Letting the Sound of Battle Mask Your Steps
Tactics: Using the Body of Another as a Shield

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Rapier: Quick but Fragile
Stormy Skies: Hiding from Your Enemy
Sephira: Sided with the Elements
Sephira: A Frenemy That Still Has Your Loyalty
Genuvah: Mercenary who aided in the defense of Element's Hall

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Stab wound
Renown: Maybe medium for defending Element's Hall from a mob.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nah
Last edited by Sephira on Tue Jun 05, 2018 11:29 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 336
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Arlo Creede
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Thread Name: Same Dance, Different Steps
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Giving space where space is needed
Detection: Spotting when someone has changed, physically
Discipline: Giving a loved one space when you really don't want it
Endurance: Foot Cramp
Persuasion: Asking questions and raising considerations of why things might be
Psychology: Dying and being brought back has an impact on living
Psychology: I see things differently since I died.
Psychology: Big changes need to be unpeeled in layers

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Arlo
Knowledge:
Discipline: Sorting through memories to help them make sense
Discipline: Using another person to ground yourself
Discipline: Ensuring that you don't let your emotions fuel your strength
Endurance: The physical change of Cassion's mark
Endurance: Physically trapped and gasping for air
Meditation: Calming yourself down
Strength: Not knowing the new limits of your own strength
Strength: Not being able to control your strength

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: Leader of the Pack
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence against skeletons
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Nir'wei
Mount (Sohr Khal): Diving attacks make you vulnerable after impact.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Consecutive diving attacks are very taxing.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Larger enemies require greater heights to dive.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Long tails can be grappled.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Shaking grappling opponents with sharp movements.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Disengaging from groups of opponents.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Flying under intense stress.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Intentional rearing allows claw attacks.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Aerial hit-and-run tactics are most effective.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Immediate vertical take-off.
Animal Husbandry (Sohr Khal): Dressing minor wounds.
Animal Husbandry (Sohr Khal): Damage to the legs can effect take-off.
Animal Husbandry (Sohr Khal): Overexertion leads to weakness in the legs and wings.
Animal Husbandry (Sohr Khal): Using sealing gel to prevent leg infections.
Animal Husbandry (Sohr Khal): Keeping Sohr Khal well-hydrated and avoiding unnecessary flights can improve exhaustion recovery.

Acrobatics: Dodging a skeletal tiger
Acrobatics: Keep rollin' rollin' rollin' rollin'...
Acrobatics: Trying to land on the ground gracefully
Acrobatics: Failing to land on the ground gracefully
Blades (Combat Knife): Stabbing bones
Blades (Combat Knife): Aim for the skull
Blades (Combat Knife): A desperate strike
Blades (Combat Knife): Knives work best at close range
Running: Running around a volcano
Running: Difficult in high temperatures
Running: Getting out of breath
Running: Can't run any further
Thrown (Knives): Throwing knives at a tiger
Thrown (Knives): Throwing knives at a skeleton
Thrown (Knives): Bone is tough to penetrate
Thrown (Knives): Mostly missing

Loot:
Nir'wei
1 x A horse-hair charm with a constant smell of decay
Tio
3x Ezymite wells
2x Imedyte wells

Injuries/Overstepping: (Edit) Nir'wei would like some scars at the legs, Traveller deep scars at the hind leg, Greyhide light wounds.
Renown: Small - Defeating a pack of skeletons
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Tue Jun 05, 2018 6:05 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 324
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: Rage Against Renner
City/Area: Ne'haer, Yurrova
Notes/Warnings: Edgy

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zafir
Politics: Inciting a Protest
Politics: Riot
Politics: Failure of Government
Politics: Speaking for a Community
Politics: Making Alliances
Politics: People have the Power
Politics: Demanding Action
Politics: Capitalizing on Local Issues
Leadership: Uniting against a Common Enemy

Alistair
Leadership: Honing rage into a leader's instrument
Leadership: Organizing a mob
Leadership: Turning a riot into a protest
Leadership: Becoming a voice for the voiceless
Leadership: Delegating leadership to someone more ingrained in a community
Politics: Open hostilities with a political obstacle
Politics: Making demands
Politics: Using a mob as leverage

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: We'd like Medium (15) or more (20 plz bb), please. For... taking lead over a crowd, making demands publicly against a representative of Yurrova, making threats of violence/war upon the establishment, and generally making an impact on at least the people assembled, which was a considerable number.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Finn
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Thread Name: [Treth] Herbs for the Soul (Finn)
City/Area: Treth
Notes/Warnings: Don't think so
Requested Rewards: Note: Dunno, don't remember much of it. This has been made over a year ago. Would be possible to run it the old way just in this case and one more thread from that time? ^^
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Snow Tunnel (Finn)
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Don't think so
Requested Rewards: Note: Dunno, don't remember much of it. This has been made over a year ago. Would be possible to run it the old way just in this case and one more thread from that time? ^^
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Finn on Wed Jun 06, 2018 6:52 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 159
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

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Alistair
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Thread Name: Quality Time with Qualities
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Ali is being a little baby. Also the thread is terrible and I know. :roll:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Transmutation: Qualities
Transmutation: The Palate
Transmutation: Corroding something's structural integrity
Transmutation: Qualities must be physical traits
Transmutation: Qualities cannot be inherently magical
Discipline: Dismantling things with ether to feel better

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - for Transmutation
word count: 79
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: A Little Philosophy
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Transmutation: Sculpting
Transmutation: Using Corrosion and Sculpting together to change something's shape.
Transmutation: Shapecraft
Transmutation: Using Shapecraft to create what your imagination sees.
Discipline: Concentrating to make the image you see in your head.
Research: Is combining sparks possible?
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: Yes
word count: 75
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