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With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.
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There was a lot of information being exchanged at it was too difficult for the Turkey commander to address them one by one. Nor, was it necessary.

Gangui was surprised by the impatience openly displayed by Torvyn. Despite expecting more control from the mage, he took it as a personal failure. Concluding that this breakdown in communication was similar to his problems with Zipper, he decided it was himself who was not speaking correctly. He shouldered the burden of success of this meeting upon himself. He ate the words of the Under-Minister with a second helping of acceptance. And it hurt.

“Out,” The shakey voice of Gangui whispered hoarsely after Torvyn was done with his speech. He was of course speaking to Caoindelbhan and Brandon, but they didn’t take the cue.

Icy blue eyes flashed at his lieutenants, “I said out—“ The grizzled veteran and solemn bard exited the room slowly, with dazed looks of confusion blanketing their face.

Gangui’s gaze followed the departing turkeys until they were well gone, then slowly settling back into Torvyn’s fateful stare, “I don’t think I’ve explained myself clearly,”

He cleared his throat, “I said the things I said to show to you the inspiration of this organization. We are Etzori zealots. This rhetoric I am training them with makes them strong. It gives them passion. It gives them fire and liberty in their eyes. We aren’t like the Etzori military. No one is here for a pension or the adventure or whatever motivations the army has laid out. They are here based on the die-hard principles I’ve laid out. They fight harder, work harder, and have more passion than any unit in Foster’s Landing and the Southwood River Delta.”

He stalwartly continued, “As a faction leader, I can’t ignore the grand picture, because that would be irresponsible. The army of Etzos is an organization that is hungry for more and more bodies and thus the foundation rhetoric needs to be painted in broad strokes. The Sons of Justice, however, are a small group that aren't hungry for bodies, but rather looking for a specific breed of warriors. Zealots. Anti-Immortal warriors… not mages or soldiers. Thus, the foundation of success revolves around this rhetoric and this viewpoint.”

He hoped that Torvyn could step out of his own position long enough to understand the what he was doing was his speciality, his piece in the puzzle so it where.

“I haven’t caused any national disunity,” his icy eyes claimed with a heavy look, “As you say we are assaulted on all sides and also from within. Despite our strong views, we are not the rebels and our actions have been slowly but surely making Foster’s Landing a more cohesive utilitarian establishment for Etzos. I’ve been preaching to the people strength and encouraging them to shoulder a greater work ethic. I’ve also been slowly building a dam to slow the mighty current that is the degeneration of modern Etzos.”

“I have given up my soul to Etzos, just as you, but I am no mage. I am a warrior. We give up our souls to principles and proceed into the world acting upon these beliefs to our dying breathe — the spirit of humanity,” He nodded hoping Torvyn understood.

Hoping that he wouldn’t dismiss him like Zipper did just because his frame of mind came from a different upbringing that the callous, mad, elite mages of Etzos.

“That is our power. The steely virtues of my zealots is what I bring to the table and I hope we can reconcile this extreme rhetoric with the magical minds above us.”

“We can iron out this understanding further if you would grant me the patience, where I can thus show thee that our principles do indeed align with the glory of Etzos…” Gangui grimaced silently under his moustache.

“... or we can talk business…” The air in the room shifted.

“What we have done is established a foothold for Etzos to regulate Foster’s Landing with a tighter leash. We’ve been focusing our efforts in cleaning up the streets and making sure that the nel is funneled out of the hands of criminals and gangs, and into the proper hands. Hands that will actually grow the backbone and wealth of our commerce.”

His grimace deepened, almost visible now under his mustache, “It is a terrible task. A shit task. A task from the bottom boot of the lowest man. A task accompanied —as you so clearly pointed out — with impending doom on our end as we will eventually be forced into some desperate battle.”

Gangui’s eyes looked up again at Torvyn’s, “The Sons of Justice are effectively pawns and any leader worth their salt would never accept this role. Even the most foolhardy knows: when mercenaries sell off a well paying contract, it is because the job is fucked. Even a courageous man looking to rise from the working class by taking on what would be perceived as a failing job: would be aware of their inevitable death. Any man young enough not to care wouldn’t have the skills to take on such a role…”

“So,” he gulped, ready to draw the first line of the framework that was the situation for their business negotiations, “Dismissing us and reinstating our position to another contractor is impossible and would only end in the house of cards toppling before a solid foundation can be set

He stopped Torvyn’s words with a respectful glance. There was more framework to be done.

“You can’t give our contract to anyone else, not even the military. By having the military take up this banner, you would in fact be unleashing onto Foster’s marshal law —no matter how you spin it — you will get a huge pushback from the people as well as create the inner turmoil you seem to most abhorrent to avoid.”

“Through us you don’t just have the iron fist of the state, but socially acceptable heroes of the port,”

“You are stuck with me, and I am willing to submit to Etzos’ will, but Etzos must recognize my methods, although unorthodox, are the only way to proceed with any chance at victory. If you don’t agree, then set out specific goals for me to achieve to prove to you what I am doing is real.”

“All I want is to remain an independent contractor and also preach my message.”

Gangui knew things would have to be detailed and worked out, but he felt as if he had started the real negotiations with Torvyn.

All he hoped now was that Torvyn had the patience to dig into this conversation deep enough. And that he had the same love for Etzos as him. And the honor to see through their mission against the Immortals until it’s final breath.

But if he didn’t...
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Torvyn was apprehensive about what the commander was going to do upon sending his subordinates from the room. Something needing no witnesses, perhaps? Knowing nothing of the nature of the man's sword, this did not concern him so much as some act of defense being misinterpreted by his men.

But it quickly became apparent that Gangui simply wanted to explain the degree of rhetoric and propaganda required to inspire the devotion he enjoyed from his ranks. Obviously, this was not a topic that would benefit him were it to be overheard by them.

Torvyn could appreciate this, having given volumes of pep talks himself over the arcs. This was not to say he dismissed the commander's fanaticism as entirely for show. No indeed, he had little doubt that this man believed in this 'spirit of humanity' business devoutly. But looking at it as a recruiting theme did put things in a considerably different light.

He heard the man out in full now, jotting key words on a notepad for response. He nodded his head as he began, "Very well. This could then be summed up to say you are after a 'quality' of soldier, rather than a quantity of them. There's certainly nothing wrong with that. And no, you have not caused any political disruption...yet! But I can not dismiss such a future possibility IF you were to come into Etzos itself with these philosophies."

Commander Munzorig was now returning the courtesy of letting him continue, so he did. "But that's a long way off, and who knows what may change by then. I wonder though, where you speak of 'reconciling your extreme rhetoric with our magical minds'. I have to say, some of your words seem very...fundamentally...at odds with this very hope. You seem quite devoted to Lord Vuda, having no doubt of his devotion to keeping Etzos safe. You are aware, are you not, that he is one of the most powerful mages in this region?"

There was no shock displayed on the commander's face. In truth, Torvyn had not expected any. Past events suggested that Gangui was well aware of this. "So is your concern over mages 'losing their souls' to magic also just a part of this rhetoric? Do you even have ANY mages in your ranks? Are you asking that I withdraw Miss O'Connor back to Etzos?" The Master was not honestly sure where the younger mage currently was, but he was not about to admit that fact.

He sighed and waved his hand in the air as if to disperse all these questions, "Never mind all that. I am really not here to put any restrictions on how you choose your men. You have shown yourself to be exactly what we wanted and needed down here. And if you STAY down here, then your politics are of no concern. But if you come north, you will need to reign in the 'preaching'....We have enough zealots in the Bloodied Hearts."

He had only muttered this last bit, but still tensed for an instant at the realization that it might have been best not to mention them. He allowed none of this brief worry to show on his face, and saw nothing that definitely confirmed that the commander had taken note of it. Still, it was an error, and he needed to resume conversation to cover his gaffe.

"No, of course, you are right. We can't give this commission to anyone else at this stage. But you DO realize, don't you, that the entire purpose of this venture is to keep Foster's Landing under Etzos' rule? That WILL include this city's acceptance of any need to move Etzori troops in, if it should become necessary. You are only an 'independent contractor' until that is achieved.

"You being accepted by this city, and then being shown to be underwritten by Etzos' coffers, activates a clause in this city's covenant that keeps them subordinate. It's not that we're then going to 'swoop in' and take over. It is just to establish clarity of authority in a crisis. Also we want to build a navy, and it would naturally have to operate out of this city. We can't have any dispute over who commands it."

His eyes rolled slightly, and he abruptly changed the subject, "But this is not even what I am here for! All this talk is an effective negotiating technique, I grant you. Fifteen thousand nel then. Thirty Onyx! And I will probably be reprimanded upon my return for even offering such a sum! If you need more, go kill 'The Prince'."
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Gangui put his scarred hands on the table. He had been fighting his whole life. He had been screwed over by everyone. All the lessons that people learned as children from their parents, Gangui learned through business and the battle field. So many times he had paid the price and did not count the cost. He had tasted heaven, but he had been in hell ever since. The commander accepted the demon festering inside him at this moment.

He agreed with Torvyn’s words, “Gammok anthanos!” Fuck the Immortals.

He laid it all on the line now, “I’ll get Etzos it’s navy,”

Taking up the quill he dipped it in the ink, then looked at Torvyn. This was it, but he had one more thing to say.

“I am loyal to Vuda, the realm, and none else,” Gangui’s words where significant to a a stalwart stand in Etzos, “No offense. You and I are held to this contract which I honor, but those are my intentions. I’ll deal with Zipper for now, but if she fucks me I’ll kill her,” It didn’t matter that he had lost their fight. The mere fact he lived to talk about it was enough to prove the gravity of his words.

“I am not a politician Torvyn,” no formalities this time, bright blue eyes stared confident into the mage, “I am here to do the dirty work on the field that none else will shoulder. Frankly, as a mage, you are powerful, but you still don’t understand us warriors,”

He held up a hand towards Torvyn to stop his retort before it began, “This is no philosophical rhetoric, I speak business. We are living our lives to do the most dangerous shit cunt missions for Etzos, and frankly we are tired of bureaucrats like Zipper trying to puppeteer us. She has no honor,”

Gangui began to sign his name on the contract, but stopped halfway, “That being said I will not disappoint you,”

Not even waiting for the ink to dry, he handed the parchment for the 30 onyx loan to Torvyn.

He paused with a deep sign. It took a lot out of him to take a stand and draw a line in front of Torvyn. Alas, being bold and brave called upon such action. He knew that Torvyn might retaliate with anger, however it was better to proceed with honor.
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Torvyn eyed the Commander with the look of someone who simply wants to conclude business and be on his way. But always there seemed to be just enough lack of complete clarity and accord to make him feel that not quite enough had been confirmed. "Commander Munzorig, I'm not entirely sure that we agree on what 'serving the realm' entails. There is no doubt about your conviction or your passion. Or your Loyalty! But you go too far, I think. You say you want to serve, but it seems that you want to be the one defining exactly how you will be doing it. That is not serving, sir."

The commander had the quill readied, but clearly had some aspects of the scope of his command that he was insistent upon. "It is not upon you to procure any naval concessions from anyone. You are no diplomat, sir. Nor are you a sailing man, nor a shipwright. Neither am I. This meeting was only to establish and support your presence as peacekeepers to Foster's Landing; to facilitate a political end that Etzos desires. You have done a man's job in that capacity, sir; now please do not undermine our faith by overstepping these bounds."

The commander reiterated his take on what his purpose was to be. Torvyn was troubled that it seemed at odds with the just-stated goal of obtaining naval commitments. He was unsure if any statement made by this man would be consistently held. It was not that he felt the man to be a schemer. But he worried that the man awoke every day with a new set of definitions as to what his duty, and the boundaries placed upon them by his superiors in Etzos, truly were. In fact, he felt that the assessment of Liaison O'Connor was the only thing they HAD come to complete consistent agreement upon.

"Yes, dirty work, in the field, not in ambassadorial chambers, is what we want from you, and have been quite pleased with thus far. It is to reward the good work you have done in this capacity that is why I am here. Now you have a better offer than I was supposed to ever agree to. Perhaps in a sense, that does suggest some kind of diplomatic ability. But I believe yours is more of the battlefield type, not the throne room variety. And that is what it will take to secure true naval advancement."

It was with great relief that he reciprocated the signing of Commander Munzorig's name upon the contract with his own. He decided that a revelation about a potential new source of local trouble would help keep the man grounded. "Now, I suspect there is going to be trouble with these pirates soon. The talks we had going with them, which I never really had much faith in, to be honest, are going nowhere. And when they finally break, the amnesty will be withdrawn from those criminals and a serious rain is gonna fall. We would not anticipate any disappointment if you were to task yourself and your men in this direction."

Pulling the scroll case back out, he rolled up the newly signed contract and slipped it inside. "They say that the fairest contract is one where neither side is entirely satisfied." He gave the man a genuine parting smile and nodded a bow, "I believe we can agree that this is a fair contract. Good trial to you, Commander. Keep up the good work."

Unless the mercenary commander had any more points to raise, Master Torvyn would return to his diplomatic flatboat and depart immediately upriver.
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“Good trial to you too,” he spoke.

Commander Gangui remained quiet after Torvyn left the tent.

For awhile he stood stalwart, leaning over the table in contemplation. Despite making progress in the negotiations, he still hadn’t achieved his goals. Admittedly, it left a sour taste in his mouth. Something that he probably wouldn’t be able to wash for quite awhile. He choose to shrug off his feelings of insecurity of his performance within the meeting with Torvyn. He remained still, breathing deeply and calming his mind.

None dared entered the tent, not yet.

Gangui was still coming to terms with the responsibility he had shouldered and the words he had uttered. The scope of his contracted duties was very great, much to his dismay. Fortunately however, what he was towing was well worth the struggle. It would all be worth it in the end.

He would have his castle. He would have his zealots. He would have his opportunity for glory.

Gan wandered what would be the outcome of outsourcing the military and the rise of the mercenary class. Endless limitless war? This questioning was completely against the narrative he spun; that the free market would reign as leader in the emancipated world.

He shook his head, not in disapproval, but in uncertainty of the future.
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Come and get your Loot!

(There's plenty more where that came from)


GANGUI:
XP Rewards: +15

These points can NOT be used for magic.

Knowledges:

  • Discipline: Preparing ones nerves
  • Discipline: You can stand me up at the gates of hell, but...
  • Leadership: Addressing the hard issues
  • Leadership: Admitting Guilt
  • Leadership: Bold Attitudes in the face of power
  • Leadership: Extreme Ownership
  • Leadership: Learning when to follow
  • Leadership: Standing Tall Despite Setbacks
  • NPC: Master Torvyn: Head of the Black Guard Magic Division
  • Negotiation: Citing Previous agreements
  • Negotiation: Ordering subordinates out for private proposals
  • Negotiation: Outrageous Requests
  • Negotiation: Using your opponents argument against him.
  • Persuasion: Incorporating Etzori Rhetoric
  • Politics: Anti-Bureaucratic Leanings
  • Politics: Learning when to submit and when not to
  • Rhetoric: Warrior and Mages can be friends.
  • Torvyn: Answers only to Vuda

Loot:

The grudging respect of Torvyn.
And the already-begun construction of a military Base of Operations.
"Fort Turkey"? ;)
Walled, with parapets, reinforced gate, a tower, stables, barracks.
A basement level with cold storage capacity.
Currently can accommodate 100 men.
Each season will see expansion allowing the housing of an additional 100 men.
Construction will end in one arc, with accommodations for 700 men.
This does NOT necessarily mean they will all be soldiers.


Loss, injuries:

Nothing physical, but you DO now owe 15,000gn :shock:


Fame/Renown: +10

The people of Foster's won't really get any indication of your success in this haggling contest. They'll see the slow construction of the base, and just sort of figure it was all agreed on ahead of time.


Comments:

This felt very genuine. I don't mean that as an insult either...lol
It really inspired me to grasp what position Torvyn would take.
And how he would try to counter Gangui's fervor.
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