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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: The Monster and the Murderer
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:Nerdy stuff! The ending is a bit abrupt, but we wanted to do the actual experiment in a new thread so that this one doesn't get too long!
Requested Rewards:
Doran

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Blood Magic: Uses the blood of mages
Alchemy: Has certain things in common with Transmutation
Alchemy: Normal reagents vs. transmuted reagents
Alchemy: Is creating lightning possible?
Alchemy: One of the few ways of creating a permanent magic item
Alchemy: Enables you to replicate the effects of domain magic
Alchemy: Consistency in reagents
Research: Going to the library
Research: Basing a new experiment off an old one
Research: Discussing your research with a colleague
Research: The difficulties of finding certain research subjects
Research: Building an experiment
Research: Repetition

Jonathan Burr: Aberrant and Transmuter

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Jonathan Burr

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: using the library
Research: standing on the shoulders of giants
Research: conversing with a colleague
Research: building an experiment
Research: basing a new experiment off an old one
Research: repetition
Research: consistency in reagents
Alchemy: transmuted vs alchemical reagents
Alchemy: nonmagic discipline
Alchemy: is creating lightning possible
Alchemy: accelerants
Alchemy: theorizing comparisons between alchemy and transmutation


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Doran on Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:20 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 234

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Thread Name: It Isn't Much
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: I said shit twice
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: How to (Emotionally) Deal with Death
Endurance: Getting Bullied by Dockworkers
Animal Husbandry: Tuck the Tortoise in your Shirt
Rhetoric: Delivering a Eulogy
Woodworking: Carving Peake's Face
Storytelling: Appropriate Eulogies
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Sadness
Renown: Idk maybe +5 or so for meeting a ton of dock workers
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP:Nope

Zipper Awarded:
+5 Fame for getting bullocked by dock workers
Discipline: How to (Emotionally) Deal with Death
Discipline: Getting Bullied by Dockworkers
Animal Husbandry: Tuck the Tortoise in your Shirt
Rhetoric: Delivering a Eulogy
Woodworking: Carving Peake's Face
Storytelling: Appropriate Eulogies
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Last edited by Leeson Andaris on Mon Jul 02, 2018 9:34 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 120
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Thread Name: The Prophecy of Maury
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: It's a Nightmare, so skill lores are applicable

Qit'ria
Requested Rewards:
Skills Knowledge:
[*]Detection: The smell of urine
[*]Discipline: Allowing yourself to be held without reaction
[*]Endurance: Kicked in the ribs from within by baby
[*]Leadership: Keeping someone on task
[*]Meditation: Relaxing in physical contact
[*]Persuasion: Being demanding
[*]Persuasion: Pleading
[*]Tactics: Three birds, one stone


Non-Skills Knowledge:
[*]Zipper: Former mate of an Earth Defier
[*]Zipper: Can look into people's souls
[*]Zipper: My first real kiss
[*]Zipper: Been inside my soul
[*]Zipper: My first hug in ages
[*]Zipper: Knows where Noth is
[*]Self: My baby is a girl
[*]Noth: I know his name now
[*]Noth: Father of my child

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes/
Magic EXP: (No)


Zipper
Requested Rewards:
Skills Knowledge:
[*]Attunement: Catching glimpses of a Becomer’s totems through her Frequency
[*]Attunement: Frequency: Qit’ria
[*]Attunement: Note: Becoming
[*]Attunement: Note: Dreamwalking
[*]Attunement: Note: Gender
[*]Attunement: Note: Hunting
[*]Attunement: Note: Intimacy
[*]Attunement: Note: Pregnancy
[*]Tactics: Barricading the only entranc




Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes/
Magic EXP: (Yes, Attunement)
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Thread Name: Black is the New Red
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A bit of profanity.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Applying Hair Dye
Disguise: Using Dyed Hair to Seem Fully Human
Lisha: Can't Lose Me
Unarmed Combat: Backhand Slap
Unarmed Combat: Choking Cuts off Air
Unarmed Combat: Pinning Shoulders Down

(feel free to add any other lore you see fit for this story)

Loot:
-1GN for hair dye services
+ Black Hair Dye (good for two appliances)

Injuries/Overstepping:
Hair color officially dyed from red to black

Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP:Nope
word count: 97
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Thread Name: Confessions
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nothing for Either of Us.
Loot: Negative.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah.
Renown: Nope.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
word count: 31
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Credit to Pegasus


As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: Angry Turtle
City/Area: Scalvoris, Sweetwine Woods
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Half leaping, half sliding down a slope
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Biting an eyeball
Resistance: Gasping Skitterer Venom
Becoming Ability: Unleash
Becoming Form: Gasping Skitterer
Becoming: Echoing a creature's sense of sight

Loot: Gasping Skitterer Mask Totem

Injuries/Overstepping: Totem Restriction - Aye Aye mouse totem locked until it repairs itself.

Renown: None
Collaboration: (/No)
Magic EXP: (Yes)
word count: 77
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Thread Name: Taking Stock
City/Area: Beacon, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Lei'lira

Skill Knowledge

Caregiving: even when unable to nurse, letting your child latch on and suckle can still help comfort them
Caregiving: being healthy yourself will allow you to care for others better
Cooking: Recipe; tea made with fennel, nettle and raspberry leaf
Medicine: an herbal tea made from fennel, nettle and raspberry leaf will help promote and encourage you producing your own milk
Medicine: when unable to nurse, letting your child latch on and suckle can help remind your body that it is still supposed to be producing milk
Medicine: lactation can fail in nursing mothers when they are unhealthy
Socialization: listening to the dreams of others
Socialization: learning about others through conversation

Non Skill Knowledge

Faith: is very generous
Faith: owns Cally's

Beacon: has produce and livestock farms attached to it as well as a vineyard

Order of the Adunih: is split into two paths among the more senior members; the Path of the Body that heals the body, and the Path of the Mind which heals the mind

Faith

Medicine: Herbs to improve or stimulate lactation
Medicine: When and why lactation ceases.
Socialization: Hearing about people's lives from those who know them best
Socialization: Learning about a family by chatting with them.
Surgery: Diagnosing internal bleeding can be tricky
Surgery: Internal bleeding can be fatal.
Sevrath Ability: Moseke's Light: Can heal moderate wounds
Sevrath Ability: Moseke's Light: Works on internal bleeding as well as external cuts.

Loot: Gifts that Faith brought for Lei'lira as per the off topic notes in thread. Also jobs for while Lei'lira is in Scalvoris.

Swaddling Clothes (3 yards of wool) - 13 GN, 2 SN
Diapers (5 yards of cotton cloth) - 12 GN
Taerin's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN) + blue dye (3 GN, 7 SN, 5 CN) = 9 GN, 2 SN, 5 CN
Taerin's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN) + black dye (1 GN, 2 SN, 5 CN) = 6 GN, 7 SN
Taerin's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN), cream/undyed = 5 GN, 5 SN
Tiran's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN) + blue dye (3 GN, 7 SN, 5 CN) = 9 GN, 2 SN, 5 CN
Tiran's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN), cream/undyed = 5 GN, 5 SN
Tiran's Dress: X-Small (2 GN, 5 SN) + cotton cloth (3 GN) + black dye (1 GN, 2 SN, 5 CN) = 6 GN, 7 SN
Total: 68 GN, 1 SN

*The "dresses" are meant to be baby clothes - the old fashioned/ST version of a onesie as I picture it.*

Lei'lira's Blouse: medium, undyed cotton (cream colored) - 1 GN, 3 SN
Lei'lira's Skirt: medium (8 SN) + cotton cloth (9 SN, 6 CN), + brown dye (6 SN, 4 CN) - 1 GN, 5 SN
Lei'lira's Pants: medium (3 GN) + cotton cloth (3 GN, 6 SN) + beige dye (6 SN) + Cord (Braided) (6 SN) - 7 GN, 8 SN
Lei'lira's Nightgown: medium (5 GN) + cotton cloth (6 GN), white (undyed) + embroidery (1 GN) - 12 GN
Teia's Blouse: medium, undyed cotton (white colored) - 1 GN, 3 SN
Teia's Skirt: medium (8 SN) + cotton cloth (9 SN, 6 CN), + black dye (4 SN) - 2 GN, 1 SN, 6 CN
Teia's Skirt: medium (8 SN) + cotton cloth (9 SN, 6 CN), white/undyed - 1 GN, 7 SN, 6 CN
Teia's Pants: medium (3 GN) + cotton cloth (3 GN, 6 SN) + black dye (1GN, 5 SN) + Cord (Braided) (6 SN) - 8 GN, 7 SN
Teia's Nightgown: medium (5 GN) + cotton cloth (6 GN), white (undyed) + embroidery (1 GN) - 12 GN
Undergarments (5): medium (2 GN, 5 SN/5 SN each), white (undyed) - 2 GN, 5 SN
Total: 118 GN, 5 SN, 2 CN
Pillows (4) - 20 GN
Pillow Cases (4) - 4 SN
Single Fitted Sheet (4) - 2 GN
Single Flat Sheet (4)1 GN, 2 SN
Light Blanket (4) - 2 GN
Total: 144 GN, 1 SN, 2 CN
Stuffed animals (3; cat, wolf, horse) - 3 GN
Balls (3) - 3 GN
Sets of Wooden Blocks (3) - 3 GN
Shapes and Colors (kid's book; nonfiction) - 10 GN
Funny Pirate Tails (kid's book about cat pirates; fiction) - 8 GN
Scalvoris: The History and Language (nonfiction) - 10 GN
Total: 181 GN, 1 SN, 2 CN
Hair Brush (4) - 8 GN
Combs (4) - 4 GN
Toothbrush (Boar Bristles) (4) - 2 GN
Toothpaste (Herb Paste) (4) - 2 SN
Child Fork (2) - 6 CN
Dinner Fork (3) - 3 SN
Dinner Knife (3) - 3 SN
Dinner Plate (8) - 1 GN, 6 SN
Cup (4) - 2 GN
Soup Bowl (4) - 4 SN
Soup Spoon - 2 CN
Total: 200 GN

Injuries/Overstepping: None left after Faith healed Lei'lira in thread. But Lei'lira will continue to have difficulty lactating for a few trials until the tea Faith gave her helps her to recover.
Renown: none
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 862
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Thread Name: A Roar Under the Moons of Cylus
City/Area: Scaltoth Jungles
Notes/Warnings: Mild animal violence - Only Qit being reviewed. Volker agreed to not both with it.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*]Discipline: Double and triple checking supplies before a difficult task
[*]Discipline: Not running from a lion's roar
[*]Field Craft: Making face camo from ashes and water
[*]Hunting: Hunting by moonlight makes you the target
[*]Hunting: Constellion Kill
[*]Stealth: Using face camo to help blend in at night
[*]Tactics: Don't give your quarry an advantage if you gain none
[*]Tactics: Ambushing a lone target
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +10 for surviving a tough hunt
Collaboration: (Yes, but abandoned
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 120
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Thread Name: Memory 4
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Acrobatics: Stretch Before Running
Acrobatics: Use the Ball of Your Bare Feet for Better Footing
Acrobatics: Crawling About on Your Hands and Knees
Acrobatics: Pushing Off of the Ground With Your Hands to Help You Stand
Acrobatics: Hopping to the Side to Avoid Running into Someone
Unarmed Combat: Covering Your Head with Your Arms to Block Blows from Above

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 87
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: Sesserian Psychology
City/Area: Viden.
Notes/Warnings: Two men kissing.
Requested Rewards:
Doran

Knowledge:
Deception: There are some things better left untold
Discipline: Staying calm
Detection: Changes in somebody's appearance
Endurance: Enduring the weather in Viden
Etiquette: Letting a visitor in
Negotiation: Sealing a pact through affection
Negotiation: Doing deals with those similar to you
Psychology: Being empty inside
Research: Asking questions in order to get the whole picture
Seduction: Passionate kisses

Alistair: Exiled from Rynmere
Alistair: Has lost everything
Alistair: Knows that I'm a Mortalborn
Alistair: Accepts me
Alistair: Mine

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Alistair

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Sealing a pact through affection
Negotiation: Doing deals with those similar to you

Doran: A Mortalborn
Doran: Accepts Me
Doran: My Partner

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Doran on Tue Jul 03, 2018 4:01 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 156

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