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Qit'ria
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Posts: 812
Joined: Mon Sep 18, 2017 1:58 am
Race: Tunawa
Profession: Huntsman
Renown: 344
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Intrepid Windrunner
City/Area: Scalvoris Coast
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence

Qit'ria
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
  1. Endurance: Receiving a broken nose
  2. Medicine: Resetting a broken nose
  3. Seafaring: Steering is a lot easier when you can see over the wheel
  4. Seafaring: Controlling the wheel during a storm is really difficult
  5. Seafaring: Turning the wheel changes the direction of the ship
  6. Seafaring: Opening a ship's sails all at once can cause a lurch in movement
  7. Strength: Resisting a ship's wheel desire to turn
  8. Strength: Lowering center of gravity for increased lifting leverage
  9. Strength: Carrying a barrel on each shoulder
  10. Thrown (Javelin): Throwing against the winds into a storm
Loot: +1 Harpoon
Injuries/Overstepping: Broken Nose, self set
Renown: No
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)


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Requested Rewards:
Skills Knowledge
  • Seafaring: Securing The Wheel With Rope
  • Seafaring: Run Aground To Dock
  • Strength: Holding The Wheel In A Storm
  • Strength: Tying A Firm Knot With Rope
  • Navigation: Locating Landmarks Based On Description
  • Strength: Pulling the Line for the Mainsail
  • Strength: Put Your Back Into It
  • Seafaring: Using Your Hand and Perception to Gauge the Wind
  • Seafaring: Timing Your Furls and Unfurls With Wind Currents
  • Seafaring: Sailing Out in Storms
  • Seafaring: Sailing The Orm'del
Nonskilled Knowledges
  • Qit'ria: Strong and Determined
  • Qit'ria: Prepared For the Journey
  • Qit'ria: Broke Her Nose Because of You
  • Qit'ria: Is With Child, Your Child Maybe
  • Qit'ria: Likes Piloting the Ship
  • Personal: Braving the Stormy Sea
  • Personal: Sailing Into the Unknown
  • Personal: Am I Expecting A Child Now?
Loot: (N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Zana
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Posts: 563
Joined: Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:12 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
Renown: 404
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Best of a Bad Deal
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Knowledge:
Dance: Warming up in order to maximise practice
Dance: Make sure you do all exercises on both sides equally
Dance: A pirouette
Acrobatics: Touching your toes
Acrobatics: Stretching your calf muscles
Acrobatics: Standing on your toes.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I shouldn't imagine so.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: N/A
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Zana
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Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shadowing
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. So sad.

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Knowledge:
Business Management: You need to get on with everyone
Business Management: Manage relationships individually
Business Management: You're always recognizable
Business Management: Maintain appropriate boundaries.
Negotiation: Working out a way of being with each other
Persuasion: Try and gain a reasonable outcome
Persuasion: We're really not any trouble



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown:If possible, yes.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Zana
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I do love the ocean
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. So sad.

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Knowledge:
Investigation: Putting together clues
Seafaring: Steering
Seafaring: Pointing in the right direction
Seduction: Be sure that any other woman is akin to a potato in light of your own skills
Seduction: Double meanings
Seduction: It isn't a superiority complex, dear, it's a fact
Seduction: Gentle and subtle movements can be very appealing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown:If possible, yes.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Hikaru
Posts: 199
Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2018 3:04 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 0
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Exploring the Marketplace
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Newbie alert
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Taking What You Can Get
Negotiation: Sometimes all you have to do is ask
Appraisal: Modifications To Clothing Adds Up Fast
Persuasion: Pointing Out Similarities
Persuasion: Showing Some Coin Can Encourage A Reluctant Seller
Blades: Daggers Come in Different Varieties
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Yavanna
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Posts: 150
Joined: Wed Jul 11, 2018 4:59 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Bodyguard, Bounty Huntress
Renown: 80
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Does It Hurt?
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Brutality abound
Requested Rewards:

Unarmed Combat: Hit them where it hurts most
Unarmed Combat: Brawling Knee to groin
Unarmed Combat: Fighting Dirty
Unarmed Combat: Groin kick in combat.
Unarmed Combat: Biting is a viable option
Strength: Moving an Unconscious Brute across the Ring

Loot: 100 gold nel prize money
Injuries/Overstepping: Injury: Fractured rib or two, numerous bruises and welts
Renown: Taking down a Rharnian Brute?
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 83
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Hikaru
Posts: 199
Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2018 3:04 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 0
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Strand Reveals Itself
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Newbie alert
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: Strum
Empathy: Emotions Appear As Different Colors
Empathy: Need Close Proximity To Use As A Novice
Endurance: The pain of a physical beating
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Headache
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

Reviewed by: Lavana Tharn
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Hikaru
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Meeting My Own Tangle
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None :)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Regulating breathing
Meditation: Breathing out slowly
Meditation: Clear your mind
Discipline: Not caving to temptation
Discipline: Focusing on one task
Empathy: I can see my own tangle
Empathy: Strong emotions are easier to see
Empathy: Bright orange means fear
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Headache
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed by: Oberan
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Lei'lira
Posts: 652
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:41 am
Race: Mer
Profession: Farmer
Renown: 267
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: As the Arc Dies, New Life Begins
City/Area: Rharne, the Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Marked mature to be on the safe side. It isn't graphic, but a foal was born, and there were a few complications.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry: Horse: mares always try to deliver in the dark and in solitude because they are animals of flight, and as such they prefer not to be seen while dropping their foals
Animal Husbandry: Horse: a mare is able to stop labor during the first stage delivery if she is frightened or disturbed; should this happen, she could wait for trials before going into labor once more when she felt it was safe to do so
Animal Husbandry: Horse: the importance of foal watch
Medicine; Horse: the three stages of labor
Medicine; Horse: how to handle a breech birth
Strength: pushing a breech foal back inside its mother so it can be turned around


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight? She was getting paid for her work, but Lei'lira is still doing a good deed.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Kasoria
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Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 935
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Raise
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Deception: Hiding Behind the Guise of a Harmless Bartender
Detection: Deducing a Tan from the Eastern Deserts
Detection: Knowing a Fellow Killer When You See One
Discipline: Sticking to Your Cover
Discipline: Marshal Your Thoughts Before Speaking
Intelligence: Speculating On Another's Intentions, Based on Evidence Observed and Overheard


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Bangun Vorund: Getting Tired of Ilos' Defiance
NPC Bangun Vorund: Old and Tired, But Far From Stupid
NPC Ilos: Wants Blood On The Streets
NPC Styes: Gambler, Gangster, Defying Bangun Vorund


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nada
Collaboration: Nicht
Magic EXP: Nah
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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