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Kasoria
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Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: What Were You Expecting?
City/Area: Etzos, Outer Perimeter
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence
Requested Rewards:

I was going to make this longer, but then realize how much loot I'd be giving up! Last part (well, it probably will be) is coming after, enjoy!

Knowledge:
Deception: Producing a Convincing "Beating"
Intelligence: Making Use of a Traitor
Intimidation: Threats of Disfigurement
Stealth: Removing Boots for Quieter Steps
Tactics: Dealing with Targets One By One, Rather Than a Head-One Charge
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Proper Use of a Staircase, and Gravity


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Edri: South Side Whore, Aspiring Madam, Traitor in Stye's Firm

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Not yet...
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
ImageOberan
Last edited by Kasoria on Thu Aug 02, 2018 1:03 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 124

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Hikaru
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Thread Name: First Day As A Supervisor
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Overseeing Staff
Business Management: Timekeeping
Business Management: Promoting a business with flyers
Persuasion: Consider the consequences of choices
Persuasion: If I say I'm the boss, I am. I am!
Negotiation: Dealing with difficult people

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Hikaru on Wed Aug 01, 2018 10:44 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 74
Albert Magnus
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Profession: Alchemist
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Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: The Tables have turned
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Can I apply review for my Job threads too? Aside from this, The thread is a written to be somewhat lighthearted and funny.
Requested Rewards: 10xp.
Knowledge: Alchemy:Spider Webs as binding reagents
Alchemy: Imbueing the property of odor
Albert Magnus: Physically weak and needs exercise.
Animal Training: Using things they dislike to promote discipline.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 (slight)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Albert Magnus on Wed Aug 29, 2018 1:43 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 83
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Hikaru
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Thread Name: Crafting Golden Wire
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Anticipating Large Demand
Business Management: Networking is necessary
Business Management: Consider the long term gain
Jewelry Crafting: Golden Wires
Jewelry Crafting: Rolling Metals
Discipline: Practice makes perfect

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Hikaru on Wed Aug 01, 2018 10:46 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 64
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Lei'lira
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Profession: Farmer
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Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: [Beacon] Helping Out
City/Area: Scalvoris, Beacon
Notes/Warnings: Maybe? I marked it mature just to be on the safe side. It isn't hugely graphic, but there is a detailed description of milking goats.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry; Pigs: pigs are low maintenance livestock compared to other farm animals
Animal Husbandry; Pigs:proper housing can be in a barn with deep straw to allow for rooting, or in a pasture with a strong wooden fence and a covered three sided shelter large enough for them all to lie down beside each other inside; piglets will need 16 sqft of space each, weaners and older pigs require 40 sqft
Animal Husbandry; Pigs: in Saun, pigs will need a wallow, an area with mud and water, in order to keep cool; if you don't provide one yourself, your pigs may dig their own, and in Cylus, they need some type of insulation to keep them warm
Animal Husbandry; Pigs: pigs can thrive on a wide variety of feed types including pasture, wooded lots, scrap vegetables, whey, other dairy and day old bread, all of which can reduce their need for grain, and clean water should be available at all times; the food you offer your pigs can affect the taste of their meat
Animal Husbandry; Goats: how to milk a goat
Agriculture: one crop per field


Non Skill Knowledge

Ilaren: the Immortal of lightning, sound, brawling, and alcohol

Scalvoris Holiday: Ilaren's Trial
Ilaren's Trial: the 100th of Ashan is a trial for drinking and celebrations. People usually begin drinking at dawn and continue throughout the trial until dawn the next trial. Those who manage to drink for the entire holiday are said to be smiled upon by Ilaren herself. There tend to be a lot of fights during this trial as a result of the consumption of so much alcohol.

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Oberan
Last edited by Lei'lira on Thu Aug 02, 2018 8:13 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 332
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Lavana Tharn
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Darkness And Daggers
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Some Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
Acrobatics; Leaping onto horse stall gate.
Strength; Pulling oneself over the stall gate.
Tactics Evading Capture from tactical retreat
Running; Full Sprint
Endurance; Maintaining full sprint.
Stealth; Not waking up the old horse.
Stealth; Trying to hide in the horse stall
Discipline; Holding onto a rough ride

Loot: N/A{up to the reviewer}
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes 15xp
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 86
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Hikaru
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Renown: 0
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Faceting Toys
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge

Business Management: Giving news to employees
Business Management: Menu writing
Business Management: Changing the menu with the season
Business Management: Spending time with each employee
Negotiation: Raises
Jewelry Crafting: Faceting Machines

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: (No)
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oberan
Last edited by Hikaru on Sat Aug 11, 2018 9:20 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 65
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Emerit
Posts: 70
Joined: Mon May 28, 2018 3:39 am
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Fisher(wo)man
Renown: 10
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shiver me timbers
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Emerit


Knowledge:

Skill-related
Deception: Keep story twisted even if drunk
Deception: Perform a title believably
Detection: Observe audience for reaction
Endurance: Hold the contents of the stomach when drunk
Storytelling: Gesture add ambience
Navigation: Remember the way when drunk
Persuasion: Make them believe your words with believable story
Physics: Pull of gravity
Resistance: High volumes of alcohol don't cause passing out
Seafaring: Securing gankplank well

Non-skill
Mute: Extremely quiet

Loot: Probably not
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: At Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Mute


Knowledge: 5 Posts = 10 Knowledge

Skill-related

Caregiving: Being a walking crutch
Caregiving: Putting someone to bed
Empathy: Knotting Someone Else's Tangle
Empathy: Sewing positive emotions into a Tangle to encourage conversation
Intelligence: Sorting Through the details of a story
Intelligence: Alcohol Loosen Lips
Investigation: Personally following up a lead
Navigation: Following drunken directions
Strength: Catching someone when they fall
Strength: Bearing someone's weight

Non-skill
Emerit: Owns A Boat
Emerit: 'Hero' of Havardr

Loot: Cost of one drink
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Not many people were around, so I doubt there is any renown to be had
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Image...Oberan
Last edited by Emerit on Sat Aug 04, 2018 9:38 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 210
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Kasoria
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The New Order(s)
City/Area: Etzos, Outer Perimeter
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence, as always
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Stabbing Through the Spine
Blades (Gladius): Circular Parry
Discipline: Holding Up Your End of The Deal
Negotiation: Lower Rate To Mollify the New Boss
Stealth: Pressing Yourself to a Wall to Minimize Your Profile
Tactics: Waiting for the Door to Open Before Kicking It Down


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Walter: New Boss of Styes' Firm
Location: Yaralon, City of Mercenaries


Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope, the benefits of dirty fighting
Renown: Oh yes, but up the the reviewer. Kas made QUITE an impression...
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
ImageLavana Tharn
Last edited by Kasoria on Sun Aug 05, 2018 9:11 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 115

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Hikaru
Posts: 199
Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2018 3:04 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 0
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Blinking For Weight Loss
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Vomit
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Rupturing: Blinking
Rupturing: Light Overstepping Effects
Rupturing: Fast Movement Causes Nausea
Rupturing: Blinking Leaves A Flash Of Light
Running: Run Like Your Life Depends On It
Endurance: Keep Going Or Die

Non-Skill Knowledge:

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Dizziness, blurred sight
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Lavana Tharn
Last edited by Hikaru on Fri Aug 24, 2018 2:22 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 68
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