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“Are you alright”, he asked after several moments of uninterrupted silence. His eyes swept over her face, probing her, hoping to read the answer off her face. She made an effort not to visibly respond to it, instead keeping her usual poker face in place. Still, the Yludih figured her surprise hadn’t gone unnoticed.

“I’m fine,” Yana responded, not sounding as chipper as she would have liked. “Just… tired, is all.”

That at least wasn’t a lie. She felt drained, as if she hadn’t been sleeping for trials, and someone had forced her to run a marathon anyway. Yana wasn’t even sure when this feeling had snuck up on her, though she suspected this whole situation had finally claimed its toll. Things were catching up to her, and now there was no need to be focused and on edge anymore, her body had decided it was time for some relaxation.

Promise kept, bastards dealt with. Time to dust off her hands and walk away. Take a few trials to recuperate.

However, now was not yet the time to loosen up. They weren’t done yet.

Quiome pulled himself up, responding with a negative to her question. He fished a ring out of his pocket and handed it over. Yana frowned, holding the trinket up against the light, squinting to try and get a better look at it. It refracted the rays of sunlight filtering through the trees, shimmering quite brilliantly. The way the facets were carved was a bit crude, but that wasn’t what bothered her. This material was one she had seen before. The Yludih felt her anger rise, anger she’d not felt since the start of her quest. It poured out of her as if a dam had burst, and Yana had to close her eye and distract herself with the matter at hand to keep herself calm.

A sigh escaped. Yana noticed she’d clenched her fist around the ring so hard it felt difficult to unfurl her fingers. Quiome handed her a second ring, much akin to the first, though the color of the crystal was different. Her eye naturally shifted from the accessory to the mutilated hand when he raised it, and her jaw squared a little. She didn’t speak as she returned the trophies to him, but her hands were trembling.

She followed when he walked off, deciding now was not yet the time to be split up again, no matter how short a time it was for. Neither of them knew if the Watchers would come and when, but Yana recognized it would be a bad idea to leave the injured male Yludih to his own devices. If anything were to happen…

Yana stood on guard as her companion checked the other corpses one by one, keeping half an eye on him and half an eye on their surroundings. The wind rustled the leaves and pulled at branches, further in the forest she heard birds singing. Every now and then she thought she heard something snap a ways off, but she couldn’t be sure.

When they reached the last man, Quiome’s emotions seemed to be getting the better of him. Yana couldn’t blame him for feeling frustrated and upset. At first she didn’t know what had set it off, but upon seeing the dead man’s expression, she understood. Nothing more frustrating than to see a target of revenge accept his death rather than fight it and suffer. Perhaps the latter as much fulfilling in the long run as the former, but at least it gave some comfort for a brief while.

She didn’t speak. There was no use in talking. Perhaps if she’d known what to say, she might have tried lifting his spirits. Perhaps if she didn’t get why he felt the way he did, she would have even if she hadn’t the faintest idea of what was appropriate for this moment. Yana didn’t think there was anything that could dampen the sense of defeat surging through Quiome however, and kept her mouth shut.

She didn’t really say anything as he gave his version of the events she’d heard about from the man she’d tortured. He filled in the gaps in her information, answered any questions her victim hadn’t been able to, and gave her a pretty good idea of his mental state during the whole ordeal. She didn’t interrupt, believing that speaking of it would both distract him from the now, and perhaps help place it all in the past.

“Can’t say I was expecting to ask around for seasons without alarming other interested parties,” she responded, shrugging lightly. It hadn’t caused her trouble yet, and it wouldn’t as long as none of those spies connected her to the wanted notice from a couple arcs back. If they did, however, she still had an ace up her sleeve. Two, in fact, though one of them wasn’t too reliable.

She stopped for a moment to take a good look at his face, frowning slightly. Then, she shook her head. “Don’t worry about it. I’m not planning to stay for much longer. Not like this anyway.” A pause, and then she added: “This wouldn’t be the first time I vanished from this city after an incident.” She walked a couple steps without saying anything. “You’re forgetting who we are. It’s no trouble. My job here is done. I don’t need to play mercenary anymore.” She shrugged.

It took a while longer to get to a point where the gates were only a relatively short distance away, the trip slightly lengthened by a break taken near a stream. He’d thrown his shirt away, but Yana had collected it and cut it into ribbons, making attempts to bind his wounds to the best of her ability, if he’d let her. After that, they continued the trek, stopping only when Quiome made it quite clear he wanted to split up, obviously worried about causing further trouble, especially through his injuries. Yana pondered for a moment, though not about whether or not to leave him behind.

“I can pass for a huntress with my gear and my bow,” she stated. The shield would be a little difficult to explain, if it was visible however. “If you pretend to be unconscious, I can get us through.” She didn’t really wait for an answer before she prepared. She stuffed her eyepatch in a pocket, changed her hair color to a dirty blond, and gave her skin a more tanned hue. Lastly, she willed away that awful scar around her right eye. Minor changes, really, but ones that usually had quite a huge effect.

She fixed him a questioning glance then, silently offering him a choice, though she was ready to take action if he would turn it down.

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She was stoic, and as his eyes searched her face Quio couldn't help but feel he still wasn't seeing whatever it was he had thought to see. Her expression in this form was very hard to read, and he didn't know if Yana wanted it that way, or if he just didn't know how to look.

Regardless of her answer --I'm fine. Just... tired is all-- he still felt like he was missing something and he wanted to know what it was he had missed. But he had asked if she was alright and she had answered, and he knew he wouldn't ask again.

That didn't stop him mulling on it, though.

Quio walked close by Yana's side on the way back to Foster's. He had felt more than seen before how her fingers had trembled when she handed him the rings. His own hands were still unsteady, and walking now if he could have he would have taken her hand. He thought in the Uleuda they had walked --or perhaps run-- hand in hand together. But this wasn't the Uleuda, and he didn't reach out.

He tried to make himself wary. The peaceful look on the final man's face remained in his mind but as they drew nearer to the Landing he told himself that brooding could wait. They needed to be careful here. More careful than they had been so far. They were two yludih and this world was not their world. He had already made --and almost made-- so many mistakes.

He had spoken Ulehi before in the forest and there could have been watchers to hear it. He had shifted in the forest and, should the watchers have been near, they might have seen. He was carrying two items which, if taken from him, would prove to be yludih crystal. He had bled red and silver on a shirt that he had meant to leave behind, because if he wore a shirt stained with two types of blood there would be questions. But if he'd left it behind, he would have been leaving his crystalline blood for anyone to collect.

It was possible he was associated with Yana now. The watchers might have heard them talking; they were walking side by side, so close he could have taken her hand. If he had, the watchers might have seen-- another mistake.

And he had said her name aloud. That seemed the biggest mistake of all.

There were already so many things that were wrong and it was only fair he take the blame should they be caught. He stopped to let her go ahead of him but she stopped with him. "You're forgetting who we are," she said but he wasn't forgetting, he knew exactly what they were. Once they were in the city they could become other people and it would be unlikely they would be caught. But they weren't in the city, not yet. They could still be caught at the gates.

Yana wouldn't let him go on his own and the city guard might already know his biqaj form. She could not be seen with him in this form. He tried to explain, the anger he'd felt earlier passing into frustration at everything that could, and always did, go wrong. He pulled her aside, off the beaten path and into cover, so as not to be so easily seen talking.

"They know this form," he said tiredly. "Korim Nji'ra. The watchers I met know I'm yludih. They were Black Guard. They know. If you're seen with me in this form, they might start to speculate about you."

He would not enter the city with her in this form. But he didn't know if it was better to go back as someone else.

"Maybe as the human form you saw, as Earnest," he said, voice intent but low so as not to carry. "But not as Korim." This was the first time he'd used Earnest at all around Foster's. He'd been avoiding shifting forms.

The problem with shifting was the mark of Celarion. There was a marked avriel living around Etzos, and there was Quio. Celarion-marked were not common in this area. And the watchers knew he was yludih. And they knew he had the mark. And the mark didn't vanish between forms.

Because Earnest had been seen around Foster's he was already blown for Foster's Landing, which meant Earnest was blown for Etzos as a whole. Quio would have to burn him.

"Maybe as Earnest," he finally conceded again. "But I still think we should enter separately."

He just didn't see the reason in entering the city together. As far as he could tell, there was no reason. It was better for her to go ahead of him. He would rather, if the guards did ask any questions, that only one of them be stopped. Yana could get away without any problems. She needn't risk herself.

But she was already preparing, making small changes to her face and palette, and after a reluctant moment Quio shifted back to Earnest, hissing against the backlash of pain in his side. Earnest might be okay for now because no matter what, he was burned. It was Quio's hope that anyone who saw her with Freeman would not immediately make the connection between Freeman and Quio's biqaj form, Korim. He dimmed the mark of Celarion in an effort to make it as unnoticeable as possible, and kept that arm tucked close to his body.

Still, he was aware that much could go wrong.

If the watchers linked Earnest Freeman's injuries to the men's deaths, and his mark of Celarion to Korim Nji'ra --and if Yana was stopped with Quio at the gates-- she could be in a lot of trouble. She would be with both an accused murderer and a yludih. What if the guards detained them both? She was carrying a bow and quiver, and the men's bodies' were peppered with arrows that would match hers. How would she explain that?

He didn't know. He didn't want to do this. Not this way.

Quio looked back at her, indecisive and then stubborn. His jaw set.

And then abruptly he doubled down, gasping, to his knees.

Agony.

At first he didn't know what had happened.

Quio tried to blink tears of pain from his eyes but more tears came. He was aware Yana was pulling his arm over her shoulder and helping him up. But then he realized no, she wasn't merely helping him stand. She lifted him to her shoulders. Then she was walking.

She'd punched him in the ribs on his bad side, and suddenly he understood. She was carrying him towards the gates. He thought they must already be in sight of the guards. It was too late. Dammit. It was too late.

"Fuck," he panted out. Her shoulder and shield in his side and belly were not helping. Every step hurt more. But there was no other choice now. She lugged him towards the guards. He needed to be sharp, but he was having trouble paying mind to anything more than the pain in his side.

He focused on gasping for breath.

"What's this?" he thought he heard one of them ask, and then again in Common, "What's this?"

"Fuck," Quio panted out again, and whatever Yana was planning he tried to look the part.
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He wasn’t willing to go in together, insisting he wanted to go alone. He didn’t want to compromise her, he said, keen to blame himself. He was too worried, too paranoid to get in on his own. Too jumpy and uncomfortable. They’d see through him, alright, just not because of his form or his wounds, but because his behavior was suspicious. Even if they were together, his nervousness would still put a spanner in the works. This was troublesome.

Still, he did waver a little, shifting back to his previous form, the human one. They shouldn’t recognize him like this, he expressed his hope. But he still worried. She could see it on his face. If things were to continue on this way, his worries would come true indeed. Yana wasn’t about to let things get to that point.

As her partner worried, she made preparations to her form, small alterations that would keep her other identity hidden. Very basic stuff, really, but it was effective nonetheless. Or perhaps because of it. Usually, people only saw what they wanted to see. If they were looking for a tall and lanky man with hay-colored hair and a short beard, they would ignore a tall, lanky man with black hair –especially so if he was clean-shaven. Small changes made a big difference. Yana knew that well enough as a Knight in Rynmere. How many times had the Knights been searching for some criminals when orders came down from the superior officer to ignore anyone who didn’t fit the description of the perpetrator? A lot. People relied on the consistency of someone’s appearance. Blondes were blondes and gingers were gingers. Blondes didn’t become gingers, or vice versa. The way someone looked was static. Unchanging, for the most part.

It was one of the reasons she figured Yludih were so hated and feared.

Once Quiome was done shifting, Yana moved like a coiled snake, her fist striking his wounded torso right where the laceration sat, not holding back at all. She heard him gasp, felt his legs give away. Her arms caught him before he hit the ground, dragging him back up despite gravity’s effort to pull his limp body down.

For a moment or two she just kept him up that way, shifting her grip in preparation for the next step. Then, she lifted him up a little, placing her shoulders underneath his body. Her knees struggled to push her body and the extra weight back up, but she managed somehow, grunting quietly from the effort.

He was heavier than the fellow squires had been when they’d practiced evacuation exercises back in Rynmere, a few arcs ago. He was also a whole lot heavier than the rucksack stuffed with rocks she’d been ordered to carry on her back during morning and evening runs during her time in the Etzos Military. She’d probably manage though. The gates weren’t that far off.

Yana had to shift his weight a couple times when it became too uncomfortable on her shoulder, when it began to ache and complain. She’d pay the price the next trial for sure, but she’d brought it onto herself. Not that it mattered. Only a few more bits now.

When the guards first came into sight, Yana was rather relieved. Not because she was almost there, no, but because they were not Black Guard. Foster’s was outside of their jurisdiction, after all, Fiona had mentioned. Hence why the Turkeys were hired to work their as a proxy guard for them. The men guarding the gate, then, were also Turkeys, easily recognizable thanks to their ridiculous symbol. Good thing it was just those guys. The Black Guard were harder to deal with, but the Turkeys she could probably manage. If they were all cut from the same wood as their Commander, it’d be no problem at all.

“What’s this?” One asked twice, each time in another language. Quiome grunted and swore, not even needing to act. Yana wondered if she should answer is Rakahi or Common, then decided on the latter.

“My friend’s hurt,” Yana said, doing her best to let some hint of distress creep in her voice, and showing some worry on her face. “I applied first aid, but he needs a doctor.” She moved towards the gate, though her path was blocked by the two Turkeys.

“What happened, hm? ” the second wanted to know.

“I don’t have time for this,” Yana rose her voice and her pitch a little, sounding impatient. The guards didn’t seem to care. She made a frustrated little noise, than fumbled in her pocket with her free hand. It returned with a wanted poster. Even though she hadn’t foreseen this situation at the time, she had figured it would come in handy sooner or later. “We were hunting Cuckoo,” she quickly explained. The ridiculous sum of nel attached to his capture had drawn a lot of sell swords and bounty hunters, so it wasn’t an outlandish claim. Their attire –or at least hers—looked the part as well. “We got ambushed. Please, he needs help!”

That should do it, she thought.

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We were hunting Cuckoo, Quio thought confusedly, and he didn't know what Yana meant because he didn't know what she had planned. She had said earlier she could pass as a huntress and for a moment he thought she was still on that. Bird hunting? That was how he had been injured? Then he saw the crumpled flier in her hand.

"Cuckoo," one of the guards repeated, and gripped his weapon at the name. His face went hard.

Still breathing through his teeth, Quio gritted out, "Caught-- caught up to a handful of his men." He drew in a struggled breath. "Didn't see-- the Cuckoo himself. But-- one of 'm had an ax, and--" His side was wrapped up, the crude bandages wetting through with blood. '--ts bad sir, 'ts bad," Quio panted. He struggled another breath in. Getting worked up but trying to stay calm. Tears pricked at his eyes. "Sir it's-- h-hard to breathe," he worked out.

The guard looked at him, and Quio pretended he was trying to control the harsh, half-panicked breaths and the thrumming of his asterism. Each gasp pulled at his side, and as he breathed it only intensified the pain, which only made his breathing harder, and made it sound worse. He saw the man's eyes glance off the mark of Celarion he was trying to hide, and the guard's face twisted into something like a sneer.

But he waved a hand, and a couple of the guards set off the way Quio and Yana had come from. Quio was aware that the man was asking more questions-- where were the Cuckoo's men, how many escaped, how many were slain, did any have bounties and on and on. He would answer in broken sentences if Yana didn't.

After a bit or so, the guard let them pass. As they labored by, his eyes slid away from Quio as if in disgust, and Quio kept his own eyes on the ground until they got to a place where Yana was able to put him down.

He staggered as he took his weight, and fresh pain shot through his side. The pain demanded he buckle and he leaned hard against the nearest wall, still heaving in air. The panic back there had been easy to seize on; it was calming down after that was more difficult. After a bit or two or three, his breathing calmed. He wiped the tears from his eyes and gave Yana an unamused look. His heartstone was still thrumming, and another wave of faux adrenaline wanted to make his teeth chatter. He locked his jaw into something close to a snarl instead. "That was stupid and it fucking hurt."

What if they'd stopped us, he wanted to ask. What if they demanded you take them to where we were attacked? What if they wouldn't let us both pass? Those guards were the type who wouldn't normally deign to piss out the fire on someone who was marked. They could have refused to allow Quio or both of them to enter because of it. What then?

But he didn't start. They'd gotten in. That was all that mattered. "Thanks," he gritted out.

They needed to get somewhere they could shift into new forms.

"The nearest inn," Quio grunted, a question without asking. He thought the nearest one was the Land Inn'. If not, there were a handful of other taverns and inns, though Quio would prefer the nearest. His side was killing him.

If she didn't suggest somewhere else, he would start limping in that direction.

As they made their way towards the inn Quio kept his eyes aware for anyone paying too much attention to them, in case someone had followed them from the gates. But it appeared they were okay. He hobbled the length of one street and then another before asking, "What will you do now?" She'd said before she wasn't planning to stay much longer, not like this anyway. But he didn't know what that meant.
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If a magic word existed to turn stubborn Turkeys into compliant ones, it would be Cuckoo. The change in attitude was instantly noticeable when the name dropped, with both guards’ faces stiffening up. Their jaw squared, their brows furrowed into a scowl. Fists clenched at their sides, or around the hilt of the weapon if they’d already been holding it.

No surprise there, really. A while ago their Commander had been the victim of an assassination plot orchestrated by the villain, a poisoning that had fortunately been treated in time. As luck would have it, the Turkeys had a Tunawa healer at their disposal, and had put the twig’s knowledge of poisons and antidotes to good use.

Unfortunately for Yana, who’d seen the other half of her promised coin vanish into thin air.

Not too long afterwards, the terrible Scourge of Etzos had personally paid the Tunawa a visit to make them into an example. Yana appreciated the sentiment, but the fact that all her hard work had been effectively undone still frustrated her.

Either way, those two acts of pure evil had really been felt by the Turkeys, and fueled the flames of their zealous vigor. Perhaps they did not like everyone who hunted Cuckoo –Yana could see some disdain in their eyes when they looked at her now—especially not those who only responded to the almost religious calling because of the promise of coin, but all who helped their cause were not the enemy, and that was what mattered most.

Someone badly hurt when trying to further the noble cause, then, could be empathized with.

Or at least he would be if not for that damned Mark adorning his arm.

Perhaps without it they would have been able to pass through immediately, but now, despite Quiome’s realistic half-acted performance, information needed to come first. Immortals were also the enemy, and while Yana doubted they would make a move against their followers now that Cuckoo still was a priority, she knew that they certainly didn’t mind if one of the sheep died in the line of duty.

On a fundamental level, she really didn’t disagree. Two birds, one stone, and all that.

Yana answered all their questions with as much patience as she could muster, though she really didn’t need to act the building frustration that seeped in both her body language and voice. Eventually they seemed to be satisfied, and Yana pushed through before they changed their mind. There was no protest from the Turkeys.

She put Quiome down in an alley, away from curious glances and straying gazes. He didn’t look very pleased with her, but Yana really couldn’t care less at the moment. The other Yludih needed some time to calm down and once more center himself, but even after that, she could see a wordless accusation in his eyes. She shrugged it off. He was inside the city limits now, and that was all she cared about.

“They’d have never let you in,” she responded, her eyes –both the blind and functional one—flitting to the ring of light on his arm for a moment. “It was for your own good.”

It was obvious he disagreed, even now still, but he didn’t say anything. Not that he needed to, she was fairly sure she could guess what doubts and worries he’d been harboring. He thanked her instead, and Yana accepted it with a simple nod.

“Either the Land Inn, or Dolph’s Inn,” she stated, pointing in their general directions, which were almost opposite. There also was Nalod’s, but she wasn’t sure if they could rent rooms there, and the patrons that frequented it wouldn’t take kindly to the bright band on Quiome’s arm.

She let her companion choose, then began walking next to him, offering to support him if he so desired it. His wounds were bad enough as things were, and limping around exhaustedly wouldn’t make things better.

“I’ll go back to Rynmere,” she stated, “pick up where I left off. Return to my duties.” She wondered if this extended absence would have any impact on her career. Would it set her back? It was almost inconceivable that it wouldn’t. “You shouldn’t stay any longer than necessary. This isn’t a good place for--” she pondered her words for a moment, keeping her eyes from wandering sideways “—people like you.”

They arrived at the inn then, and Yana wished she had worn a cloak or something she could have used to cover up Quiome’s bandaged torso –and his arm. Some people were subtle about it, others weren’t, some only needed a quick glance while others stared, but all looked in their direction as they entered. Yana pretended not to notice, and focused on negotiating with the innkeeper. She didn’t raise her voice, nor did her tone really change, but it would be clear to Quio that neither she or the innkeep were too happy about the situation when Yana motioned for the other Yludih to follow her to the room they’d been assigned.

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Beautiful writing - I really enjoyed the section at the beginning where Yana reflected on how people respond to vengence. Nicely done - nicely written. She's a cold, cold one - but I really enjoyed the story here and the way the two pcs were together was really fascinating and very honestly written. Nice work.

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XP: 15 (not for magic)

Renown: 5

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23gn from the Ne'haer men.

Knowledge

Blades: Dagger: Slitting a throat
Blades: Shortsword: Footsies
Blades: Shortsword: Severing an arm
Blades: Shortsword: A solid defensive stance
Deception: Pretending to be bounty hunters
Shield: Alder Wood shields can't be broken or split
Shield: The impact of a blow still affects the arm holding the shield
Shield: Using the edge of a shield to break an arm
Ranged: Shortbow: Muting a target with an arrow through the voicebox
Ranged: shortbow: Taking the wind into consideration
Ranged: Shortbow: Arrows don't fly indefinitely
Ranged: Shortbow: Rapid fire
Ranged: Shortbow: Hitting a zig-zagging target

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Quiome: Alive
Quiome: Biqaj and human forms
Quiome: Has an Immortal mark
Quiome: Paranoid
Ulehi: Beqluh: Literally means rock
Ulehi: Beqluh: Also means idiot, a stupid person, lit. someone who is 'as dense as a rock'
Sons of Justice: Feel superior to bounty hunters
Sons of Justice: Don't like Immortals
Sons of Justice: Proxy guard of Fosters
Sons of Justice: Hate 'Cuckoo'


Quio

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I loved the links here, between things which happened a long time ago and now. Your portrayal of Quio is great, I really enjoy reading him - he's a complex pc that's for certain. I particularly enjoyed your description of the combat, it was very rich and visual and I was right there and able to follow along.

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Knowledge

Blades: Dagger: Killing quickly, efficiently
Blades: Dagger: Fighting with an inadequate weapon
Blades: Dagger: Knowing when your weapon is at a disadvantage
Blades: Dagger: Bleeding an enemy from multiple wounds
Navigation: Layout of Foster's Landing
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Dodging armed attacks
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Speed and endurance are important
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: A kick to the knee
Unarmed Combat: Pulling a punch
Medicine (general): Knowing when an injury is debilitating
Medicine (general): Symptoms of blood loss
Medicine (yludih): Lifelight is only visible from deep injuries

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
NPC: The Bloodlass
The Bloodlass: Pirate captain near Foster's Landing
The Bloodlass: Sent Meeks and the pirates after you
Yanahalqah: Yana is the mercenary from Rynmere
Yanahalqah: Has a human form (her mercenary form)
Yanahalqah: Dangerous, and a skilled fighter
Yanahalqah: Was on the Humble Son
Yanahalqah: Knows your first biqaj and second human forms
Yanahalqah: Saved your life again
The men from Ne'haer: Are dead
The men from Ne'haer: Didn't have the pearl seashell
The men from Ne'haer: Died before you could get information on the buyer
Ulehi: Beqluh literally means stone or rock
Ulehi: Beqluh can be used as an insult, meaning "stone man" or "stupid man"
PC: The "Cuckoo"
Faction (Etzos): The Sons of Justice aka the Turkey Company
The Sons of Justice: Hate immortal worshippers
Foster's Landing: Locations of inns (ex: the "Land Inn'", the "Dolph's Inn")
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~~Red in hoof and claw... ~~
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