• Closed • The Lost City (Graded)

The gang reaches the entrance to the ruins.

With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.
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Kasoria
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Posts: 1541
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 935
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Wealth Tier: Tier 5

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Re: The Lost City

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Patrick
  • Research: Delving Into Lost Ruins
  • Logic: Themes With Puzzles and Riddles
  • Research: Paying Mind To Symbols
  • Strength: Holding Open A Stone Door
  • Investigation: Searching For Clues In Riddles and Puzzles
  • Investigation: Connecting Signs and Symbols
  • Leadership: Instructing Others When Helping
  • Leadership: Working With A Team To Get Results
  • Tactics: Surrendering When It's The Only Option
  • Logic: Survival Above All Else
Non Skill
  • The Orimatsu: Heavily Relied On Symbols
  • The Orimatsu: The Owl, The Bear, The Dragon Symbols
  • The Orimatsu: Created An Elaborate Test For Entry
  • The Orimatsu: Worshipped More Than Just Emea?
  • Raimeus: Caught Up With The Expedition
  • Raimeus: Opened The Gate
  • Kleo: Knows More About The Orimatsu Than Usual
  • Kleo: Bought Finn's Act
  • Expedition: Surrendered to Raimeus With Terms
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar

Ellen'wyn
Skill
  • Detection: An unknown presence
  • Detection: Sometimes it's a feeling
  • Investigation: Use all your senses
  • Intelligence: An educated guess
  • Field Craft: Have more than one light source
  • Strength: Instances of brute force
  • Acrobatics: A good handhold can save poor footing
  • Tactics: A choke point can trap you
  • Tactics: Don’t turn your back on the enemy
Non Skill
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar
  • Finn: Possibly a backstabber
  • Raimeus: Caught up with the expedition
  • Raimeus: Opened the gate to Orimar

Oberan
Skill
  • Acrobatics: sliding underneath a door
  • Appraisal: considering the power of emean entities
  • Appraisal: gauging the mindset of your companions
  • Appraisal: studying a sealed door
  • Deception: try to goad someone into making a promise
  • Deception: crossing your fingers behind your back to make a promise non-binding
  • Deception: pretending to be calm and collected
  • Linguistics: Exposure To Orimatsun
  • Strength: propping up a door
  • Strength: tired arms don’t provide much power
Non Skill
  • God Key: was nullified? IMPOSSIBLE!
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): It Exists!
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): Supremely Powerful
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): Possibly Emean
  • Language: Orimatsun Dialect From The Guardian
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar
Renown: I think 10 points for everyone is fair, considering you were all present for the discovery of the city, but right now it looks like Raimeus, the SWINE, is taking credit. If that changes, so too might the reward...

Notes:
... WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?! You can't just end it there! Damnit, the movie isn't over yet! Honestly though, I hope we see more of this, because it was great. The puzzles, the discovery, the enemy gatecrashing, the delightful smug shittiness of the Bad Guy and the resolve of the Goodies... I liked all of it. And hey, who knew Oberan had a poetic streak?

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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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