Review Request Thread 2.1.8

[Kira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: My hands!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Meditation: a clear mind is essential to multitasking
Meditation: Fretting is often counterproductive to achieving your goal
Acrobatics: Dodging thrown rocks
Maerzek: Always Equipped for the Job lets me morph my hands into tools
Socialization: Entertaining a crowd

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Locally renown as the girl who's hands can change shape
Collaboration: No

[Kira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Learning the forge
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Smithing: Stretching Metal
Smithing: Hammering molten metal to remove impurities
Smithing: Gentle strokes
Smithing: The components of a bladed weapon
Endurance: The pain of physical labor
Strength: Repetitive movements to build muscles.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: no
Collaboration: No

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dawn of a New Season
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
None requested.

Loot: Gets a new staff / bow. Aegis is modding the thread where it's made.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Vega

Knowledge:
None requested

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: N/A

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I. This Way Comes
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Right. Gather ye round, chillens! Let us begin...

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not Rising to a Fool's Smugness
Intelligence: Using a Dead Drop
Philosophy: Collateral Damage is Part of an Assassin's Life
Philosophy: The Simple, Honest Purity of Outright Violence
Politics: Cut a Potential Rival Down to Size Before He Becomes a Future Problem
Psychology: People Use "We" to Hide Weakness Behind an Impression of Unity

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos Organizations: Reaver-Cleavers, Gang of Hooligans from the South-West, Working for Fozzie Tatum
Etzos Underworld: A Whole Patchwork of Gangland Territories
NPC Fozzie Tatum: Pimp and Racketeer on the South-West
NPC Ilos: Getting (a little too) Used To Commanding
NPC Vorund: Always Beset By Pretenders
NPC Vorund: Renaming his Oldest Legitimate Business

Loot: No - Kas gets paid, but that's just for the story's purposes
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Aneka Tristal]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hit Hard, Hit Often
City/Area: Rharne(Thunder Den)
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Blood, spit, vomit
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Unarmed Combat: Heavy hitters aren't always slow
• Unarmed Combat: Sneak attacks
• Unarmed Combat: Fast and Strong attacks
• Unarmed Combat: Predict your opponent's next attack
• Endurance: Staying in the fight even when you're on your last legs
• Endurance: Adrenalin blocks the pain

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably a good deal of injuries.
Renown: Fighting in the Thunder Den (I dunno how much)
Collaboration: Nope

[Virikai Talius]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Long Game
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership: Find Out the Problem First
Teaching: Allow the Student to Work it Out Themselves
Teaching: Don't Overwhelm the Student
Teaching: Everyone Has a Different Background
Teaching: Everyone Learns at a Different Pace
Teaching: Patience is Needed

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer discretion
Collaboration: No

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Smoke and Sunder
City/Area:Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Light drinking. Dancing. A kiss. That's about it. Just exploring character with a little writing exercise (there will be two parts, hopefully). Sorry if it's boring.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 10xp
Dancing: Read Your Partner's Body Language
Dancing: How to Follow a Beat
Dancing: Engage Your Whole Body
Dancing: How to Grind on Someone
Resistance: Alcohol Affects Your Body's Awareness
Strength: Dancing is a Good Work Out

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: idunno
Collaboration: No

[Virikai Talius]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Six Steps Ahead
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Agreeing to Something You Don’t Want
Tactics: A Poor Start Doesn’t Mean a Loss
Tactics: Don’t Only Focus on Minutia
Tactics: Take in the Whole Picture
Tactics: Think Six Steps Ahead
Tactics: Your Opponent May be Cleverer than You

Loot: -200gn.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Points for two qualifications please.
Collaboration: No

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[Oberan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Back out again
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: meh
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: two-story downward leap
Climbing: dealing with the sudden loss of hand- and footholds
Climbing: frantically searching for purchase
Climbing: test hand- and footholds before placing your weight on them
Stealth: something breaking will alert people
Stealth: get out of the light

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing relevant anymore.
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No

[Cervantez]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Spar For the Course
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, so may seem incomplete
Requested Rewards:

Discipline: Trying to contain Annoyance
Endurance: Sailing through the pain
Endurance: Pacing yourself
Endurance: Fighting against multiple opponents
Strength: Tearing free of a grip
Strength: Use your strength to knock someone out
Strength: Getting used to holding a heavy weapon
Blades{Great-sword}: Heavy handed swings are your friend
Tactics: Unpredictability Keeps the Enemy Guessing
Deception: Making someone think you are on their side


Injuries/Overstepping: Soreness from foe weapons
Renown: (10-15 for public training in Yaralon)
Collaboration: (Yes)