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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Gilt the Craft and the Lie
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Training: Thwarthog: A very intelligent breed of pig.
Animal Training: Trick: Lean into an aggressor, to diffuse a situation.
Business Management: Foreclosing on a farm.
Business Management: Losing ownership of one's business can lead to other opportunities.
Business Management: Switching ownership to another.
Business Management: Being drummed out of business and out of town.


Loot: -1 quacian farmhouse.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: 10 for losing his business publicly.
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wanderer
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing buildings that are out of the ordinary
Meditation: Getting ahead of the grief
Meditation: Disassociating to avoid your emotions
Strength: Moving a boulder out of the way
Strength: Got to plant your feet to push properly
Strength: Pushing is a full body exercise


Non-skill:
Dreamwalking: Lets you pass to the space between dreams

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Ashling
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Nigth Navigtor, Chapter One

City/Area: Fensalir

Notes/Warnings: No

Requested Rewards:

Ashling


Knowledge:
Detection: Detecting people's movements by hearing them
Endurance: Enduring to take care of a person with mood swings
Endurance: Enduring to take care of a person who rants at you
Endurance: Enduring to work night shifts
Navigation: Looking for landmarks at night
Medicine: Prescribing fresh air and exercise

Non-Skill
Nathon: Ydalir member "off duty"
Nathon: Experienced at combat
Nathon: Has a strong sense of duty
Nathon: Doesn't like aimless strolling

Collaboration: No

 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Taking down the necromancer
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: There are many places to hide in a forest
Meditation: Battles are high stress environments
Meditation: A pep speech can boost morale
Endurance: Bludgeoned by branches
Empathy: Prevent them from moving so they can’t escape your range
Empathy: Touching makes for a powerful connection

Nonskill
Dreamwalking: brand (Lyngvi Tower, Melrath)

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: most physical injuries should be healed. up to you for mental ones
Renown: helping take down a necromancer
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: Empathy for utilizing his entire arsenal. This would be tier progression

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Destruction, Dreams of
City/Area: emea
Notes/Warnings: lucid about 1/4 of the way through
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Shortages cause prices to go up
Business Management: Finding small ways to save a customer money
Meditation: Calming, healing breath
Meditation: Sitting still
Politics: A dangerous game
Politics: Trust no one.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?:

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Escaping the City
City/Area: Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Sweet Killin', Kassy Nastiness, Poisonous Vlu...

This one kinda came out of nowhere, and I hope you enjoy it! Clearly its the genesis of something big and nasty.

Requested Rewards:

VLURHARQIH
Skill Knowledge:
Disguise: Yludih shapeshifting can escape bonds
Poison: Rat Fluff- Calming Agent
Poison:Thraybone - Paralyzing agent
Poison: Bread and Butter- Liver, Heart, and Brain toxins combined
Poison:Fairysnuff - Death by Fear
Poison:Hot Red - Aphrodesiac
Poison: Psinia Shock - Causes Psychosis or Insanity
Poison: Claytona Monticola - Crystallize the Lungs
Poison: Delaying the Release of Airborne Poisons
Poison: Brown Recluse Spider
Endurance: Ignoring the pain of a skinned hand to make it work
Persuasion: Look for the moment of Doubt
Persuasion: Know when the target isn't going to believe you


Injuries/Overstepping: Nasty gash on the leg, will need healing within a couple of trials
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

KASORIA
Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation - Shield (Master): Can be Cast in the Blink of an Eye
Axes & Bludgeons (Waraxe) - Combo: High Block and Foot Chop
Deception: Bluffing More Magic than you Actually Have
Detection: Knowing When a Blade's Smeared with Poisons
Interrogation: Suspicion As Standard
Interrogation: Names, Dates, Places - The Foundations of Facts
Interrogation: Never Believe the First Story
Intimidation: Using your Mutations to Frightening Effect
Poison: Thraybone - Paralyzing agent
Poison: Bread and Butter- Liver, Heart, and Brain toxins combined
Poison: Brown Recluse Spider
Poison: Can be Delivered as a Mist with a Pump Sprayer
Poison: Requires Special Equipment to Produce


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Marshall Webb: High-Ranking Etzori Officer, and Secret Sintra Follower
PC Vluharqih: Cunning, Venomous Redhead
PC Vluharqih: Knows about a Pro-Sintra Conspiracy within the Citadel


Loot: Thraybone vial x3, "Bread and Butter" vial x3, vial of "Bread and Butter" with an aerosol pump on top, and a lock of Vlu's hair
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bank, Dreams of
City/Area: emea
Notes/Warnings: lucid
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Some business hurdles are designed to prevent competition
Business Management: Need government approval to legally operate
Meditation: Repressing memories
Meditation: Refusing to think negatively
Politics: There’s no avoiding human interaction
Politics: First impressions can mean a lot

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?:

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: the importance of notes
City/Area: melrath
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Use connections to vie for a promotion
Politics: Be polite to your superiors
Meditation: Enduring a mental attack
Empathy: Identifying emotions that did not originate from my own tangle
Rhetoric: Writing down thoughts
Research: Record the topic at the top

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: up to you
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: Empathy for learning a new technique and more about empathy in general

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1. Quacian Botany
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream nonlucid
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Loot/Losses: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown:-
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Brushing Up
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Training: Slowly acclimating a mount to hone runes
Hone: Enhancing a mount's speed
Hone: Rune of Speed helps with maneuverability
Hone: Affects individual limbs regardless of use
Meditation: Compartmentalizing grief away
Mount (Kheledzan): Using lower body commands

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: no
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Hone

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word count: 68
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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