Review Request 2.2.2

[Pegasus]

Peer Review Requests

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Peer Review Guide

Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: There is no minimum word count, however we feel that 1500 is a worthwhile number to strive for. That said, we will not be hard enforcing word count. Individuals found abusing this system in order to powerplay will be dealt with accordingly, as individuals.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain an additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. Less than three posts will allow you to claim only the 6 knowledge of a solo (please note, this does not apply to abandoned threads). For every post made after that, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.

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[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) 
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Aegis:

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Basilisk

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Cervantez

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Doran

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Ellen'wyn

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Fairytale

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Genuva

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Navyri

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[Ashling]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Deal with an outlander, Part 2

City/Area: Melrath, The Wilderness and Fensalir

Notes/Warnings: Part 2/2. Brent and Ashling contribute to a breakthrough in Melrath's military intelligence.

Requested Rewards:

Brent

Knowledge:
Leadership: Assessing and providing options regarding a problem
Investigation: Contacting local authorities with a lead
Persuasion: Providing evidence to back up a claim
Tactics: Breaking down a plan to spring an ambush
Navigation: Using a compass to travel through forest underbrush
Running: Forest terrain - stepping over logs and rocks
Combat: Using a make-shift weapon (tree branch)
Strength: Picking up a young lady in one's arms


Loot:
Easy to get contacts in the Ragnari, the Ydalir, Fensalir and Alivilda when Brent needs it

1 basic map of forest trails from Alivilda to Fensalir (there wasn't enough time for a more complete 'average' map)
*Note, this may have been more appropriate loot for Part 1, if needed the reviewer of Part 1 can be contacted for this loot

Renown:
20 for putting your life at risk and contributing to a breakthrough for Melrath's military intelligence (large impact)

Collaboration: Yes

Ashling

Knowledge:
Tactics: Sending in the spy least likely to be killed at once
Tactics: Defending yourself with poisonous plants
Navigation: Navigating by automatized memories
Navigation: Finding an agreed meeting place you know in advance
Intelligence: Two horses reveals that there can be two riders around
Intelligence: Difficulties to wait can reveal impatience
Intelligence: Upset ranting can reveal aversion to a task
Intelligence: Dominant behavior indicates higher rank

Non-Skill
PC: Brent Forrester, saved your life in the outlander incident in Ymiden 719
PC: Brent Forrester, excellent at accurate and detailed reporting
PC: Brent Forrester, brains over muscle
NPC: The four Ragnari who took down Warren and Daisy

Loot:
Easy to get contacts in the Ragnari, the Ydalir, Fensalir and Alivilda when Ashling needs it

Injuries: Temporary symptoms of Hannyban poisoning

Renown:
20 for putting your life at risk and contributing to a breakthrough for Melrath's military intelligence

Collaboration: Yes

[Abra]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: hired help
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Don’t let frustration get to you
Meditation: Multitasking multiple tangles
Empathy: Feeling multiple tangles
Empathy: Subtle works better than force
Business Management: If you only have a few items left people think something’s wrong with them.
Business Management: Get investors if you can’t come up with the cash yourself

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: doubtful. this was more experimentation than brute force
Renown: helped a business
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: Empathy for pushing the limits of tangle quantities

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[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Convalescing
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. The other PC hasn't posted in over a year, so it's unlikely that he'll return.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Longsword): Stabbing someone in the chest
Endurance: The aftereffects of inhaling a dangerous substance
Endurance: Waiting next to a patient's bed for what seems like an eternity
Intimidation: Pointing your weapon at someone
Indimidation: Looking directly into someone's eyes
Intimidation: Mentioning that you have access to substances that can kill someone quickly and quietly
Medicine: A tea of sage soothes the stomach
Medicine: Ginger reduces nausea
Psychology: Family is not everything
Psychology: You can escape your heritage
Resistance: Inhaling a dangerous substance
Strength: Carrying an unconscious person

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 10 for saving Narav and killing his attacker.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no

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[Kalortah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Ode to Liberty
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Yeva will probably let me know what lores she wants from this thead soon. Will edit it when she gets back to me.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Leadership: Leading a duet.
Leadership: Bossing a human around.
Leadership: Leading a band.
Leadership: Telling people what to do doesn’t always inspire confidence.
Leadership: Coming up with a plan gives a semblance of hope.
Leadership: Some plans are really bad.
Singing: Singing by the beach makes for interesting acoustics.
Singing: Singing can attract attention.
Sociology: Human women must show caution in the presence of strange males.
Sociology: Slaves: People who are coerced into service.

Loot: a shell-hat for Ibudo and a diseased feather
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Coroth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:-‡- Leather and Lust -‡-
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Mature content -boobs-
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Leather Working - Keeping layers aligned during hole punching

Linguistics - Common use of " hold" word

Discipline- Discipline against lust

Leather Working - How to add spikes to leather armor

Leather Working - How to use glue to add layers to leather armor

Leather Working - How to drill holes into leather

Loot: Upgrade leather armor

[Abra]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Village Pitstop
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Sore thighs from riding a horse
Meditation: Prepare the mind for a battle to come
Meditation: Consider whether your actions align with your morals
Discipline: Orders are Orders
Discipline: Know when to keep quiet and the others handle things
Interrogation: Show empathy to form a social bond

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: hunting a necromancer, if that matters
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: no

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Song of the Elements: Prelude
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Sparring.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Praetorum
Acrobatics: Using your tail to avoid being unbalanced
Attunement: Frequency - Balthazar
Attunement: Listening to an opponent's frequency during combat
Attunement: Using Omnivision to reorient yourself
Defiance: Finding a spot that balances the elements
Meditation: Meditating while you wait
Meditation: Uncluttering your mind
Meditation: Compartmentalizing distracting memories
Tactics: Using a large projectile to hide your approach
Tactics: Launching a surprise attack from underground
Unarmed Combat (Solum): Turning a defensive wall into a projectile
Unarmed Combat (Solum): More limbs makes you more balanced
Unarmed Combat (Solum): Blocking an attack with a forearm
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina): Using existing momentum to help fling an attack
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina): Unbalancing a foe with a flurry of blows

Balthazar
Storytelling - A fun recap
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Flame and Wind Blast Jabs
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Uppercut flurry combo
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Flaming fist combat
Unarmed Combat (Solum) - Rock-shattering punch
Unarmed Combat (Solum) - Three strike combo
Unarmed Combat (Solum) - Utilizing the earth behind a foe to trip them
Defiance - The elements do not like to be played against each other
Defiance - Wind's embrace, flight
Rupture - Collapsing portals don't cut organic material
Rupture - Remember to make portals larger for taller people
Discipline - Reacting fast under pressure
Tactics - Control the elements your opponent can access
Strength - Punching a more durable opponent
Endurance - Knuckle bruises

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable
Renown: If applicable
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes

[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Anti-Winter Potion
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Honey as a binder
Alchemy: Using dirty equipment is not advised
Alchemy: When brewing a potion, make sure that the ingredients are safe for consumption
Alchemy: Naf-rush as an accelerant
Alchemy: Brewing a potion that makes you feel warm inside
Medicine: Snail slime is not safe to eat!

Loot: a potion that makes you feel warm inside
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5-10. Tristan brews a pretty useful potion and decides to sell some of it.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Abra]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tracking a Necromancer
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Staying in a prison cell despite knowing you could escape
Meditation: Keeping focus while horseback riding
Meditation: Silence makes it easier to concentrate
Attunement: Finding a frequency with a note as a clue
Attunement: Note: Rotting Flesh
Attunement: Note: Undead


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: clearing undead traps might count
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: Attunement