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Remembering Krenn Maii

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Krenn Maii. As a Lotharen fighting style, it was brutal, effective and reliant on considerable strength, endurance and form. Also as a Lotharen fighting style... it was exceptionally rare outside of Gauthrel, with Kian one of the few practitioners of said style in the outside world. He'd remembered it well - the form, the techniques, the terms. His Haltunga had become second nature, and often he kept his fluency on par by speaking in the language of martial arts. The only issue was... his actual, practical skill in unarmed fighting techniques was worse than awful. It was wholly negligible.

Kian was one of the greatest warriors around - he knew that. But he couldn't win a fist fight on skill, no. He relied on his strength, agility, reflexes, endurance. Punching them out with a single, brutal hit utilizing pure strength... rather than any relative capability. With Krenn Maii in krenn... maiind, though, he could deal with that incompetency. The only question was: why? Why would he learn yet another combat style, with another wholly new weapon - this time the body?

Kian was the premiere Shadowdancer. He had mastered Shadowspin, Duskfall, Insomnus, Shadowfall, Spinning Parry, Dancing Snakebite, Snakebite, Rapid Swing, Shadow Sweep, Scorpion Strike... he'd developed the summation of his martial ability around that one particular style. There was no reason to diverge from it -- it was effective. He'd yet to meet a warrior who could penetrate the slippery, snake-like agility of the style, and even the bulldozer's he'd met in Gauthrel had merely had their momentum used against them.

On a warrior's level, undertaking a new style made no sense. It was a waste of time and energy, particularly considering he'd need to then refresh on the fundamentals of Shadowdancing, to ensure he didn't splice the two styles messily together.

So, again, why?

"Ellasin," Damien explained to him. The cicadas strung about along the trees, the sun had still risen. The Lich stood before him, having fled to Cappola with his apprentice some time ago. The Coven had exiled them both - they both held the same fiery ambition as before. Kill Ellasin. Destroy the Coven. Save the world.

"You can't rely on any one thing with her. She'll counter your Rupturing, your Necromancy, your... Shadowsong. You need to learn to run near as fast as you can blink - and you need to learn to break walls in with your fists," he explained. "I'm telling you, Kian. People don't realize how powerful that creature is. She doesn't show them. When people challenge her, she utilizes the bare minimum to take them down, but quickly, cleanly, precisely. I'm sure you've looked at her tactics and have felt that you could have easily countered them. But there's so much more than that," he grimaced. "She'll never be beaten as things are now. There is no mage alive that can really challenge her. Not you, me, or Effren," he stated.

"She has an Anaxus," Damien claimed. Kian's brows immediately quirked, though his lips followed into a smirk.

"I have Shadowspin," he whispered, teasingly.

"Shadowspin?" Damien asked.

"It's a polearm... ability. It's a bit... inhuman. I spin my spear so fast that it becomes something else - a blur. Cuts through anything, everything. I've tested it against pure, reinforced Terrendyte. It ripped through like butter," he stated proudly. "Even an Anaxus can be cut with that. In fact, I built it specifically for these... impenetrable defenses. Monsters, mages, all that. It's my trump card," he claimed, proudly.

"But the Anaxus are fast, and deadly. They'll poison you before you realize it. Hers is even worse than the living - it's infused with a powerful well. Better than Emetyte, I reckon. It can just regenerate. The only thing is - when she's controlling the Anaxus, it uses so much ether that she really can't do much else. If you could actually defeat it, you could genuinely find yourself victorious. But it won't be that easy," he explained. "She knows everything about everyone in the Coven. She monitors their growth, and weeds out threat. More than just your outing in Rynmere, I believe she exiled you from the Coven for another reason: you've grown too powerful for her liking. I think you could even defeat Effren as you are now," Damien said, crossing his arms over his chest, with his dead eyes poised towards the ground.

"But she'll develop a counter for you. She'll have Talia forge her some artifacts - something that will stop your spear, break the spin. Anything. If you meet her on the field, she'll come equipped with an array of artifacts that specifically target you and your make-up. That's why you need to surprise her, or better yet, master everything. Commit your life to martial skill, and collect. Gather what artifacts you can," he advised.

"Running, observational awareness, fistfighting, hunting, and even poisoncrafting - these are what you need to focus on now. You need to embody the same Immortal monster she is - a master of everything. We'll start with your fists - with Krenn Maii."
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"I can't really teach you the style, as I don't know it," Damien explained. "But, tell me the fundamentals. I'll do my best to catch on," he stated, taking a few steps back from Kian, and tugging his pen from the rope around his neck, preparing to scrawl some notes.

"Err - alright. I'll go by what the books told me: Always look for the most effective way to dispose of a threat; determine within an instant how you will strike them, where to hit them, which part of your body to use. It's a messy style - you don't just use your fists, or your feet. You use elbows, knees, shoulders, you tackle or collide. Krenn Maii is about... effectiveness, not really style. It's not a theatrical set of skills to have. And that's why it's perfect for fallback - if I lose my spear, or she causes the handle to burn hot, or whatever possibility lays out there," he stated. Damien wrote as quickly as he could, corresponding with his words.

"So, the first fundamental: Krenn Maii is about impact, not style. Got it," he nodded.

"Yeah," Kian nodded back. "That's right."

. . .

"Okay, so... second fundamental. Make every attack count. By that, it means... if you can subdue an enemy in a single punch, or even a slap on the forehead, do it. Combat is not a game. It's life and death. Take any opportunity to kill them, or incapacitate them. Krenn Maii is all about finding the most obscure opportunity to defeat a foe, after all," he stated. Shadowdancing was similar - Lotharen fighting styles, in general, were very brutal and reliant on exceptional reaction.

"Do you recall the story about the great Lotharen warrior who killed a prince by shoving his pinky into his ear?" Damien questioned. "They told that story all the time in Yaralon - especially the Lotharro," the Lich grinned.

"Yeah. I remember. They told the same story in Uthaldria," he laughed. That man was a practitioner of Krenn Maii. So, with that in mind... Kian would have to remember even the most ridiculous opportunities. Even the pinky was a weapon.

"So, the second fundamental," Damien began. "Use every opportunity - make every attack count."

"Yep," Kian replied. "Don't worry, I'm a master at unconventional takedowns. Lest we forget the fate of Frumpybutt," he recalled, fondly.
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"Third fundamental?" Damien chimed in, voice stern. Somehow, Kian was still childlike much of the time, easily distracted around others. Damien's role was really just to keep him focused. It wasn't like he knew anything about Krenn Maii, or Uthaldria, or their fighting styles. He'd never had the luxury of going so far from the seat of civilization.

"Be willing to use every part of your body. It's referring to your elbows and knees, but anything else is applicable too. Forehead, calves... toes. Pelvis. Aaaaanything," he waggled his eyebrows, not stopping.

"Aaaaaanythingggg," Damien repeated, waggling his brows back. For a moment, they engaged in nothing but a competitive waggle-fest.

"Yup. So, third fundamental: use it all. All that you've got. Use everything, become the dragon. Become a shooting star falling from the sk--"

"Kian, stop mocking your own style. If you can't take it seriously, you won't be able to learn it," he said, brows narrowing to his eyes. The younger mage simply sighed, nodding all the same.

"You're right. Fourth fundamental," he began, moving forward, "This is not a martial arts style, nor a theatrical style. This is a style dedicated to dispatching your enemies with the least amount of time and the lowest risk," he stated. That fundamental was sort of a summary of the others, and it was meant to emphasize the technique. They both understood that, so they explored this fundamental no further.

"Fifth fundamental. Be hyper aware of your surroundings; unseen enemies are the greatest risk," he spoke. That... was true. He learned that firsthand in the court of Venora. Ebony... was an unseen enemy. And she destroyed him, flawlessly, without the opportunity for a proper response. This fundamental was perhaps among the most important, because he'd fallen prey to blindness before. He needed to be more aware of those around him, in more than just the physical sense.

"Ellasin may seem like a 'seen' enemy, but she is not. Much of what she is, is still unknown. So many of her powers, her artifacts, her minions - they're not seen by others. You may be about to fell her Anaxus, and then moments later, a poisoned blade digs into your back from seemingly nowhere. You can't know for sure. She is but a step down from an Immortal," he stated, further praising her and warning against her. It was a warning that could not be heeded enough.

"We can't fight her near Ne'haer," Kian stated. "She has to be far away from there. If she's far from her power structure, she might not even be able to call the Anaxus. We're going to have to lure her out," he frowned.

"Indeed," Damien nodded. "Anyhow, let's move onto the sixth fundamental," he advised.

"Make the enemy fight on your terms - disarm them if you can," he nodded. "Essentially, that's exactly what I just said. Let's make her fight on our terms, Damien. Disarm her of her dragon. Pull her to the East, or somewhere... just, far away," he nodded.

"Right. The only question is how," he said, somewhat defeated.

"She can find me whenever she wants. We... can raze one of her strongholds to the ground. That will bring her to us. If that won't, nothing will. But only once we're ready."
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  • Skill:
    • Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The First Fundamental - Dispatch Efficiently
    • Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Second Fundamental - Make Every Hit Count
    • Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Third Fundamental - Use Every Part of Your Body
    • Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fourth Fundamental - Krenn Maii is Meant to Kill
    • Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fifth Fundamental - Be Hyper Aware
    • Tactics: Master everything, be countered by nothing
  • Non-Skill:
    • N/A

Comments

Okay, so this is clearly intended to be part of a much larger story. Although I haven't read what precedes it, I could certainly tell that Kian is going up against an enemy that he isn't a match for and worse he doesn't fully believe that. There was a really clear sense of his cockiness in this, especially as he does a bit of bragging and brushing things off. From a more critical perspective, this was difficult to follow at times, especially with all of the political (for want of a better word) stuff to do with the Coven. What was more, if this is an unusual style then... is Kian likely to have learned about it in books? Is he likely to have that knowledge to pass on to Damien so that he can interpret it for him? I understand what the purpose of this thread was but there's a sense that you cut some corners to get everything into the one thread. Even if he did learn things from books, it's only fair that he'd possess that knowledge already to be able to repeat it here, unless of course, he'd read it during the thread but there's no evidence of that. Please be mindful of such things in the future.

I thought there was some pretty solid characterisation here and it certainly gave insight into Kian's character. A good read!
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