Desertside Negotiations (Graded)

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Desertside Negotiations (Graded)

4th Trial of Saun, Arc 718
Coastal landing outside Nashaki
Liam wiped his brow with the back of his left hand, the red knotwork birthmark, which he told all was a tattoo, gleamed slick with sweat. They all trudged limply through the small port settlement which was little more than a set of docks and temporary warehouses for goods to make their way to Nashaki markets. Qi’ora littered the landscape and Liam scowled. He was never in a good mood when far from the ship, and it was now hidden from view behind the clustered hulls of larger merchant ships from all over bringing goods to the desert city or else taking them away.

Captain Nat seemed unperturbed by the distance from her ship, she had left most of the crew behind under First Mate Gaunt Gharne. Natalie Forense was a hell of a captain and one fierce pirate to boot. It was one of the reasons Liam had stuck around so long with her. Now she lead her men, Low, Vokbjorn, and Rodhar, along the sandy mainway that served as a road through the little port. Vokbjorn sweated profusely and the gleam just served to accentuate his defined muscles. Rodhar was pink from sunburn, being a naturally more fair skinned man, and the inked snake stood out on his bare torso. The pair were probably the nastiest and meanest combatants on the crew. Vokbjorn because he was a Lotharro and knew the axe he hefted over a shoulder as well as any man could. Rodhar because he was a trick-riddled Rhakrosi with venom for blood.

And then Liam Low brought up the rear, kicking the bright sand back with his seaman’s boots as he followed. He bore twin cutlasses and wore leather over his linen shirt, though only the torso piece in that immortals forsaken Saun heat. Liam looked to be the youngest of the lot, and most attractive. His face was only slightly tanned and lined with a sailor’s squint, but otherwise unblemished. Nat brought him for her own reasons. When he asked she just shrugged and said his peculiarity might come in useful.

He had been with her for nearly five arcs and hadn’t seemed to age at all. When he had joined his tattoos had already been faded with decades of age, though people pretended not to notice or else didn’t. Nat probably did though. Liam watched his captain as they walked. She was beautiful, at an age where grey might threaten to touch her temples. She was kept lean by the sea life. Natalie Forense knew how to use all the tools in her kit, including her deceptively nymph-like features. Men were often suckered into thinking her naive or harmless at face value, and Captain Forense would take full advantage.

They walked to meet her contact. The Qi’ora was a bottle merchant who dealt in copious other black market trades as well. Nat told them she had met the man arcs ago, before she captained the Westward. The Qi’ora was a dark man, the racial cracks in his skin showing even from the distance they stood as he came out to wave jovially at them. Nat waved back. Vokbjorn, Rodhar, and Liam just kept walking.

“Natalie, how are you!” The Qi’ora said with thickly accented common. The man wore silks and colored glass beads around his neck in extravagant amounts. Without waiting for an answer to his question the big man began speaking again, telling them of his troubles. “This damnable heat is keeping the liquor and ale flowing I’ll tell you! I’ve had to double productions and have spent the whole summer riding between Nashaki and Yaralon. I’ll be glad to see you my dear.” The booming voice rumbled as he led them under his wide marquee. Soft cushions and rugs littered the ground and two slaves in shackles and trousers stood nearby, guarding over a table of food stuffs.

“It is good to see you too, Vaka Vosham Rhir.” Natalie said, grinning and dropping down next to him on one of the cushions. She used the merchant’s formal Qi’ora name as a sign of respect. Liam could feel the edge, though she did not betray it. They had fifteen crates of Ivorian weapons nestled in the bilge deck of Westward. If Vaka didn’t purchase them they would have to get creative in how they fed and paid the crew, particularly because you could not eat swords, or did not want to. “I am glad business is good for you, it has been good for us as well.” Natalie continued as Rodhar and Vokbjorn settled down across from her and Liam leaned against the wooden post that supported the center of the marquee.
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“Indeed? It lightens my heart to hear of it! No doubt you plan to lighten my purse as well!” Vaka said with a deep chuckle and slapped his hand on his leg. “Please, let us eat and drink before talking of Natalie had brought with her. The word ‘friends’ was heavy with hidden meaning. Vaka was not stupid, he knew she brought her killers with her.

Natalie smiled, showing a gold tooth and winked. “This is Vokbjorn the Hairy, he’s a Lotharo. Was he not on the crew last time we met?” She gestured. When Vaka shrugged and laughed again she did as well. “And this is Vernik Rodhar, a Rhakrosi apothecary-” She continued “And this is Liam Low, a man of the sea as much as anyplace.”

Vaka looked around at them with raised eyebrows. “You bring a Rhakrosi poisoner, a Lotharo warrior, and this one even has two blades!” Vaka gestured at Liam with mock horror. “What am I to think of this Nat? Are we not friends?” They could all tell he was not really worried, only playacting. “How are you to hold my ale if you have both hands full of sword, Mister Low? For we won’t be needing more than ale for this interaction I assure you.”

Liam grinned at that. “I like that.” Vokbjorn said, glancing at the barrel of ale next to the table of food. Vaka gestured for the slaves to bring food and ale.

“Well Vaka, we’re living in dangerous times, I need to be safe.” Nat said, flinging a morsel into her mouth. “That’s why I’ve brought you this Ivorian steel, hard fought and won by my crew.”

“Bah! Stolen in the dead of night I’d judge!” Vaka barked.

“Hard fought, Mister Rhir.” Liam said in a smooth voice, pulling up his sleeve and showing a jagged wound at his elbow. In truth, the wound had been from a stray shackle loosened by a storm just two nights prior, but Vaka didn’t need to know. They had stolen the goods from a dockside warehouse in Ivorian after a considerable distraction had been prepared and executed. But the more risk the higher the price Nat could fetch. The wound looked nasty enough, but it really did not impede him at all. “Why do you think I carry two cutlasses, ha.” Liam grinned at Vaka’s raised eyebrows.

Nat winked at Liam over Vaka’s shoulder and continued on. “Hard won indeed. We knew our best chance for profit was with you, for you can supply these same supplies to the Eternal Empire or else the mercenaries north of you, or else sell it to your own slavers. Immortals know your people need more weaponry.”

Vaka frowned and gestured at the sea. “It’s nearly sixty trials from here to Yaralon by desert! You could make it to them in one tenth of that time!” He blustered, his face growing suspicious. He pinched a few of the candied nuts he had on a dish and popped them into his mouth.

Liam leaned forward and grabbed a fistful of the caramel covered nuts and then lounged back. “Yaralon is eight trials north by coast, but we cannot chance taking the goods there ourselves, for the Ivorians may be hunting us and that would be the first stop.” Liam explained, his eyes capturing Vaka’s own, his youthful face in a sardonic grin. “That’s why we came here, to you, Vaka. We want to sell you the weapons cheap like and you can in turn sell them full value, perhaps you had them from a merchant you know based out of the Ivorian Empire? We, in turn, sail south with our cut and perhaps some goods you’d like to rid yourself of?” Liam finished, his tone light but no less significant.
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Vaka arched an eyebrow and looked at him. The dark man rubbed his chin and said nothing for a moment. Then he turned to Nat and spoke in another language. Captain Forense flicked her fingers deftly below Vaka’s vision and next to her leg so the others could see. At the same time she nodded and made a reply in what sounded like the same language.

He asks if you speak for me. I said yes, it’s a good plan.

A good enough lie if need be, Liam thought. He continued to watch their supposed private exchange. Both Nat and Vaka spoke in the other language in brief exchanges that had the air of business.

He’s going to buy the weapons for half market value, and sell us some dirty drugs.

Liam frowned. Drugs were good money in the end, but to sell them they would indeed have to go north to Yaralon, or south all the way to Athart, or west to Rhakrosi or Etzos, a long voyage. He personally enjoyed the southern seas with the tropical beaches and exotic people. North reminded him too much of Scalvoris, where he had been press-ganged. North would bring them dangerously far away from the influence of the Blackbrine as well. They’d have to contend with the fleets of Ne’Haer and Rynmere.

Vaka said something in an exuberant tone with a clap. He raised his glass and and Natalie tapped hers against it. He says cheers. She flicked her fingers in Salt Sign. Liam grinned and raised a glass as well. He repeated the words Vaka had said, having a love of language as he did. The man looked surprised at him and said something else with a query in his tone. Liam simply shrugged one shoulder and winked.

He thinks you speak Umaya. Natalie signaled with a grin.

With much joviality they feasted on the foods and ale provided by Vaka’s slaves before going to inspect their new cargo. Vaka had the drugs, most in the form of herbs or the products of such, in barrels. When Natalie opened one Liam peered in over her shoulder. Tiny glass vials of liquid were arranged in racks amongst liberal hay. In others leather sacks of sappy tar-like substances were packed into the barrels. In still more there was tobacco.

Vaka also provided a wagon and yet more slaves to drive it back to the docks were the Westward awaited them. Liam did his part to haul the cargo out of the wagon and then scramble up the rope ladder to help haul their stolen cargo into the net in the deck below. It was a physically demanding process, hauling barrels of Ivorian steel. It took them three net loads to move it, though the net was more than big enough to do it in two. They simply didn’t want to risk the crew dropping the load when they heaved the net up.

Liam strained against the rope with the others, all of them in tight lines and Gharne calling time. “Heave, heave, heave!” In the end the wagon was loaded and Vaka covertly inspected his new wares. His eyes shone with excitement, Liam could see while he rolled a barrel of tobacco into the net. When the illegally attained drugs were loaded into the cargo hold and the net stowed Liam leapt down onto the dock beside Gharne and Maclin and Captain Forense. The Westward as if in anticipation of the voyage she knew was coming.

Vaka embraced Natalie, and hidden from view of the port by the wagon he pulled out a leather bag and a small wooden box from a secret side compartment of his wagon. His slaves leaned casually against the wagon’s sides, glancing back towards the shabby hut that served as harbor master’s office. No one looked too closely when it came to these backwater docks.

“This is our agreed upon sum in full, with a discount for me for the… herbs you now carry.” Vaka said with a small wink. “Please return to me soon, my dear. I do love our reunions.” He patted her cheek in a way that Captain Forense would only endure from a paying customer, and an old and well connected one at that.

“If our future meetings are as fortuitous as our reunions have been, you can certainly count on it.” Captain Forense replied, tucking the bag under her arm and handing the strongbox back to Vokbjorn who hefted it into another more conspicuous sack before throwing it over his massive shoulder. “If you have anything else for me, send word to Blackbrine by usual method. I’ll get there eventually and we’re always ready to do business with a good friend.”

And with that they were clambering up the ladder onto the main deck. Liam already felt better with the sea underneath him. He breathed deeply as his shoulders relaxed and the tension of being on land left him. He looked up at the main sail, which had been unfurled and raised by Gharne and the crew in preparation for departure. The wind rustled through the cloth, sending the halyards swaying. It was like the sea and the ship beckoned gather onward. Liam grinned at no one as he set about readying the ship to leave port.
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    1. Negotiation: Pointing out benefits of a deal
    2. Negotiation: Putting on a friendly face
    3. Negotiation: Finding a solution
    4. Leadership: Taking the lead on a meeting
    5. Navigation: Assessing Trade Routes
    6. Navigation: Comparing distances door sea and land travel
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