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Flawed Blueprint

Ashan 61, Arc 719
The peace you have sought in acquiring Agaperos was a lie. There will never be peace.

But there was peace -- for now. Relatively speaking. And it was the job of others to maintain that peace, as Alistair united them all. In the last few trials, he had awoken Kleine from his slumber. It did not come easily, but natural to his Revelation was the ability to Renew others; to restore balance to their body and pull them back even from a state of near death as the Becomer had been subjected to. The rehabilitation process, however, was longer than he might have thought. Even his powers that others labeled as 'divine' and as a 'miracle' had limitations.

But he had access to them nonetheless. Alistair could describe it only in the way he understood; Renewal was reaching into the light, ambient and everywhere he looked, and washing over the individual with its eminence in a way that shined brightness on the darkness plaguing their form. It was not, perhaps, a return to balance in that sense... but darkness was a corruption rather than an inherent aspect of any one form.

With this new ability beneath his ever-expanding arcane purview, the mage had removed himself of all imperfections. Never before had he been in such good health. All things detrimental to his form had been washed away; even the faintest aspect of 'corruption' which he moved from the Creep to apply to all things detrimental. And within these changes, as Alistair stepped forward unto the oblivion of what he perceived to be his flaws, his sparks reshaped and reformed. The Insider, Chevalier, Purifier and Predator; he felt now that he understood them all wholly, and rather than a deranged network of parasitic compulsions he felt that they thrived in a sort of accord.

Alistair had closed shut the Beacon he'd left in Woodstock Hall, returning to his interior the small sliver of his soul that he had offered to it. So many things had changed, now, about the way he felt and utilized magic. He had become eminently more powerful as a result of this Revelation -- he could draw and activate Runes with only his mind, and they were second nature to him. They were immensely powerful, particularly to those he viewed as worthy of his blessing, himself included. Alistair stood, now, with an array of Runes across his body that he felt he could create and replicate unto many others at such minuscule cost. His cheeks were each adorned with chained Runes, one of Focus and one of Touch.

His arms had the chained runes of Speed and Strength, and his legs were the same. At his torso was a chained Rune of Endurance and Strength, powering his core and therefore the remainder of his muscles across his form.

And Alistair was like a God. He moved in a blur and when he ran, it was so quick that a blur could not even describe it. It was as if he were blinking, constantly, but capable of veering into turns and manipulating the trajectory of his movements. His feet that he had acquired mastery over, now adorning sharp claws, dug easily into the ground to control his traction.

Alistair climbed down the mountain from which he'd acquired Arsinalia within trills. And while his body manifested an overt claim to Godhood, the golden spear he wielded would offer to the Helians the ultimate sense of deification.

And so, no longer comfortable with waiting, Alistair returned to the lands where civilization reigned... with bare, clawed feet, clawed gauntlets of Malorite but colored a sandy beige and white-gold, and a translucent faint gold breastplate shimmering above his bare chest. Beneath it was the skirt of a tunic with a belt that wielded his many significant belongings, with Arsinalia equipped within the firm grip of his truly armored hands.

Reaching deeply into the spark of the Chevalier, Alistair knelt unto the ground and settled the butt of his spear against the soil. He placed his armored claws against the outer expanses of Miletos' flood plains and rubbed his palm into the sandy, moist surface. He understood, now, the Quality of Light like nothing else. It was innate to his being and he felt it everywhere he walked. He could no longer be shrouded, and even the moonlight around him seemed to radiate with a golden intensity.

The soil itself now did, much of the flood plains around his immediate vicinity glowing and shimmering golden-hued light through the air above the soil. A platform of Holy-like eminence was crafted around the mage, who stood at its core as he Galvanized the Quality into the soil.

Alistair stood before the walls of Miletos, as people slowly began to gather upon the walls and even through the great doors of the gates, and he issued one demand to the people he had already acquired:

"Bring me my kindred soul -- I am Arsinos, and I command it."
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Seven trials.

Zarik remained in Miletos for most of those trials. He’d done what had been asked of him, and what he had promised Alistair. It had kept him busy, preoccupied from what might’ve otherwise become worry. The biqaj wielded bureaucracy like prayer. The administration of Tyros served as his faith in the absence of his lord-husband. He consulted with the Argonis and he planted roots in the territories, spreading his reach beyond the chosen representatives. He required no-name gossips and eavesdroppers, the sort of people who didn’t have recognizable faces or reputations to maintain. As in any city, he found them eventually and through them, he began the gradual dissemination of tailored rumors to speak of Alistair’s Revelation in terms of the populace’s deities. It was a fascinating origin story, built upon by the various tongues that spoke it, and flowering within trials due to the disappearance of Alistair that coincided with the fantastical gossip about heroic destiny.

Within the villa, there were changes as well. Devin had returned unlike himself, with a new name and an ease in conversation. Zarik didn’t know what to make of it. Kleine had recently awoken as well, so the biqaj knew that his husband had survived Revelation and was… visiting, just not visiting him. He didn’t know why. Zarik could only wait and manage their affairs in the meantime. In the dark hours, he climbed to the peak of the rooftops and watched the stars. He might’ve felt lonely, if he hadn’t felt Devin’s Jericho’s watchful gaze nearby.

By the morning of Ashan’s 61st trial, however, the young mage had found a suitable routine for the management of Tyros and Koros in unison. It was far from perfect, but in time, he planned to refine it. He woke before dawn, then swam in the courtyard pool for several bits. While he dried off, he ate a single bowl of fruit for a morning meal. His spark’s cravings had subsided greatly since his last night spent with Alistair, and thus, he’d found a certain balance with his dietary habits: no longer binging, no longer retching, no longer fasting for trials at a time. He ate light, but often when compared to his previous habits while in Quacia.

Once finished with the fruit, he’d check on the sons, then dress for the day while he listened to a briefing from Kyriakos: the Argonis player who’d been placed as the Mayor of Miletos. Zarik had come to appreciate Ky’s willingness to meet so early and discuss matters from the trial before. He found a depth of understanding and connections to the populace through the older man. Any matters requiring immediate action, Zarik did his best to decide how Alistair would want to handle it… but also, how he believed it should be handled. For all others, he tried to slow momentum and postpone them until Alistair’s return.

After their meeting, Zarik attended to written correspondence. Letters, pending agreements, and otherwise, he would go through his left-over work from the trial before and then the new work of the trial to come. While he sat at the stone desk in his sparse office, his contacts would visit at their designated times. Eventually, he would change these times to avoid dangerous levels of predictability, but for the moment, it worked. One after the other would sit in the chair opposite his desk, inform him of any relevant news and listen to any instructions, while Zarik spent most of his attention on the various manuscripts. He’d then send off those messages required for Koros. There were other plans he had in mind, to aid communications and quicken the process, but he needed to return to Quacia to do so.

By midday, Zarik’s routine turned flexible. For he wanted to be available for unforeseen circumstances or problems, though sometimes he wasn’t required at all – thus he would spend his time on study of magic, politics, and law instead, often while also spending time with the boys. Zarik sat in the courtyard with a book, while he watched Bjorn play with Asher. The boys had gotten closer since moving to the island. Asher had started to form words in mockery and Bjorn found this amusing. He caught the Lothar boy trying to teach less than appropriate words to the infant child, but the biqaj was simply pleased that Asher picked up the language regardless. He felt proud of his son, and more than once, Zarik found himself crying from a bittersweet happiness while he watched their sons. It was only a matter of time before he adopted Bjorn as well, in official acknowledgment that he was also parent to the Lothar boy.

When he heard the fast approach of someone running, Zarik dried his eyes. By the time he was on his feet, he saw Kyriakos of all people. It was uncommon, as it was well past morning, and he worried something terrible might’ve happened in Miletos.

“Lord Venora,” said Ky with a hurried nod that blurred into a casual bow out of simple formality. “You are required immediately at the gates. His Majesty requests your presence.”

“Alistair?” asked Zarik without thought. He smiled. He picked up Asher, then helped Bjorn to his feet.

“He has called himself Arsinos,” informed the elegant mayor. “And it seems to be true. Many go to witness it, already there.”

“There is a crowd at the gates?” queried Zarik as he led into the villa’s interior.

“Yes, a growing one.”

“I see, then… Jericho,” he looked over to the man who’d been spending time outside with them. “Would you watch over the boys, please?”

“Perhaps another could do so. I shall accompany you to the gates,” replied the Revenant.

“There is no one else I trust more than you to watch my sons,” anted Zarik. “But if you insist, I suppo-“

“I will,” said Jericho in a change of his mind. “If you take another with you.”

Zarik nodded. He handed Asher over to the Revenant with a couple kisses to the boy’s cheeks. The biqaj knelt beside Bjorn and ruffled the lad’s hair, then said, “Watch after your little brother while I’m gone, okay?”

He smiled at the pout that showed on the toddler’s features. It was a vast improvement from having something thrown at him or getting smacked in the face. Their afternoons spent together seemed to have helped the Lothar boy’s relation toward him.

With that taken care of, he turned to Ky and said, “Lead along the quickest route.”


Zarik arrived at the gates, with Ky lingering behind him. He hadn’t walked, determined to reach his husband before anything might’ve changed and the Revealed mage could have left again. Instead, he rode on a pale horse outfitted with a midnight-blue suede saddle. The mount made it easy to part the people who’d clustered around the open doors of the gate. They moved quickly out of his way. He heard murmurs. Many dramatically pointed toward the neighboring flood plains that shimmered with Light.

He hadn’t bothered to change, but he had already been dressed for unforeseen circumstances – including his husband’s return. Zarik, also, though he looked much like himself… had no Mark of Faith upon his forehead. Smooth skin, he appeared near-perfect in almost every way. He wore a full tunic with a short-hem skirt that ended where his crystalline legs began. The expensive fabric of his tunic reflected the light in silver gleam. Polished chain-links created a tight collar around his neck that held the top of the tunic over his flat chest for modesty sake. His lithe arms had bracelets of silver-lined iron along his forearms, including his kindred bracelet, in addition to decorative bands around his biceps. Black cords had been looped around his waist to create a tailored silhouette to his tall, yet soft form. They matched the black sandals he wore, with thin cords looped up to his thighs. Many rings adorned his fingers, but most of all the signet ring that symbolized his union with the mage who stood within the galvanized brightness.

Zarik saw Alistair. His eyes immediately lost their irises in a burst of almost-reflected light. His witchmark broke the bounds, iridescence consuming the orbs and glowing around his dark lashes. He snapped the reins of the horse, rode from the crowd, and closer to his husband. A few paces away, he rounded the mount, then enthusiastically leaped down from the saddle.

Though the differences of his husband’s mutations were strikingly obvious to him, he didn’t even glance. He swiftly approached, then held himself still though he wanted nothing more than to wrap himself around in a hug. But he paused, if only because he remained aware of all those watching them, and that Alistair wasn’t a man anymore… not a mortal… he was a Paragon. And for all the time they’d been apart, Zarik had never transformed out of the totem Alistair had last seen him in.

“Soul,” he said quietly. It was all he could say, in the moment. He felt overwhelmingly drawn to move closer until his hand touched against the breastplate. Zarik looked up at the taller being and desired to kiss, but allowed the other mage to lead.
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And there he was. Before the doors of Miletos, surrounded by a wall of onlookers, many of whom moved to their knees in prayer to beseech the God they believed to be standing directly before them. Alistair's expression remained stoic, maintaining the ever-present look of a divine who viewed upon his subjects with a distant sort of condescension. Over time, he grew impatient, though he utilized such impatience to reveal his newfound powers to his subjects. Alistair called upon the most enfeebled and ill of the crowd to step forward, as well as the deaf and blind, suggesting the families of the former bring them to his feet. He offered his blessing to only five, and promised further blessings at a later time, knowing that he would risk overstepping if he went too far.

The five individuals -- largely middle-aged -- stepped forward one at a time, and upon each of them Alistair cast Renewal individually. Their vision was restored, their hearing, the corrosion of their body that had come with ailments that now appeared to be cleansed from their form. Each time he cast his Revealed ability, Alistair called it a 'blessing'; like from a God. And stuck on their knees and in tears, those before him professed their gratitude for the man they called 'Arsinos' at his feet.

Finally, Zarik appeared and Alistair gestured for the men and women to return to their families. The biqaj, still in his blended form, approached the magister with an enthusiastic warmth to his movements as he stepped across the sandy field and to his husband who now proclaimed himself a God. Alistair smiled faintly in greeting, though his vision remained forward upon the crowd even as Zarik touched his breastplate and sought to kiss him upon the lips. Alistair looked only once to his beloved, and thereafter came a declaration of the most wanted and unwanted sort -- one of grim tiding for some, though for others it was of a prophetic importance.

"I have come as a prelude to war; for I intend to take Agaperos at once, with all due haste for the righteousness of my cause. I will ask that the Argonis kneel to me as their Lord and their God. If they refuse, then no laws or traditions will spare them my fury. I will condemn the Kyanos for their blasphemy and name new Argonis in their place."

The mage wrapped his arm around the lithe form of his beloved, taking him within the weight of his masculine form.

"Afterwards, I intend to name Agaperos as the capital of Hélice. It is from there I shall father the institutions of this realm and bring these Isles forward to their destiny - to the acquisition of the Broken Land, to the elimination of the Corruption. No longer will I stand idly in humility; I will sweep through the Isles and conquer every realm with utmost haste. Perhaps you fear what this may mean; a war between the Isles, the cities and their people. Worry not. I will deploy no forces; when I cast Antoras from the height of Delias it will be with my power alone, and when I wear the crown of Tyros after this trial it will be much the same."

It was no great speech - no allying cry for the masses. Instead, it was a disclaimer for what was inevitably to come, or so he believed. A war impossible to win without a truly elite army to challenge him, and such a thing did not exist in these lands.

Finally, Alistair's eyes met Zarik's, and he smiled faintly.

"Come with me," he whispered. "I will inform you of all that has occurred - and then, we shall take Agaperos and rule Hélice."

Alistair then turned on his feet and strode towards the treeline, where he would brief his lover on the situation further south and the two could formulate the plan for their aggression.
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There was a light that came from inside of Alistair, that Zarik could observe. He saw the runes drift along the broad and muscular form that he loved. His husband’s eyes had become white-golden entirely with the subtle movement of the rupturing portals that he once knew to be blue now had a churning abyss at the core of crystalline amber. Still magical, in a different way. He saw a silver mark on the man’s shoulder, as well, that stood out brightly against the warmer hues.

Zarik held himself back, not forcing a kiss or otherwise. Content to simply touch, to run his fingers along the breastplate, then the moving runes along the sun-kissed skin underneath. He tried to not get too lost, to forget that there were a great many people watching them, and while he listened to Alistair speak to those people, he nodded. He glanced over his shoulder, then felt Alistair draw him close against the Paragon’s statuesque body.

He turned his gaze to survey the audience along the walls and those at the gates. Many of them were on their knees in quiet supplication. Alistair’s words might’ve startled most people, but Zarik didn’t feel such emotion. He only felt the slightness of his own body next to the other man, and the underlying vast differences between their power echoed against his sparks while they observed the Revealed mage who also was their spouse, their mentor, and so much more.

The biqaj glanced when he heard of the Broken Land and the elimination of the Corruption – the Creep. A small smile flickered on his lips. While he had little desire to see rampant bloodshed, he felt the resonating ambition of his companion. After so many trials apart, he only wanted to reflect such grand aspirations.

Zarik returned the faint smile when Alistair finally looked directly at him. A gentle expression showed on his youthful features. He nodded and merely whispered in turn, “Yes. Whatever you desire.”

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Wow, sorry to scare you guys with this intervention. I thought this came after another plot that has an intervention on it. Critical stupid on my part. So blind, Very apology.

Anyway, for an abandoned thread, this is a mighty fine read. Alistair is so arrogant in his power, I have to wonder if he'll ever get knocked down a peg or come to question his execution and presumptions of his power.

I love how you write Zarik, he's such a passionate and deep character, it's always a pleasure to read about his involvement in these deep intrigues. I can't wait to see where you take him from here.

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Alistair
Knowledge:
Hone: Renewal
Hone: Renewal can be very costly
Transmutation: Galvanize
Transmutation: Quality: Light
Transmutation: Quality: Sunlight

Zarik
Knowledge:
Intimidation: The Glory of a Paragon
Logistics: Traveling through a city quickly.
Intelligence: Using a contact as guide through a city layout.
Intelligence – Contact: Kyriakos, Mayor of Miletos on Tyros Island.
Caregiving: Requesting an older child to watch after a younger child.
Politics: Complementing a spouse in a public display.
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Devin: Is now Jericho
Devin: Has become sentient.
Alistair: Revealed in Lucis Hone and is now The Paragon.

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Renown

+10; for Alistair making a bold proclaimation before a large crowd of people.
+10 for Zarik for standing beside Ali as he makes it.
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