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Devin's Treasure Hunt, Part 2

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Zi'da 2, Arc 719

“They were out of horses and donkeys”, Talieson explained as he noticed Devin staring at the goat incredulously and shrugged his shoulders. The goat stared back at the Mortalborn before it started to munch on the partially trampled grass in front of the cart.

“The man that sold her to me assured me that a goat is perfectly capable of pulling a small cart”, he continued. “I figured that a goat is better than nothing. Or do you want to pull the cart yourself?” he asked in a somewhat challenging tone of voice.

Devin made a face as he heard the bard’s question and shuddered slightly. Being a follower of Delroth who was the Immortal of Vanity, among other things, he avoided work that was demeaning and that made him look bad or stupid. He looked at Talieson, at his other companions that seemed just as surprised as he was and then back at the goat.

It was a rather ugly animal. It was white with black spots, and it had horns and some sort of ridiculous little beard. It didn’t look particularly intelligent either. While he couldn’t do anything to improve its mental faculties though, there was something he could do about the rest, he realized.

He briefly put his backpack down, rummaged through it and produced a bright red ribbon that he had originally planned on using to tie his hair back if the need arose (it was a bit messy and tended to get in his face sometimes). Having done that, he approached the goat somewhat warily, wondering if it would try to bite him and quickly tied the ribbon around its neck before he moved back.

The goat didn’t even raise its head.

It was slightly less ugly in Devin’s opinion now though.

“The man said that her name is Heidi”, Talieson explained and proceeded to attach the goat that already had a harness on to the cart. As he did so, Heidi complained loudly before she went back to eating the grass that didn’t look particularly appetizing in Devin’s opinion. “She eats pretty much everything, even leftovers, so we don’t have to get some sort of expensive animal feed for her.”

“A horse would have cost us a fortune!”
he claimed which improved Devin’s mood to some extent. How did you get a goat to move though? Did Heidi understand Common? Should he use gestures? Should he use some sort of whip in order to get the point across? He didn’t have a whip!

He looked at his companions, hoping that they would be able to help.
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Finally, Aidan let out a loud, exasperated sigh and exclaimed, “For fek’s sake!”

Devin’s gaze instantly went to him. His eyes widened. He hadn’t thought that the nice, proper, well-educated university student knew any swearwords!

“My grandmother had a farm. She had a couple of working goats. What we need is a leash that we can attach to Heidi’s collar. Does anyone have a leash? Devin? You probably have something in that huge backpack of yours, don’t you?” he asked.

Devin didn’t say anything, but simply produced a rope. Aidan examined it for a moment, furrowing his brow as he did so and tied it to the goat’s collar. “I hope that she’s trained. Give me a bit of food, Devin. Treats might convince her to come with us. Something other than grass, please”, he added, having noticed that Devin had grabbed a few dry, brown tufts and was trying to pull them out of the ground.

Devin reluctantly handed him a box that was filled to the brim with snacks – snacks that he had packed for himself so that he wouldn’t be hungry during their treasure hunt.

Aidan grabbed an especially delicious looking piece and held it in front of Heidi’s mouth. The goat immediately grabbed it and swallowed it, and Aidan patted her side. “You are such a pretty girl”, he gently whispered to the ugly animal and proceeded to stroke her. “Such a good and nice and pretty girl. Would you like to go for a walk with us? You could help us uncover a treasure!”

Devin’s eyes widened even more, and he couldn’t help but be a bit jealous.

Normally, Aidan only talked like that to him!
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Devin's Treasure Hunt, Part 2

Heidi was either the most stupid animal that he had ever met – or the most intelligent one that he had ever met, Devin decided, as he watched Aidan and what had apparently become his new best friend.

Every now and then the goat stopped dead in her tracks, bleated loudly and indignantly and refused to move again until Aidan fed her another snack. By the time that they reached their destination, they’d probably be starving, and Heidi would be the fattest goat in Idalos!

For the first couple of breaks they followed the river, occasionally sitting down near the banks of the river in order to eat or drink something, chat a bit and rest a bit – or take a few steps into the river whose water was very nice and cool.

The beginning of the journey was surprisingly uneventful which made Devin happy and a little worried at the same time as he couldn’t help but wonder when the bad guys would show up.

Or should he be worried about the good guys?

Sometimes, he wasn’t sure which side he belonged on.

Sometimes he stole from good people. Sometimes he also stole from bad people though.

Did that mean that he was neutral?

Since all that philosophy made him feel weird, he decided that he’d just be on his own side because he was far too special to be grouped in with other people anyway, and then he walked on …

… only to abruptly be yanked back.

“Devin, you should watch where you are going!” Talieson warned him and pointed at what was approximately a metre in front of him. They were walking on the cliffs above the river rather than directly next to it now. The water was approximately one and a half metres below them so Devin’s walking off the cliffs would probably not have resulted in him dying, but he shuddered nevertheless.

His fancy new outfit would likely have been ruined!
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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In the evening, they erected their tents in a clearing not far from the river. Mik’hail and Des’trill shared one tent, Aidan and Devin shared another tent, and Talieson had a tent of his own.

Since there was no guessing what kind of creatures came out of the forest when it was getting dark, they had decided to take turns keeping watch. Aidan had offered to take the first watch – and make sure that Heidi kept quiet and didn’t attract any hungry animals.

While Devin still wasn’t sure about Heidi, he quite enjoyed sleeping instead of sitting outside, keeping watch, worrying about wild animals and getting bored. So, he took his shoes off, took his armour off and climbed into his cosy new sleeping bag. Soon, he was asleep and dreaming a most wonderful dream that featured both Edasha and Delroth kissing him.

At least, he was dreaming until he heard someone open the entrance of his tent. It was so dark that he could barely see anything, but he figured that it was probably Aidan who was finally done keeping watch. He sat up, puckered his lips and extended his arms in order to pull his friend (who also shared his bed every now and then) close, having decided that he’d forgive him – for now.

A moment later, he let out a loud scream.

This was definitely not Aidan! Aidan had nice, soft hair, but his visitor didn’t have any hair – and what more, they had weird, long ears! And come to think of it, they also seemed to be kind of short.

He screamed again, for good measure.

The … thing that was definitely not Aidan screamed as well. It was a strange, high-pitched and very unpleasant scream that made the thief want to cover his ears for a moment.

A few trills later, the real Aidan opened the tent entrance, a lantern in his left hand and a sword in his right hand. For a moment, he just stared at the creature that had green skin.

The creature hissed at him.

Aidan showed it his sword while Devin moved as far away from it as possible.

The creature stared at the sword and then it rushed past him and disappeared into the darkness.

“Sorry, I fell asleep for a moment”, Aidan apologized. “What was that though?” he wanted to know.

“A Kudi’Eltu”, Des’trill who had apparently woken up as well now and was standing behind him, rubbing her eyes tiredly, explained. “They live in the jungle and love to steal stuff!”
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Devin's Treasure Hunt, Part 2

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Experience: 10 not magic

Knowledge:

Animal Training x4
Cosmetology x1
Field Craft x1

Renown: +5 for being the first to kiss a Kudi'eltu

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.

Loot/Losses: Stolen a kiss from a goblin

Injuries/Conditions: Wounded pride?

Consequences: The Kudi'Eltu will be curious about Devin from now on, they kinda enjoyed the kiss and may spread the word to other goblins!

Comments: Oh man, I love you for using one of my devved creatures! Kudi'eltu aren't often used since being devved, but they have so much potential. The moment when Devin nearly kissed the Kudi'Eltu was hilarious and genuinely made me laugh. Sorry it took me so long to make this review, been very busy. Great writing and enjoy your rewards!

If you have any concerns about this review, please PM me about them.
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