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The Orm'del Sea

The Orm'del Sea is an ocean that separates Eastern and Western Idalos. It is said to have many horrors awaiting those that wish to travel through its waters.
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Welcome to the Request Thread! Here you may make requests for your finished threads to be reviewed, all other requests should go to Kingdom's Office. The Prophets here are more than happy to help! Posting your review requests here makes it easy for all Prophets and Reviewers to keep track of who asked for what and when so that we can all work together to ensure that your threads are reviewed quickly and fairly.

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[b]Warning:[/b] (any mature themes or extremes that might make the Peer Reviewer uncomfortable, post it here.)
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A N D I T' S A L L J U S T S M A L L S T U F F, B A B Y.
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Thread Name: Hush Now
Character(s) Involved: Ayissi
Quick Summary: It is a memory from Ayissi's childhood when she was nearing 8th arc as the family travelled through the Orm'del Sea to Ivorian. The memory includes her favourite song and lullaby.
Requested Skills: Singing
Requested Knowledge: Anything related to singing
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review!
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Thread Name: A Slave Aboard
Character(s) Involved: Wendell and Freya
Quick Summary: Freya finds Wendell aboard the Arbiter, now as a slave. Her crew begins to plot a coo against her while she tends to Wendell. Unfortunately, she has to mark him as her slave to save him from being sold and from the crew rising against her to sell him for money.
Requested Skills: Any
Requested Knowledge: Any, could I get a Common Language knowledge? Trying to raise it from broken.
Other Notes: None.
Warning: Lots of cursing.
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Thread Name: Night In A Storm
Character(s) Involved: Wendell and Freya
Quick Summary: Freya and Wendell finally talk after 10 days of him being aboard the ship.
Requested Skills: Anything!
Requested Knowledge: Is there any way I can get a Common Language knowledge from this thread? Trying to rank that crap up. :P Thanks!
Other Notes: Hope you like it!
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Thread Name: Well Abroad
Character(s) Involved: Rei
Quick Summary: Welcome to paradise on the water!
Requested Skills: Anything!
Requested Knowledge: Pat could do with some useful lore from this, and Rei of course could do with some psychology!
Other Notes: Enjoy the beauty of the relationship between these two.
Warning: Emotional string pulls in the feels near the end. That is all.
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Thread Name: Rock the Boat
Character(s) Involved: Rei
Quick Summary: Snoopville is full of snooping.
Requested Skills: Anything!
Requested Knowledge: Such strong philosophy!
Warning: Another emotional tugger though not as bad.
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