A Bet to Fight For | Part II

Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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A Bet to Fight For | Part II

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For the first few moments, Valmond merely scoffed. Soon the scoffing turned into pure humourous chuckling. Then his laughter died into a stoic expression, one of stern disposition. He finally came to realise that Isodol was serious. Was her proposition so outlandish? It wasn't like he knew anything about her, good nor bad. Therefore, he couldn't make any assumptions as to her character or her reputation. His laughter seemed like an ignorant accusation to her unworthiness and Isodol didn't like it.

"I'm serious," she deadpanned, losing her smile in all but a singular heartbeat.

Valmond noticed her dejection and straightened his back. "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have laughed," he explained. "I've just never had anyone take up my case before. Are you sure you want to manage such a novice?"

Isodol contemplated for a moment. Regardless what ranking he held in the arms of unarmed combat, he had shown his true colours up on that ring. He surely hadn't seemed like much of a novice then. He might have been an underdog, sure, but she felt like he held much promise, a lot of potential. It would have been a complete waste to look him over. Besides, someone might snatch him up as their own and claim the bounty that came with trusting their gut. Her natural greediness encouraged her to jump on this opportunity while it was still fresh.

"You give yourself too much doubt," she said waving her hand in the air by way of dismissal.

"I apologise."

Isodol's crystalline orbs reached Valmond's brown eyes. They were like mud, murky and undiluted. She tried to see past the darkness, but came up empty. She didn't know what he was truly thinking or feeling.

"It's okay," she said quickly, reaching out her hand so that it laid against his perspiring arm. A spark of emotion hit her all at once as soon as she did. She tasted something sweet, like candy with a heavy concentration of cocoa mixed within. He was most entirely a mess of entwined threads, a web of indecision. She tried to salvage any one sense of emotion, but there were too many to be able to grasp just one. Excitement, confusion, concern, worry, anticipation, all the adjectives infiltrated her mind like buzzing mosquitoes wanting their first taste of human blood. She tried to concentrate, to bring to light the main emotion that was plaguing the man. She tried to assuage his doubt, but she couldn't seem to grasp anything singular. Instead, she reached into the mass of twirling and swirling feelings, each denoted by a string connected to other strings connected somehow to a ball in the center; she grasped at it with her phantasmal hand. She willed her spark to travel back to her, bringing what she held with it. And thus many emotion breached the otherwise intangible surface.

Valmond held a face full of confusion. There were even hints of contradicting emotion sketched into his unblemished face. She, too, felt the contradiction. She felt confusion and excitement coupled with almost indiscernible amounts of anxiety. She also felt the need to do something spontaneous, impulsive.

She took a few seconds to refer back to a nostalgic moment she had had only a short time ago. She recalled the desire to be one of the participants fighting inside the ring. She recalled wanting to enhanced her skill at unarmed combat, perhaps even win a fight against a noble adversary.

Bringing her wants to life, she verbalized her thoughts to Valmond. "Perhaps you could show me some of your tricks from the match."

The awkward air between the two had dissipated. Valmond's mixed emotions had vaporized in the air like the moisture had been continuously evaporating from his skin.

Isodol hoped for a positive affirmation to her wishes. If he didn't act upon her request, then the awkwardness was sure to resume. Instead, her worries were silenced by his acceptance. "Sure," he stated. "That sounds like a good idea."

The crowd was starting to disband as the night crawl along. Only a few matches had occurred after Valmond's, and soon there were only a few stragglers adding an alcoholic beverage under their belt before returning to wherever it was they hailed from. Finally, when Isodol was sure she couldn't take any more waiting, her patience growing as thin as the first glaze of ice to a new winter fall, only a few people remained.

Valmond started to make his way up the steps and under the rope that designated the barrier between observer and competitor. Isodol deftly followed after him, subconsciously wringing her hands in anticipation. She wasn't anxious per se, but with attempting to try anything new, she was unable to accurately predict what would happen; she didn't know what to expect. She hadn't exactly be trained by anyone before, especially not by someone who was experienced in the way of martial arts.

"Show me your defensive position," Valmond practically commanded.

Oh shit, Isodol thought. Here we go.
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Isodol raised her arms in the way she had only known, ensuring her face and lower abdomen were covered from any prospective assault.

"Good," Valmond said with obvious distraction. He was already contemplating his next move. This observation was noted by Isodol. Future orientation was an essential tool in unarmed combat; it was a native wit she was certain instilled success.

Suddenly, Valmond threw at her a curved punch. From her right, his fist catapulted toward her shoulder. She followed the direction of the fist, moving her body towards the right. In doing so, she dissolved the force of the attack such as catching an egg by matching the speed at which it fell. However, instead of allowing it to connect with her shoulder, she ducked. She watched threw her eyelashes as Valmond's fist sailed above her head and back to its original position.

"That's quite an agile move you have there," he praised, noting her avoidance of his attack. "But surly your experience does not grant you the ability to-"

He abruptly shot a kick at her midsection, a movement that was far too fast to dodge, as she had been concentrating at what he had to say in response to her defensive action.

The kick connected with her ribs, and although not as intense as it would have been had they not of been sparring for practice, the assault was enough to send her reeling back into the ropes. Isodol felt her heart hammering in her chest, indeterminately wanting to escape or request silence.

Her choked reply came as barely audible, "good attack."

Valmond shook his head. "To expect the unexpected is not only a saying but important advice to follow."

Isodol nodded her head, understanding the logic he was attempting to throw at her. She was still trying to catch her breath, to steady herself to resume the practice she had volunteered herself for.

"Now attack."

Isodol launched forward, springing from the muscle of her haunches. One of her arms covered the vulnerability of her stomach while the other was extended toward Valmond's face. While her attack was sufficient in strength, Valmond's defense was better. He easily redirected her blow to his side. However, she was not distracted by this turn of events. Knowing that he would defend her first attack, she maintained the defensive barrier she held over her abdomen, therefore blocking the punch that Valmond sequentially threw at her. His fist connected wither her forearm as she passed him in her lunge.

As she settled at his side, she gave no pause before readying herself to send another blow. She raised her leg until it was almost eye level and kicked it out towards Valmond's head.

He blocked it with seemingly expert performance, and readied himself as well with a following attack.

Isodol was very much into the game. Her concentration was entirely focused on the match set in front of her and her ego condemned any sort of failure, therefore forcibly encouraging her to reign supreme. As Valmond sent a hail of punches towards her face, she defended herself against the onslaught with intent focus. He had delivered several attacks before Isodol began to presume there would be no pause. Using this newfound knowledge to her advantage, and observing that his strikes required both of his hands, she rapidly searched for a vulnerability amidst his deftly constructed barricade. Pushing her limits, and therefore mandating only milliseconds of her time, she scouted an accessible spot. With one arm managing his attacks, her other returned a powerful rebuttal to his ribs.

He retracted his diligent assault and stumbled backwards, clutching his abdomen with a gloved fist.

"What, did I hurt you?" Isodol mocked, feeling confident in her learning abilities. She was always one to quickly catch on to how things were done. Unlike some people who required multiple scenarios to ingrain their understanding, she could easily pick up on procedures while even adding her own quirks in the process.

"You got lucky that time," Valmond uttered, still grasping for a breath. He smiled and searched Isodol's eyes. They held nothing but determination. She was a strong woman with all the courage to seek understanding in the topics she held interest in.

"I think you'd make a fine manager," he continued, taking off his gloves. He linked the sticky portion of the straps together so that the two gloves were connected and threw them over his shoulder. As he was exiting the ring, Isodol inquired about her performance.

"I think you did fairly well," came Valmond's reply, enforced by a possibly flirtatious grin.

"No, seriously," Isodol said with utmost sincerity. She had started to descend the stairs out of the ring alongside her companion.

Valmond stopped as soon as he reached the ground floor. He turned to meet Isodol's inquisitive stare. "I think so," he said, only offering Isodol a hint of satisfaction. "I mean, there is still much for you to learn, but you have passion, aggressive, a need to win, and I like that."

Isodol's shoulder relaxed. She smiled at the statement, experiencing some semblance of praise at his words. "I suppose I could manage your fights and you can continue to teach me how to fight while improving your skill as well," she said, holding a hand on her hip.

Valmond chuckled, his interest in Isodol growing every time she spoke. She was quite a unique individual and held much promise in his eyes. "That sounds like a deal I would agree to," he replied, beginning his journey to the exit of the building.

Isodol was sure to see Valmond again very soon. Up on the ring he had an enormous amount of potential, and inside herself had she felt the necessity to help aid him in bringing out that potential. And what more had she done than benefit from her social experience by befriending someone with more experience than she in the arts of unarmed combat? He could be useful to her as she could be to him, and it was this notion that encouraged progress. And it was progress that was keeping her afloat.
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Re: A Bet to Fight For | Part II

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Name: Izzy

Points awarded: 10, can be used for Empathy

Knowledge:
Empathy: Emotional Contradiction
Empathy: Emotional Synesthesia (Taste)
Unarmed Combat: Being Future Oriented
Physics: Matching Speed to Decrease Force
Unarmed Combat: Predicting Offense Based on Defense
Empathy x1

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Determination: A Need to Reign Supreme
Important Advice: Expect the Unexpected
Valmond: A Wise Man of Good Advice

Injuries: Bruised ribs and sore knuckles, be healed up within 7 trials

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level

Notes:
Fine work! Once again, you condense much into only a few thousand words, and tell a compelling story into the bargain. My only critique is that "curving punch" you describe is known as a "hook". That's when the punch comes from the side. A "straight" is when it goes right for your face. The More You Know!

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  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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