The Visitors

The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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The Visitors
Ymiden 2nd 720














Astra Rel Alivilida







The world was wet on this Ymiden trial. Jasper had spent much of the trial at the Citadel spending time meditating and also listening as his fellow Aesir worked to figure out what was going with the blasted rain. Jasper felt a headache coming on but continued towards his small house, and smile on his face and a nod of greeting to all he passed. He had his Grendel cloak pulled up tightly against the rain. Jasper had been busy with the day to day routine of his life recently and he was beginning to feel a bit antsy and the spark in him was saying he needed to go home for a visit, just a quick one.

Jasper was considering it seriously as he came around a bend in the road leading to his house and found himself looking at crowd of people on his door step. The young man’s forehead crinkled in confusion, not because he never had guest. His neighbors were known to swing by and visit him but they also knew his hours. So they wouldn’t be hear this early and if they really needed him would have found him at either the Citadel or the estate. These people had clearly parked on his door waiting for him.

Jasper moved to the side of the road and paused to look more closely at his unexpected guests. He quickly realized that there were only three of them, but also like him they were all in cloaks against the rain. There was something about the cloaks that was familiar. The brown eyes narrowed in focused though and then he realized where it was that he had seen them. He had worn one himself until his mother had presented his with the Grendel cloak. They were a common cloak worn by the citizens of his home Alivilda. They were plain and practical designed to fight the weather not the impress. None of his people would have worn the fancy cloaks he saw around the capital as they would mock the fashion statement.

The young Aesir stepped away from the wall and almost skipped towards his door and waiting guests. As he came closer and his booted feet stomped through the water on the road the three heard him and turned to looked in his direction. It was then that Jasper was pleased to see that they were in dear friends, family even. The closest of the three was none other than his brother Aurelius. Jasper moved across the distance and wrapped his brother in a bear hug. A few years younger then Jasper, Aurelius had the same dark hair and eyes as the rest of the boys and even the same height. His face was handsome and his body trim but he didn’t have the muscular build the rest of the men had. Aurelius calling wasn’t the farm no it was music and story telling and that was what he had spent his free time doing. Aurelius seemed momentarily surprised by the hug and then returned the hug.

“Aurelius it’s about time you came to Raelia.” Jasper said as he held his brother at arm’s length and looked him over. His brother Embla was a series of musical marks that extended from below the ear and down either side of his face to his chin. Jasper was pleased to see him wear them proudly. “We will have to get you into the bard school.”

“How did you know?” Aurelius gasped.

“I have been hinting to mom about it for a while now.” Jasper said and then turned to the next cloaked figure. “Asmund.” He said at also clapped the other man in a bear hug. Asmund was his cousin and had been his childhood best friend. The two were only a couple seasons different in age and had grown up doing everything together. Asmund also had brown hair but his eyes were a gray blue set in a handsome face. He was a bit shorter then Jasper but plenty tall. His embla was symbolic of his choice to work on the farms but also his skill with the blade to protect his family and lands in necessary.

“Asmund your presence here is a wonderful surprise.” Jasper said grinning at his cousin. At this point the third member of the group spoke up.

“Boys, these greetings would be better done inside.” A feminine voice said both cheerfully and impatiently from where she stood next to the locked front door. Jasper’s brown eyes looked up towards the only woman in the group that had come to visit him. It was hard to get really get a good look at her face as she had her hood as far forwards as possible to keep out the rain, but he knew that voice and that tone. It could only be Asmund’s younger sister Astra.

Jasper laughed in good humor as he made his way through the crowd and unlocked the door to him home. He opened the door and held it open for his guest to come into his very simple but homely house. Astra was the first threw and moved far into the room so that everyone would have room to come in. His guest began to remove there cloaks as Jasper closed the door and then quickly moved over to the fire and began to bring the hearth back to life. Once the flames where bright and well Jasper removed his own cloak and hung it by the flames so the heat could dry the rain off. Aurelius and then Asmund handed him there cloaks so they could also dry off.

Jasper then got his first good look at Astra. He had grown up with the young woman and knew her fairly well since he had been in their home many times and given they were part of the same hold many extended family events had brought them in contact with each other. Jasper remembered her being a rather skinny, to skinny actually. Her hair had been nice, but she had a aceny problem last Jasper remembered seeing her.

That wasn’t the case anymore. She had finally filled out so her body now matched her height. Her face had also blossomed as it had promised to for all of those years, and her hair was still as nice as before, and Jasper had to fight the urge to run his hand through it. The young man was finding it hard to remove his gaze from the young woman he had seen all of his life.


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Ymiden 2nd 720














Astra Rel Alivilida







Their eyes meet as Astra handed Jasper her cloak. The connection of his brown eyes and her blue briefly sent a jolt down Jasper’s spine and felt a blush trying to slip over his tanned face. He couldn’t see it but his cheeks did become a bit pink. Astra noticed it and smiled broadly at it. Jasper finished taking the cloak and turned around to hang the cloak up. He took a little longer then normal hang and make sure they were drying out.

Jasper turned around then his check still slightly pink but his smile on his face and his plans laid out. “I am sure you are all hungry.” He said and moved towards the kitchen and dinning room. Aurelius head turned to face his older brother at the mention of food his eyes twinkling with delight.

Asmund kept his expression better under control as he also turned away from his surveying of the room and its simple furniture. He did raise an eyebrow at the mention as Jasper’s body language indicated he was going to prep the food.

Astra caught Jasper specifically not looking back into her eyes and trying to distract with the offer of food. She remained quiet as the group migrated through the room towards the kitchen. The fact that the room could have been transported straight out of any home in Alivilda wasn’t missed by any of the three though there own thoughts about that were each their own.

In the kitchen The visitors found another room that reminded them of home. Aurelius was sure that the pans in the kitchen were the ones there grandma had once used. The room was cleaned but cleaned in the way of someone who had the stuff but didn’t use much of the stuff. Aurelius and Asmund took seat at the kitchen table with Astra looked over the room with a raised eyebrow as Jasper moved towards the pantry. He pulled out a loaf of bread and knife and began to slices the bread into slices. While he had the pantry open Astra glanced in and looked at Jasper. The young man got the feeling that her look in there told her worlds about the way he lived.

Jasper set the bread with some cheese on the table and turned back to the kitchen to try and decided what he had to actually feed guests. He was seriously thinking of maybe a tavern was what was called for.

The tall young man turned around and found Astra rolling up her sleeves and putting on an apron. He raised his hand in protest. “Astra, no your my guest.”

The young woman smiled at Jasper while shaking her head. “I believe we are your unexpected guests.” Astra said and pointed her thumb over her shoulder at the pantry. “And the pantry confirms that.” The young woman said. “So as a thank you I am make sure we all get something decent to eat. And don’t you dare suggest a tavern.” She said as she began to reach into the pantry her back to Jasper and the others. Jasper closed his mouth before his suggestion of the tavern could actually pass his lips.

Jasper felt perturbed for a moment as he watched the pretty young woman as she ruffled through his pantry. He hadn’t intended for her to cook he actually had just wanted to get out of an awkward instanced now found himself in another. He turned and glanced at his other guests. Aurelius was more interested in the bread then what Astra was doing. Asmund has an amused expression on his face as he looked intently into Jasper’s face. The two old friends meet each other’s eyes and there was a silent communication that told Jasper he was alone in regards to Astra.

Jasper’s handsome face took on a defeated look and he turned back to the young woman. “Well let me help” Jasper said he collected the armful of vegetables she pulled out of the pantry. Astra paused and then smiled as she handed them over. The two moved about silently as they began to prepare the food. After a few moments Aurelius spoke up. “So seriously I am here to get up on the bard scene.”

Jasper looked at Astra and Asmund with a raised eyebrow at the grammer structure of the words that had just come out of his brother’s mouth. Asmund just shook his head. Astra leaned closer and said “Some new guy is insisting that this the way the youth speak here in Raelia.”

“Yo I can hear you.” Aurelius said “Shamru is on.....” he didn’t get to finish before Jasper interrupted.

“A power trip.” Jasper said softly but clearly as he dumped the potatoes into the pot. “Two things Aurelius. Raelia is full of contradicting behavior so just because some idiots are doing something doesn’t mean it’s the thing to do. There are enough clowns in town.” Jasper said with a smile and a shake of his head.

“Bro your young in body, but old in the mental.” Aurelius interrupted. Jasper paused, old in mind, and then began to laugh.

“Second point is no one will listen to a bard who talks like that.” Jasper said to a dignity offended Aurelius. He shook his head then. “What do you mean I’m old in mind?” Jasper asked as he continued to cut vegetables. Astra was moving around the pot preparing the stew part as he added the vegetables. Talking with his brother had distracted Jasper from just comfortable it was working in the kitchen with the pretty young woman.

“Bro look at your place. Mom’s would cocoon here with pleasure.” Jasper failed to translate this sentence and looked at Asmund.

“I am guessing it means, settle in, live.” There cousin said his expression not sure.

Jasper dumped the last of the vegetables into the pan. “You don’t know mom very well then.” He said looking around the room. “Not enough color. Dad on the other hand does love the place.” He said his eyes twinkling.

“Eh Jasper it like I am still in Alivilda.” Aurelius said letting his fake speak slip.

“Oh course it is. I like Alivilda.” Jasper said leaning against the wall as his help wasn’t needed anymore. “Brother, Raelia can be wonderful, its full of new things, its busy and exciting. I believe you will enjoy it, but only if you realize its dangers.” Jaspers eyes grew distant as he remembered his first trials here.

“Dangers.” Aurelius asked his voice half mocking and half worried. Jasper sensed more then saw that Asmund and Astra were also focused on him, but they weren’t mocking.


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Jasper sighed as he looked around at his brother and realized this wasn’t going very well. He shook his head and smiled again. “We can talk about that some more, later, Aurelius. Now I am just glad to see all of you.” The young Aesir was indeed pleased to see his kin and really didn’t want to dwell on negative things. Jasper was realizing that his brother was at that point in life where he was particular about the advice, he would take. The young Aesir decided it was best to back off so he didn’t find himself in the same camp as the ‘stupid old people.’ His brother looked at him hesitant but nodded his head accepting the flag of truce

The four of them fell into talking about friends and sharing stories of what had happened since they had all last had a chance to really talk with each other, and before long Astra announced the food was ready. Each of them retrieved a bowl and under the pretty young woman’s gaze was served a generous helping of the hot stew. Jasper did notice that his younger brother was not above enjoying good old fashion home cooked food. The young Aesir realized that in his preoccupation that he was now seated next to Astra.

The conversation continued as the food was finished, and Jasper found himself grinning ear to ear as he shared stories about his time in the city. Finally a lull fell in the conversation and they all looked at each other unsure of what they were going to say next. Jasper was thinking there was still time to take them to see some of the sites of the city when Astra stood up.

“Okay brother, Aurelius can you please clean the dishes. It wouldn’t be fair to just expect Jasper to clean up or mess.” Jasper couldn’t see her face but he could see the two men’s face and they were all clearly trying to hide something. Just then Astra turned to him, her expression calm but her eyes dancing. “Since we drained your pantry Jasper I would be glade to do some shopping, but I am afraid I will need a guide.”

Japer felt his breath catch. That was what he had seen in the other two’s eyes. The young Aesir couldn’t really focus though as Astra and her gaze were bearing into him. There was a challenge in them, and Jasper wasn’t sure he wanted to face that challenge. Yet a part of him wanted to jump right into that challenge. He really couldn’t deny that she was lovely, and he had always like her for her self as they had grown up.

Jasper felt his head nodding in acceptance of the proposal, and felt that his throat was to dry to actually speak. Astra gave him a smile and for a moment he thought he detected a look of relief, but it was gone in a moment and she looked around. Jasper wasn’t sure how he knew what she was looking for but he walked over to the pantry and pulled out a couple heavy duty bags that could be used to carry groceries home. He held them up and Astra nodded. Jasper glanced over and saw Aurelius shaking his head and Asmund looked smugly pleased.

Jasper glared at his cousin who was also one of his childhood friends and mouthed ‘You in for it’ as Jasper obediently followed Astra out of the room. His friend and cousin look seemed to say we was willing to call Jasper’s threat. Aurelius just shook his head as he received the elder brother glare. It was only a moment before the were out of the small house and standing once again in the street’s of Raelia. The two fell into a silent walk as Jasper lead her towards the local market.

They had walked down a couple streets before Jasper found courage and spoke. “Astra." He said hesitantly. She didn’t say anything but looked at him waiting for him to finish as there pace slowed to allow for talking. Jasper barged on. “So I understand why Aurelius is here, but I never did catch what brings you to Raelia.” He said raising his eyebrow and giving her a frank and curious expression.

“I noticed that you didn’t ask about what Asmund is doing here.” Astra said.

“Asmund has visited me before.” Jasper said politely but pointedly. There was an awkward silence and the two walked for a while. The young man stopped then and looked at her.

“I have always cared for you Jasper.” She said and stepped closer and as she came closer Jasper became uncomfortable aware that she was female, and he was male. “Growing up you were fun, but kind. You work hard and cared about your family and friends. Including me. I was never a nuisance even when I was.” She blushed. “You even saw me when I had that really bad blemish problem.”

“Astra I had my own share of awkward phases.” He said focusing on her face.

“Shh.” She said and placed her fingers on his mouth. Jasper raised his eyebrows in surprise but was quiet. “Then you left. I knew that becoming an Aesir was your calling, and that you needed to come here.” She was quiet. “It was hard though. I remember my parents talking about us getting married when we were older. I kind of took that to heart as a child.” She paused and Jasper remembered hearing similar conversations among by his parents. Astra paused as if struggling. “For the past few years I have tried to tell myself it wasn’t going to happen, I tried looking else where, all that happened though was that I kept finding fault with the other guys.” She floundered again. “Then you kept coming back to visit.” She said rather lamely. Jasper took her hand and lowered it from off of his lips and spoke.

“In the end the biggest problem is they just weren’t you Astra.” He said. Astra looked at him her eyes wide.

“Exactly, they just weren’t you Astra, I mean you Jasper.” She said still a bit tongue tied.

“I can’t take you from your home.” Jasper said. “I don’t know if or when I can go back.”

“I am not the little girl hiding in her mothers skirts anymore.” Astra said.

“And I am no longer the little boy who pretended to be a mud monster.” He said remembering the incidents.

“I know. You are the man I imagined.” Astra said. Jasper shook his head.

“No. I am still not him yet, but maybe one trial.” Jasper sighed and holding her hand the two began to walk once again to the market. There was still much to talk about but they had time.


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Knowledge:
Detection: Observing details of a group at a distant.
Detection: Paying attention to peoples motives for a visit.
Detection: Sensing when someone wants to be alone with you.
Discipline: Not lecturing your brother when it won't help
Discipline: Not panicing when unexpected visitors arrive.
Cooking: Making a stew with what you have in the almost bare cupboard.

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Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: You play an Aesir very well in my opinion. I like the way that you set the scene, by describing the unusual rain that Jasper wondered about while he was on his way home where unexpected guests were waiting for him, and how big a part Melrathi culture plays in your threads.

It was quite obvious that Jasper feels very differently about Astra now. I loved how he blushed when their eyes met. Astra was a well-realized NPC in my opinion. I liked how she put an apron on and helped Jasper make a meal, and I thought Jasper’s conversation with Aurelius and Asmund was quite amusing.

I’m curious about the youth of Raelia now, and I wonder how Astra’s and Jasper’s story will continue.

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