Hitting the Mark

Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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Hitting the Mark

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18th Trial of Saun, 720
Underground Fighting Arena

She hadn’t planned to be here, at least not tonight. But loneliness had just grasped its devilish hands on her tent zipper and had begun to draw it down. She did not want to spend another night wide awake with the stars as her only company. She did not want to endure several grueling hours of listless thoughts ambling towards the negative. So she had gathered her things, slung her backpack over her shoulder and made way for the city, carelessly avoiding any pre-planned destination. It was her own two feet that guided her to the building. It looked abandoned from the outside: dilapidated and inhospitable with broken windows and shingles in shambles laying on the ground beside the main door. Even the entrance was hanging on decaying hinges, mould ringing the lintel.

She had stepped through without difficulty and headed for below ground via the stairs. Before she had even made it to the bottom floor, she had heard shouting and cheering. Glass bottles were clinking too, somehow making a form of harmonious music that danced around her head like faeries.

She was already hypnotized by the smell of cheap ale and sweat. There were so many bodies contorted and twisted in a way that screamed for space but was easily denied it. Isodol even found it a challenge maneuvering through the sea of people herself as she tried to scavenge a decent viewpoint.

Her eyes glanced up towards the ring. Two young men were already in its middle, arms and legs melting into one another in a struggle to be the top alpha.

The crowd had seemed to part into their respective sides- each one cheering for the opposite fighter. She couldn’t choose who to cheer for, as she had just arrived, but by the way one man was holding the other, she didn’t have to wait long before predicting who would come out the victor.

She had a goal tonight and her current attire spoke of this goal. She wore cut off pants that reached just above her knees and a haggard shirt with unidentifiable stains. Her hair had been pulled back into a messy pony’s tail and her face was set to a look of determination.

She had so much on her mind; her heart was commanding her to clear her head of these obstructive thoughts so she could think without hindrance. She would do just that, and by doing so she would saunter up those steps to the ring’s center, bump fists with her opponent by way of respect and brawl until the only thing she was able to think about was whether to punch or kick or perform some combination of the two.

The match she had walked in on didn't last much longer. The man Isodol had previously assumed having the upper hand was indeed the one who had his fist raised in the air in triumph. It was the way he had held his adversary, she reflected. His feet were an equal width apart, as though he were riding an imaginary horse. His form was proper, his balance unwavering, as he held the other man from behind. The other man’s footwork was sloppy by comparison, one leg in front of the other but with inadequate space between them. Isodol wouldn’t have been surprised if he had lost by being tripped. Her attention, however, had been elsewhere; trapped deep within her head, searching for ways on how to handle her own forthcoming fight.

There were many practices of martial arts. Some taught fighting with vigor, emphasizing low stances and broad attacks; heavy steps and forceful blows. Other practices encouraged energetic prancing, quick jabs, and preferred defensive measures. Isodol admired the technique of using your opponent’s strength against them. It was the strategy of manipulation that really spoke to her and the very fact of not necessarily getting your hands dirty. Because why would you waste your own energy if you could waste theirs on your behalf?

Tonight she was unsure what techniques she would try. She had never been one to plan in the first place, but had found it smart to do so in situations such as these. There was always the thrill of going in blind, but you could poke an eye out doing that... or something of that nature.
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18th Trial of Saun, 720
Underground Fighting Arena

Isodol strode over to the man who controlled the bets and wagers of coins that exchanged grimy hands. She gave him a curt smile before advising him that it was she who would be up on that ring next, and that she would like to bet a little money on herself.

The man nodded his balding head just as curtly before turning to the next desperate fellow with a gambling addiction.

After she had found a somewhat secure place to stow her belongings, she pitted against the thick swarm of hot bodies until she reached the steps leading into the ring. She noticed the floor was stained a strange hue of crimson and was embellished with some shiny, clear residue; most likely sweat or saliva.

She wasn’t a woman who was particularly swayed by grotesque things, especially germs. As a child she had eaten dirt, licked her own wounds clean, and buried dead animals without proper gloving. But something about looking at that mess made her stomach somersault.

She shook her head, hoping to shake the image from her mind. It wasn’t like the floor hadn’t been covered in similar substances before, and she would surely only add to it once she was finished with her fight.

The ringmaster walked up to her, inquiring of her name. After Isodol gave it to him, he pointed to the far end of the ring to which Isodol promptly shuffled toward. He then walked toward another person who had just taken her first steps onto the ring.

She was somewhat short, and slightly husky, with no definite body shape that would have suggested she were a female had Isodol not seen her face. Her cheekbones were very pronounced, her nose just a little too bird-like, but her facial expressions were very much of a feminine nature. Her hair was cut short into a pixie cut, and it was the colour of caramel. Just looking at it made the rolling of her stomach transform to grumbling. The last thing Isodol observes from her opponent before the ringmaster required her attention was her large, round, chocolate eyes which did nothing more than increase Isodol’s hunger.

She would have to redirect her hunger for food to the hunger for success.

The ringmaster took the center of the fighting arena. He was clad in all black and had an extremely long mustache that curled up at the ends.

He was saying something, but Isodol heard nothing more than the ringing in her ears brought to her by a multitude of emotions. Anticipation, anxiety, anger- they all meshed together to form a ball of energy she gracefully accepted with modest deferential. They were just emotions after all, but she needed to acknowledge them for the sake of the fight and for the sake of her sanity.

Isodol held up her hands so that one was positioned a little further from her face than the other. She only gave a second’s glance to ensure that her midsection was fully covered before she checked her stance. Her front leg was bent at roughly a ninety degree angle, but the associated foot barely touched the floor. She held all her weight in her back leg which was for the most part straight. She widened her stance so that it would be more unlikely for her to fall from being unbalanced.

The ringmaster mouthed a few more words of which Isodol still did not hear, before raising his arm into the air and bucking it out of the middle of the arena.

Her opponent lunged at her the first moment she had. Having all her weight subjected to her back leg, Isodol was able to easily take a step away by moving her front leg so that it was now in back.

Her opponent was agile, that much was clearly noticeable. She often performed leaps and jumps and lunges, taking the form of prancing rather than grounded stances. Isodol wondered if she could use this knowledge to her advantage. Fighters who had their feet rooted in the ground were difficult to off kilter, but those who had only the balls of their feet touching the ground were a different story altogether.

The woman threw a sweeping hook at Isodol. Recalling what she had thought about earlier, she tried her best to retain a purely defensive strategy. She kept retreating, shifting her feet, repositioning her legs, and backing up before regaining her previous position with a fake pump in her adversary’s direction. But this plan was fallible. She would need to make an attack soon or suffer the consequences of going around and around in circles.

Isodol would not take a wholly rooted stance, for fear of being caught and unable to dodge her assailant quick enough. But she would be damned if she were to mirror the stance of her aggressor. With two extremes cut from the list of options, Isodol settled to pick a combination of both stances, such as the one she had before the match began.

The woman was still jumping around, throwing punches left and right. A few got Isodol in the shoulder, and one particular blow landed in her face. This catapulted her backward and into the ropes that wrapped around the perimeter of the ring.

Her eyes were watery, disabling her from seeing clearly. Her opponent would only wait so long for her to stand again. Isodol rubbed her face, and particularly her nose, where she found blood smeared against her bound knuckles.

She frowned, reaching for those initial emotions she had before the match had even started. The anticipation, anxiety, and anger were fueled in the latter and it was all she needed to acquire a boost in her determination to win.

She stood, and as though nothing had happened, resumed her stance. Isodol saw the woman smirk like she already knew who was going to come out on top. Isodol had no such preconceived notions of bringing her desires true.

Her adversary started bouncing again, readying herself for another attack, but Isodol was ready this time. As her opponent threw a punch, Isodol sent a counter strike her way. She had been noticing that the woman never kicked by way of offense, probably because she was always leaping around. As the woman was busy tending to the hit she had been delivered, Isodol used this opportunity to crouch down momentarily to sweep her legs across her body. Her foot sailed through the air before connecting with the calf of her combatant. With the woman already halfway in the air, and her knees slightly bent from her initial lunges toward the sky, it was no extraordinary feat when her disorientation landed her butt first on the unforgiving mat. The mat with so much blood… and sweat.. and saliva; the very mat Isodol had so earnestly wanted to avoid smushing her face against if she could help it.

Isodol took no time in admiring her handy work before she extended her leg with a snap, kicking her opponent right in her undefended midsection. She cried out in pain as she clutched her stomach. A moment later, she indicated with a gesture wanting a timeout, which only meant one thing for Isodol: victory.

She only let her pride engorge her head for the time it took the ringmaster to raise her hand in an illustration of triumph. Once her ten seconds of fame had ceased to be, she hurried over the her opponent and stuck out her hand. The woman obligingly took it as Isodol helped her to her feet.

“Good game,” she said to the woman.

The woman’s vivacious eyes twinkled at her remark. “The same to you,” she replied as the two of them walked off the mat.

As the woman parted ways, and Isodol headed to the bet handler to collect her winnings, she couldn’t help but feel swept up in the endorphins coursing through her veins. She felt alive. She felt free. She felt… happy.

For the time she spent practicing her unarmed combat, her mind had deflated itself of all the incessant, unnecessary, negative things. She felt more than just the proverbial load off her shoulders, she felt weightless not unalike a feather.

But the thing with feathers is when they fall, it’s either from shedding, in which case Isodol could be turning over a new leaf, or by its host’s demise.
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Re: Hitting the Mark

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Isodol:

Knowledge:
Gambling: Betting on Yourself
Unarmed Combat: Observing Fighting Patterns
Unarmed Combat x3
Leadership: Showing Respect Towards Your Opponent

Location: Underground Fighting Arena of Almund, Scalvoris
Reaching Into One's Hostile Emotions
Is that a Bloody Lip I See?

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Bloody lip, pounding headache, sore knuckles, a black eye
Renown: 10, for winning a fight in the underground arena.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: You might have overplayed Isodol's Unarmed skill slightly. Considering that she only has Novice Unarmed, I would have liked to see her struggle a little more before that win.

Points: 10
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Comments: I see that Isodol is gambling again!

I like the way that you described the underground arena, and the subsequent fight was exciting to read and easy to follow. I appreciate how detailed it was.

Enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: I might have added “Discipline” to the list of skills used – and “Endurance” as Isodol was in pain/ dealing with pain.
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