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Scary dreams of murder
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Scary dreams of murder
Last edited by Amaterasu on Tue Dec 08, 2020 5:04 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 11
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Re: Scary dreams of murder

Amaterasu
Experience: 10 no magic xp
Knowledge: none
Renown: none
Skill Usage: None used, this is a non-lucid draem. You listed some skills as being used here, but I'm assuming based on the lack of knowledge claim that this is a non-lucid dream. Please label such dreams as non-lucid in the future. Also, since this is a memory, also make clear in the notes that it's a memory. I almost got confused when I saw it was in Ashan, until I saw the arc.
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Conditions: none
Consequences: none
Comments: You created some ominous and spooky atmosphere here. While I would've liked to hear what the scythe-wielding figure had said to the men before robbing them rather than hear a summary, it's sensible enough given that the story is told from the female character's point of view.
I wonder what the scythe-wielder has in store for the poor protagonist. Probably nothing good
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