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Ymiden 45, Arc 720

In the evening of the 45th of Ymiden, the son of Ziell was sitting at the desk in his study, dressed in comparatively comfortable clothes, reading and working on his research, as he often did. He had finally finished writing his thesis – all there was left for him to do now was wait until the Academy had decided on a date for the defense of the aforementioned thesis – but there was already another matter that occupied his thoughts and begged to be put on paper.

A couple of trials earlier, he had made a blindfold with Balthazar Black’s blood. The magical effect would only be temporary, although the item could be recharged with more blood.

He couldn’t help but wonder why the effect was only temporary whereas items that had been made with reagents from natural sources, such as plants and animals, were permanent – and which factors influenced the duration. The power of the mage in question was without a doubt one of them. It made sense that an item imbued with a powerful mage’s blood lasted longer than something that a recent initiate had donated blood for.

What was the initial reason though? Why did items such as his blindfold need to be recharged? Was it because of the fact that the blood was not being replenished by the body any longer, because it was not fresh – and because it was not in contact with the spark any longer?

Were alchemical items similar to transmuted items in that regard? The items that he imbued with qualities never lasted either, although they deteriorated altogether rather than simply ceasing to function. Ether seemed to be, by its nature, fleeting – although he still struggled to define what ether was in the first place, apart from the cornerstone of all magic, that which had made the wonders that he had seen his mentor create possible in the first place.

Ether was the cornerstone of magic … he cast a glance at the book that he had been reading, a treatise on the arcane, for a moment before he began to take notes quite furiously, almost feverishly in fact, as the thoughts kept on coming, filling the piece of parchment in front of him from top to bottom with his handwriting, as if he were worried that he would run out of space. A few moments later, he grabbed another piece of parchment and continued to write, briefly switching to Cursive, accidentally, and only noticing what had happened when he realized that he didn’t know the correct signs for what he wanted to write.

Ether was the cornerstone of magic … but who had created that cornerstone of magic, and why could he not find anything about it in the Prime Atheneum? Where exactly did magic come from, where did ether come from, who had made ether, were the domains limited in number, or was it possible that there were more than the few domains that were being studied at the Academy? Did his aunt, the Lady Yvithia, know more about it?

As a scientist, the fact that there was so much about magic that people just took for granted bothered him. It wasn’t enough for him to know that magic worked (although being able to use magic was such an amazing thing; magic had changed his life for the better in every single aspect), he wanted to know why it worked. He wished to get to the bottom of things, to analyze, to categorize, to structure, although a part of him was not sure if magic could be categorized and structured, apart form in a very superficial way (the aforementioned domains).

He set his quill down quite abruptly and rubbed his forehead as he could feel the beginnings of a headache and was, perhaps, somewhat frustrated before he glanced at his hand that was still his hand, but different. The strange markings, crimson, like the witchmark that he had received upon his initiation, had begun to spread. He had reached another step in his magical evolution, but was there more to it than met the eye? Why did his Awakenings look like this while his mentor had wings and a halo? Why were no two etherists the same, even though they used the same or similar techniques?

Why were sparks different?
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He was still pondering sparks and the nature of magic, when he heard a knock on the door. When he called out to enter, Olivia, his maid, entered the room and curtsied politely before she remarked, holding up a piece of thick black cloth, “I found this here when I was trying to reorganize the storage room. There was something strange about it. When I accidentally dropped something on it”, she admitted and averted her gaze, blushing slightly, as if she expected to be chided for it. “It made a loud sound, as if it were a piece of stone rather than cloth. I thought it might have ended up there by accident.”

He looked at the cloth for a moment, furrowing his brow slightly, as he tried to remember, before he swiftly rose from his chair in order to take it. “Thank you, Olivia”, he spoke and inclined his head. “I must have misplaced it when I moved here and forgotten all about it. It is one of my older creations”, he explained as he noticed the questioning look on the mortal’s face.

Olivia curtsied again and left the room, and he returned to his desk, cloth in hand. He had imbued it … it had to have been nearly three arcs before. It was fire-proof and hard, as if it were made of stone, and judging by what his servant had told him, the alchemical effect was still intact. Why was it still intact while his blindfold would likely stop working before long though?

He found himself asking the same questions yet again as he examined it. Some of the memories that were connected to the cloth were bitter – he had been a different man back when he had created it - but … the alchemical effect was still intact, and in the end, that was all that really mattered.

It would be a shame to let something like that go to waste and gather dust in a different storage room or in a chest somewhere in his laboratory, especially since some effort had gone into its creation.

He would have something made with it, a new piece of armor maybe, something that would offer him protection when he finally left his icy laboratory again, to research, to explore, to discover. Due to his long life, he possessed extraordinary patience, but he had recently found himself growing restless regardless. His recent visit to Scalvoris had left him with a desire to leave the borders of the city of Viden on a more regular basis once more.

He would … he would visit a tailor himself, or someone that specialized in making armor rather than sending one of his servants so that they would have his exact measurements and because he had a few very specific ideas. He would do so the following trial, he decided as it was already rather late, and the shops would close in approximately another break. For the time being, he wanted to take another look at his research.
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The Mortalborn took the alchemical cloth to a craftsman that promised to make armor with it the following trial, after work. The man told him that it would take a while for him to make it, but that was fine with him. He didn’t need it right now, and he was more than willing to wait as making something in a hurry and on short notice could affect the quality negatively. When the package finally arrived and he took it into his living room and placed it on the table in order to open it, the armor exceeded his expectations by far.

He owned a collection of quite well-made armors and weapons, including Grave Gold, but this was something new. Before him, on the table made of fine dark wood lay a set of padded armor in midnight black, exquisite, well-fitting and masterfully made, quite unlike the type of plain and simple armor that a common soldier might wear. The alchemical cloth that Olivia had found in the storage room served as the quilted outer layer that had been stitched with silver thread in a diamond pattern. It was fastened with half a dozen blackened leather strips and silver clasps, with a collar to protect the neck.

The Mortalborn was by no means exceptionally vain, but he did have a certain interest in the aesthetic aspect and wished to dress elegantly and in clothes made of fine fabrics. He had, very briefly, considered asking the craftsman to make the sleeves of the gambeson that was part of the set of armor removable, but that would likely have had the disadvantage of rendering his armpits more vulnerable, despite the protective properties of the alchemical cloth, and thus he had ultimately decided on something that consisted of a single piece.

It would serve him well either way, he decided, as he let his hands run across it, almost reverently.
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Experience: 10 no magic xp

Knowledge:

Discipline x1
Research (Specialism: Alchemy – Blood Magic): The magical effect is not permanent
Research (Specialism: Alchemy – Blood Magic): Power of the item vs. power of the mage
Research (Specialism: Arcane Theory): Ether is fleeting
Research (Specialism: Arcane Theory): Ether is the cornerstone of magic
Writing x1

Renown: 5 for getting a masterwork item.

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.

Loot/Losses: 1 Masterwork Tier 3 set of padded cloth armor (Qualities: hardened, fireproof); spent 5 wp on the masterwork armor. Deduct from your ledger at your earliest convenience.

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: The fire-proofing on the armor has made the armor very heat-insulative. While this would be ideal in cold climates, keeping him warm in the coldest weather, it does have the unpleasant after-effect of making him perspire after heavy exercise and combat practice. Perhaps a super-absorbent and deodorizing undershirt would be a good investment of his time? It's entirely up to Doran, however.

Comments: Every thread you write about alchemy makes a case for me to take it with my pcs. I guess that's a testament to your passion for this aspect of the roleplay, and just your love of writing a science-oriented character. I hope Doran puts the armor to good use. You made it sound really good.

Great writing and enjoy the rewards!

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