Beginning with the polearm [Memory]

[Hinata]

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[Doran]

Hinata:

Knowledge:
2 Persuasion
1 combat Polearm
2 strength
1 endurance

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: : I found it strange that the man in the apothecary just offered Hinata a job without knowing anything about her, considering that she only has Novice Persuasion.
Points: 10

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Comments: I’m not sure if grass can really get that moist from people’s sweat, but it’s good that Hinata is so focused on her polearm practice. It would have helped if you had specified what kind of polearm she uses though. They are not all the same, and I’m not sure which polearm could be used to cut grass!

I appreciate that you had her note her weapon’s weight either way. The scene with the workers that watched her was amusing, as was the man in the pharmacy chasing her out of the shop with a broom, and the gas potion that she thought of sounded interesting.

It would have helped if you had stated which village this thread takes place in. There are a few different villages mentioned in the link map.

I also noticed that Hinata is only 13 in this thread. It seems a little unlikely to me that the man in the pharmacy would just offer to let a 13-arc-old girl that he has never seen before work for him and hint at being willing to eventually share his knowledge about poisons with her.

P.S.: I might have added “Discipline” to the list of skills used as Hinata cried, but eventually calmed down and continued to practice.