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The Gauthrel Plains reach from the coasts of western Idalos to the very edge of Ne'haer before meeting the forests surrounding Hiladrith. The Fields of Gauthrel can be a dangerous place, one that is home to the most deadliest of creatures. It holds many secrets in the history of the land and may offer rewards to those who choose to journey out into the wild plains. It is best not to wander out alone in these fields. Even caravans have been known to go missing.

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51st of Ymiden, Arc 717

"Alistair of the Northern Realms," he shouted, "we call you to face a trial of blood and bone; to show us that your fangs are as pointed and gnarled as ours, and to make a testament of your valor from the corpses of great beasts." Royand von Sidhe -- Packmaster of the Jegers -- stood upon a stage overlooking what was, really, a small and enclosed pit acting as a coliseum for the viewers above. For one to change their Path, one needed prove their worth to the new. A lifetime of education in a Path could not be overcome by mere will, but only a test.

Alistair claimed to wish to join the Jegers. Though they knew it was only to ensure rehabilitation and treatment for his fallen lover, their procedures remained the same. Outsiders, of either Path or nationality, were treated the same. They would join only by proving their value.

"To test your skill, we have provided for you an appropriate enemy. It is a foe that each and every aspiring Jeger faces, whilst the boys built and educated for our cause face this particular foe as a final test to secure their membership. This enemy, proud and strong, is a signification of one's elite capability. We unveil him, now," the Jeger commanded. With his words and a following gesture, that of a hand risen with fingers pointing to the ceiling, the foe was unleashed.

It was... a voluminous, purple-tinted gas, filling the pit and consuming Alistair's space. The mage began to cough, and before long, he began to wheeze. Moments later, he was on the ground, his Terrendyte spear laid quietly beside his motionless body.

. . .

Breaks later, he awoke, laying among dirt on the forest floor. He was stripped of any armor, allowed only a wooden spear with a steel tip, and given a loincloth that barely made it to his knees. His feet were bare, his chest and arms free of any obstruction. Alistair was stripped to that of a savage. How had they managed to do this, he wondered? How long had he been gone?

As he began to observe his surroundings, an arrow flew past him, nearly slicing through his cheek. The mage recoiled, immediately stepping backward in a firm motion and gripping his pointed weapon, turning at every angle and seeking the point of the arrow's origin. He could not see any man, or any foe. He only heard a humming, and then a howl - one that sounded like no wolf he'd ever known. It more closely resembled a vile, guttural wail from a man with an incredible chord.

He followed the sound, stepping cautiously through the forest, alert to even the most singular of crushed branches or shifting of the leaves.
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Another arrow. This one nearly got him right between the eyes, but he improvised. With reflexes he didn't know he had, the shaft of Alistair's spear quickly rose upward to butt away the arrow, breaking the haft with a smack of the wood. How did he do that? There was no way a man, without magic or divine intervention, could react with such speed. Did he even react with speed at all? That arrow felt so... slow. As if it were weighty.

Looking down to his side, he realized that the arrow was slow after all, because it was not an arrow of wood and steel - but of an incredibly thick terrendyte head, capable of ripping through his body within instants of arriving against the outer layers of his flesh. The mage bit his lip. One of those arrows impaling him, or even phasing him, meant death. And there were more.

Another came from the distance, between the leaves. It flew slowly like the other one, and with a maneuver of his feet, he twirled past it. It was reactive -- he'd done so with memory of Keanu in his head, his acrobatics and polearms master. Move your feet, he whispered to himself. Always be fluid, always be mobile. While the previous arrow had invoked a well-timed twirl, the next didn't invoke anything impressive. He flew beneath it, throwing his head down as it shot past him. Then, the arrows and their pace grew faster. He side-stepped one, and twirled back to avoid the other. Be an acrobat.

Following the twirl, he lowered himself, then spun on his side and disappeared into the brush. Still, the arrows continued to come. The mage started to run, and for a time it worked. He ducked, he maneuvered, he strafed and he pulled himself back just in time for shots to run through his body. Then, he realized that he was getting nowhere. As fast as he dodged, more came, seemingly infinite in number. He needed take backsteps to dodge just as often as forward ones, and eventually, he'd fail and die.

There was magic, but something... something told him not to use that here. Not to 'cheat'. He wanted to surpass this test as a man alone, not a mage.

So he remembered Keanu's move - the spinning parry. Rotate the spear incredibly fast between the fingers, like a mill. Catch incoming attacks, parry them, recoil them. He said it could even work to shield from arrows, if one timed it right. They could adjust the spin, slow it down, speed it up. It was a key move of Shadowdancing, and one he needed to learn to master.

So... he tried. He began to twirl the spear, and it picked up speed, eventually blurring as it rotated between his nimble fingers. Alistair was impressed with himself; the spear had managed to swat away two arrows in its spin, and more would soon come.

Until they weren't. Apparently, even against the weighted Terrendyte arrows, such a technique was unreliable against the speed of ranged projectiles. The spear failed, despite its spinning, to swat away one of the arrows - and it landed directly through Alistair's shoulder, ripping through and taking both muscle and skin with it. It did not lodge inside or fracture in his body, but instead rip clean through his shoulder, eviscerating him.

The mage screamed in agony, and clenched his shoulder.
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At that moment, he cursed to himself. Why had they given him such an impossible challenge? One could not dodge, parry or deflect arrows, not for long. Even with the inferior speed at which they were propelled, a man was just a man. Was this evidence of some sort of reflexive Lotharen superiority? No. Most of them appeared to have similar reflexes to that of mankind -- so how did they defeat this adversary? Was this not the standard among Jegers?

And then he realized -- strength was not always the answer. Sometimes, it was tactics, intellect. Observing the battlefield, understanding the reality and accepting the odds. Working around it. This forest was not an insurmountable terrain, but it was thick. There were many places to hide, and get lost among brush and bark. He needed only disappear, find the enemy, defeat them. Why was he attempting to physically maneuver to the man, subjecting himself to a volley?

When the thought hit him, he quickly ushered himself back into the treeline, narrowly avoiding an arrow without even fully realizing it.

Alistair, blood leaking from his torn shoulder, clenched his skin and applied pressure with his palm. The only issue was, it was more of a hole than a gash, and blood was leaking from both sides. This wouldn't work. No -- there was no alternative. Stripping himself entirely bare of clothing, he fashioned the loincloth into a makeshift bandage, and wrapped the thick cloth around his gaping shoulder wound. Holding some of the cloth with his teeth as he tied it all together with one limp hand and one dexterous, the mage successfully bandaged himself. He now stood nude among the leaves, though embarrassing as that was, he didn't really care.

He maneuvered through the forest, and curved his path to where he knew the arrows had come from. Just as he began to do so, a man swiped down from the trees, blade slicing through Alistair's spearhandle as he attempted to block. The mage took a shallow scrape to his chest from the sword, and tossed the spear at his foe before lowering himself, leaning onto his side and throwing his weight into a sweep of his legs, attempting to kick at the man's kneecaps viciously and throw him off balance. He did so, effectively, and leaped onto the cloaked enemy.

He removed his hood and mask, and unveiled a surprising result. It was a collection of Tunawas, dozens of them stacked together to form a convincing man. It was an old woman, who courteously smiled before commanding the mage to 'get the fuck off', in a broken Common laced with a thick Rakahi accent.

"Mah aft, jekk shor en val!" she yelled. Ganren's son emerged into view, and nodded at the woman.

"Odd fellow, you are," the man stated. "Attempting to directly confront and pursue the bowman, despite knowing the piercing power of Terrendyte and her skill and accuracy with the bow. You did well - incredibly so, in fact. Your acrobatic maneuvers were an inspiration to us all. Unfortunately, however, you got hit," he pointed out. "Twice, actually. There's a bleeding scrape over your chest. Against monsters, that wouldn't do. Those wounds would get infected, fester. You'd be a detriment to your team. You excel as a mage -- I can tell that about you. But you fail as a hunter. You're good, even great... as a warrior. But we want more than someone with incredible, raw skill. We want someone with the ability to maneuver the fields, to hunt and track, to outsmart and overwhelm their foe. To be able to face each and every challenge with a mindset that understands that each fight could be their last."

He shook his head, and as his thumb rose, his hand rotated so that his singular thumb pointed at the grass.

"That is not you. It's good that you didn't abuse magic to get your way, but I can see that magic has made you arrogant. You thought you could come out of all that effortlessly, with no danger to your body. Your look when shot was one of surprise -- that sort of thing almost never happens to you," he stated, shaking his head.

"It will happen a lot in Gauthrel, and worse. When you understand that, you can be one of ours. Until then... you are considered a trainee. You can use the fort as an outpost, and may sleep with the other apprentices. I'll even let you help us operate on that lover of yours. But that... is all."

Royand, after that incredible rejection, turned his back from the mage and began to walk. The woman followed behind him, whilst Alistair was beckoned to follow in order to receive the equipment and possessions they'd stripped from him. He followed them and re-acquired what he'd lost in the physical sense, but mentally, the mage was astounded by his failure. Alistair never failed at anything - not in a way that anyone else wouldn't have, anyway. This was shocking. He actually failed the Jeger initiation test.

Didn't twelve arc olds pass this test?

Flummery fuck.
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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 0/5 (solo)
Structure: 5/5

Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear- Spinning Parry
Polearms: Spear - Striking Apart an Arrow
Polearms: Spear - Overhead Block
Acrobatics: Gentle Dodges
Acrobatics: Twirling Around Projectiles
Acrobatics: Persistent Evasion

Loot: None
Injuries: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Magic: These points may NOT be used for Arcana

Comment: Awesome thread, Alistair! I can't believe they failed Alistair even though he won the fight, what a bunch of dicks! Use this knowledge to get strong and get even!
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Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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