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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Yarofko Napping
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Training: Yarofko: A large porcine creature that can be trained as a draft animal or mount.
Animal Training: Pigs will eat just about anything.
Animal Training: Enticing a creature with food.
Animal Training: Making physical contact can build trust.
Poisoning: Sleeping poison in food to capture an animal.
Strength: Working the lower thighs by crouching as you bear a load.

Loot: +1 Untrained Yarofko
Injuries/Overstepping: A bit of exhaustion
Renown: +5 for employing a hunter and capturing a large boar.
Wealth Points: will apply for saun weatlh thread (n/a)
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: nope
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: The Fire Shines Bright
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Talks of humanity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sybil
Psychology: Dreamscapes are made by the mind
Psychology: Dreamscapes are altered by the mind
Psychology: The mind forces the psyche into roles to make sense of chaos
Psychology: It's possible for a person to be defeated over a flaw
Psychology: The mind is a mush of chaos, stereotypes, and beliefs
Psychology: Shifting mentalities through dreams is a hard undertaking
Discipline: Not getting frustrated at changing a dream's mind
Discipline: Calmly performing a DW brand on someone
Discipline: Sometimes the best response, is not emotional
Discipline: One's own mind can be its saboteur
Discipline: Staying calm after a failed argument

Nonskill: (Wald) branded by Sybil
Nonskill: (Sybil) branded Wald
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 1. Birds of a Different Feather
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Part 1 of a plot that I got the go ahead for Maltruism for.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Detection: Feathered Friend: Listening to your friend's thoughts and emotional signals.
Detection: Noticing a familiar thrall of his grandfather's.
Detection: Looking at one's reflection, and seeing that it wasn't really you.
Detection: Feathered Friend: Making out details through your familiar's description of indivduals.
Flying: Flying well above the clouds.
Meditation: A calm mental process is needed to transform back to your true form.

Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Branding
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Torture? kinda?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Branding
Endurance: Cooked Flesh
Endurance: Kick in the side
Resistance: Hot metal
Resistance: Fire Branding
Resistance: Poor food

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Slave Brand on left shoulder
Renown:
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Leaky Tap
City/Area: Raellia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nope


Requested Rewards:

Alora
Knowledge:
Smithing: Smithing isn't all about making weapons.
Smithing: Smithing isn't all about making armor.
Smithing: Smithing and metalwork are a cornerstone of civilization.
Smithing: Minor tools that are taken for granted, are thanks to smithing.
Smithing: Pig iron collects at the bottom of a blast furnace.
Endurance: Enduring the heat of the forge, while dealing with customers.
Strength: Manipulating a complex object in one hand.
Strength: One-handed grip on a broom.
Loot: 1 Free Drink per trial at The Ox's Bellow Tavern so long as she is working at this particular smithy.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, for helping a businessman and having a startling face
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

Soren
Knowledge:
Business Management: Business Deal with Goran Johannson's
Business Management: Keeping a starting routine
Business Management: Doing work yourself before employees arrive
Intelligence - Contact: Alora, the demoness smithy apprentice
Intelligence - Contact: Goran Johannson, the master smithy
Negotiation: Putting a person off balance before bartering
Negotiation: Starting with an outrageous offer
Negotiation: Finishing with a fair offer for everyone

Loot: Business agreement with Goran Johannson's smithy
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for being an upstanding businessman
Wealth Points: N/A, though this does count as his Wealth Thread for Saun 719
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bird is the Word
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: Kalortah chicken winged on Korva again.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Flying: Room is needed sometimes to take off.
Flying: Catching a wind and letting it blow you away.
Linguistics: Avrielic Script: Written in columns.
Meditation: Enduring the presence of lessers with a calm demeanor.
Meditation: Listening to two or more conversations at the same time takes concentration.
Meditation: Dealing with multiple questions at once.
Meditation: Failure to concentrate can teach you a thing or two about multi-tasking.
Socialization: Korva: An annoyingly cute apefish.
Socialization: Ashan: Korva's daughter. Nice girl.
Socialization: Turning the tables on the conversation's direction.

Loot: -2 feathers left behind for Korva and her daughter.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Dula
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=326&t=19726 Roll Away the Dew
City/Area: Desnind, Tosibeere
Notes/Warnings: Training thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Rakvald:
Strength: Bellowing kiai can improve your striking power.
Strength: Strike hard
Strength: The strong take no mercy on the weak.
Strength: Shouting projects strength.
Strength: Knocking a stick out of the way, while it’s being held firmly.
Staff: Proper stance is balanced, straight in the back and ready to strike back.
Endurance: Taking a whack on the hip.
Endurance: Getting thwapped on the shoulder.
Endurance: Falling on his rear end with all his weight.
Endurance: Wading through water up to your chest is exhausting.

Dula:
Pan flute: Song: "Forever Grateful"
Weapon: Staff: Warm ups that increase hand eye coordination
Weapon: Staff: Twirl the staff by rolling the wrist
Weapon: Staff: Stance must have a straight back
Weapon: Staff: Overhead swing
Weapon: Staff: Heightened emotions are good for taking out on the staff
Weapon: Staff: Unsuccessful blocks leave them open for strike
Weapon: Staff: “Kiai” increases power and intimidates opponents
Endurance: Warm ups make you more hardy
Endurance: Performing under pressure
Strength: Striking with a staff
Strength: Hitting hard
General: Rakvald: Endearing, extremely large, clumsy man
General: Rakvald: Directions to his pig farm

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes for being the privy of a crowd
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Chef out of the Kitchen
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking: Technique; Roasting is a dry heat cooking method where hot air envelops the food, and cooking it evenly on all sides. Temperatures of at least 150 °C (300 °F) from an open flame or oven are required in this cooking method. Roasting food can enhance flavor through caramelization and browning on the surface of the food.

Cooking: Technique; Grilling is a cooking method that involves dry heat applied to the surface of food. It usually involves a significant amount of direct, radiant heat, and is usually used for cooking meat and vegetables quickly.

Cooking: Technique; Broiling is a dry heat method that is very similar to grilling. Both grilling and broiling involve intense direct heat. The difference between them is that when grilling, the heat source is below the food being cooked, but it broiling, it is above the food.

Hunting: Caracal; caracals hunt by ambush; they quietly stalk their prey as closely as possible and then rely on a direct pounce, leap, or short run to catch it.
Hunting: Caracal; caracals are good at acrobatics; they use their agile leaping and climbing ability to catch their prey in rocks and from the air.
Hunting: Caracal; goes much better when you give yourself over to your instincts completely

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: The Wilderness of the Mind Pt 3
City/Area:
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Yrmellyn

Skill Knowledge
Psychology: Expanding your mind by a dose of Etherglow mushrooms
Psychology: Gaining new insights about hitherto unknown aspects of yourself
Psychology: Winning an encounter with your inner shadow
Psychology: Finding resolution and tenacity in yourself under pressure
Psychology: Understanding how your life experiences have shaped you
Discipline: Not ranting at your friend to get an outlet for anger at other things

Non Skill Knowledge:
Domain Magic: Slow and cautious development of magic improves your control of it
Domain Magic: Realizing that the spark is a mages true life-partner, living in symbiosis with them
Enriched Impressions (Mutation): Can almost serve as replacement for dreaming
Enriched Impressions (Mutation): An art installation in your mind, created by your spark
Physical Effort: Running: Running away from a swarm of wasps
Physical Effort: Running at top speed
Physical Effort: Running while carrying a heavy backpack
Physical Effort: Running on uneven forest ground
Physical Effort: Running despite pain, head-ache, nausea and strained breathing
Nature: The cold and damp of the early summer mornings
Nature: Living on the conditions of nature
Nature: Nature’s beauty doesn’t mean it’s trouble-free
Wasps: Ground-dwelling wasps make their home in the soil
Wasps: Wasps are small but can be dangerous
Wasps: Wasp stings are more poisonous and painful than bee-stings
Wasps: Wasp stings can cause strong reactions and even kill people
Wasps: Wasp stings causes swells
Wasps: Wasp stingers left in the swells must be picked away


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore bumps after wasp stings
Collaboration: No

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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: The Man without a Plan
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Flashbacks, frank speak, mild violence

Vlooo
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Disguise- Matching current Fashion to blend in
Tactics- Finding a seat with a good view of your target
Storytelling - A story needs a moral/lesson
Discipline - Keeping your attention focused on the task while holding a conversation
Etiquette - Finishing a toast
Etiquette- Finish the first bottle before opening the second
Pickpocketing - Snatching an untended bottle of wine
Blades (Daggers): Easily concealed in a sleeve for a quick, unnoticed strike
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

Soren
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence - Contact: Valyria, an assassin in Andaris (Vluharqih, unknown)
Linguistics (Ulehi): The sound for the word 'no'
Mixology: The Taste of Ashan's Twilight (White Wine)
Mixology: The Taste of Vithella (Red Wine)
Mixology: The Taste of Low Hanging Zimoni (Red Wine)
Resistance: Tolerance to Low Hanging Zimoni (Red Wine)
Resistance: Tolerance to Vithella (Red Wine)
Resistance: Tolerance to Ashan's Twilight (White Wine)
Storytelling: The Tale of the Girl at Zuroni's Animal Sanctuary
Storytelling: The Death of Valyeria's Friend
Storytelling: That Time I Had Dinner with an Assassin in Andaris
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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