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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Studying the Arcane, Part 1
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Boring study thread in which Doran researches domain magic. I talked to Maltruism. He told me to request the Knowledges below as Skill Knowledges, but as Alchemy rather than Empathy Knowledges. Doran is trying to replicate domain magic abilities with alchemy rather than actually using magic.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Empathy: Strum: Temporarily brings an emotion to the top of the Tangle
Alchemy: Empathy: Strum: Fairly easily dispelled
Alchemy: Empathy: Strum: Works on the Empath as well as on others
Alchemy: Empathy: Strum: More like a suggestion than an imperative
Alchemy: Empathy: Strum: Can be incredibly powerful in the hands of a Master Empath
Research: Familiarizing yourself with your research topic

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Dizzy, My Head is Spinning
City/Area: Southern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Mature Memory thread. Slavery. Sexual themes. Some violence. Suggested references to abuse.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Very loud noises
Endurance: Standing for breaks
Endurance: Onset of a panic attack
Endurance: Witnessing the execution of another slave
Discipline: Keeping your voice down
Discipline: Pouring wine for drunk guests

Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Whip It
City/Area: Ne'haer area.
Notes/Warnings: Part of an ongoing narrative for Woe. also some violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Acting: Pretending to be husband and wife.
[*]Persuasion: Nels can talk.
[*]Stealth: Sneaking around a carriage.
[*]Whip: When a problem comes along, you must whip it!
[*]Whip: Before the cream sits out to long, you must whip it!
[*]Whip: When something's going wrong, you must whip it!
Loot/Losses: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: -1 for bribe
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Innocent village stroll
City/Area: melrath
Notes/Warnings: The time item used is an item Abra's already paid for with pointbank points. this is just a short story on how he encounters and obtains it.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Intimidation: Looking taller won’t do much against someone who towers over you
Detection: Spotting something shiny sticking out of the ground
Acrobatics: Dodging thrown fruits
Persuasion: Empty threats need deception and intimidation to work out
Deception: Bluffing potential consequences
Tactics: When in doubt, wear them out

Loot/Losses: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably not
Renown: 5-10 for helping stop the bully
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.9 Risks Are All I Take
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: mild violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*] Unarmed Combat: Footwork while intoxicated.
[*] Unarmed Combat: Inebriated accuracy.
[*] Unarmed Combat: Fighting Dirty.
[*] Unarmed Combat: Tripping a man over.
[*] Unarmed Combat: Catching a leg mid-kick.
[*] Detection: Suspicious Behavior.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Hurt jaw, twisted ankle, various others - up to reviewer.
Renown: +10, viciously brawling in a main street.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.10 Night After Next
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: follow-up to previous solo.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*] Seduction: Corsets show off the girls.
[*] Seduction: A well-placed pendant draws the eye.
[*] Seduction: Awkward flirting.
[*] Seduction: Using jewelry to look sexy.
[*] Seduction: Daring dresses.
[*] Etiquette: Bow/Curtsy

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: injuries given in last solo.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.11 The Lonely Mark
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mature, references to prostitution.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
Skill:
[*] Intelligence: Underground Organizations in Etzos.
[*] Intelligence: Prostitutes can make great contacts.
[*] Intelligence - Location: The Lonely Mark tavern and brothel (Northwest OP, Etzos).
[*] Intelligence: What happened in the past can inform the present.
[*] Acrobatics: Stretching exercises.
[*] Acrobatics: Backbend poses.

Non-Skill:
Etzos: Underground and their spheres of influence.
Etzos: Underground members.
Etzos: Underground gangs and their contentions with each other.
Etzos: Outer Perimeter’s Underground.
Layout: Etzos (Outer Perimeter).
Etzos: Outer Perimeter.
Etzos: Prince of Eternal Mercies, Warlord of North Etzos.
NPC - Bangun Vorund: Gang Lord and Crime Boss of South Etzos
NPC - Vorund: Ruthless but was accepted.
NPC - Vorund: Out of the picture; Killed.
Kasoria: Also known as Vorund’s Hound.
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 for recognition in being a repeat client and such.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Flay Crazy
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings: bloody combat. previous thread here: viewtopic.php?f=416&t=20224

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: Flaying lets you use a lot of ether without overstepping
Running: Avoiding roots when running through a forest
Endurance: Learning to temporarily push through even when fatigued
Endurance: Getting shot in the calf
Endurance: A graze isn’t debilitating
Endurance: Keep weight off an injured leg to last longer

Loot: A thirst diamond in the shape of a heart, tier 7 longbow to be sold for WP later.
Injuries/Overstepping: arrow punctures and grazes. Thirst grows. I don't know if he overstepped since he flayed twice in the same day to fuel the spells.
Renown: 10-15 for defending melrath over two threads. Saved a life.
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Glassy Fun
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Glassblowing: Guide the glass to alter its shape
Glassblowing: A smith’s furnace is plenty hot enough
Glassblowing: Creating a shuriken
Thrown (Shuriken): Glass shuriken tend to break on impact
Thrown (Shuriken): Lighter materials are affected by the wind more
Thrown (Shuriken): A sharper shuriken cuts through the air easier

Loot: 10 glass shuriken of average quality
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: 5 for giving a girl a glassblown dove for free. she went to show it off.
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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